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Chapter Two: Ψ-B (Psi-Beta): I've been dead for a while I walked into the other door and I was greeted by six different people. One of them, in a pristine white lab coat motioned for me to go in. The room was simple, white walls and floor. A grav-couch was against the left wall with a...

I was sure I stated this in the first chapter. a.)You're right, I should change that. (No sarcasm, I'm being sincere.) Though the reason why I typed that is because some of the inherent childishness caused by being a 13 year old somehow manages to slip into my work. b.)I will have to...

Add to my previous list. RTS Gamers who constantly spam superweapons (examples of which are the CnC: Generals Nukes, Particle Cannons, and SCUD Storms) then call out hax when I destroy even a single powerplant, or their entire power grid with my airstrikes. And those who constantly tank...

You do realize that not all minors act like pricks. I am 13 years old actually. But I never greed TK, or grudge TK or etc... Personally, the breed I hate the most are those who call out "Hax" or "cheater" when you give them a slug to the face. Second only to cheaters and hackers. And before...

I pirate games, only to try them out. If I like it, I'll buy it. And that's how I've been going since I started. There's no such thing as pirated games here in the Philippines!

Though Hubnesterium is an alloy, which is usually used for armor on military starships in the Confederacy of United Suns (which is the faction the CEMSTAD is based in), veering from that point, their weapons usually particle projectors and antimatter beams, bolts and torpedoes. And their...

Okay, well, I am planning to use the suppsoed unoriginality to make the original ideas stand out more from the unoriginal. And I will also address the following in the quote: a.)Psi powers, yes. That won't be the main plot centerpoint b.)Black Ops are standard in the Confederacy (which is the...

It's the dialogue then. So what exactly is wrong with the dialogue? And how do I improve it?

The mood will change though, it will be slightly different, or completely different depending on the chapter. It must be the dialogue.

Chapter One: Ψ-Α (Psi-Alpha) Pain, a blinding white light, and the sensation of floating in a liquid. That was what I felt, waking up in a strange tube. I shut my eyes again, listening to the pumps cycling and the valves regulating my air supply open and shut. I tried to move my...

Roost Class Carrier -Basically a modified Adarna Class Cruiser Hull, those white things sticking out of the circular sections are modded Vulcan Cannons. Adarna Class Cruiser Those white bumps are modded Vulcan Cannons.

Hawk Class Antimatter Destroyer (Description and Info pending) Kingfisher Class Light Frigate Length: 560 Meters Width: 210 Meters Height: 50 Meters Displacement: 8900 Tons Manufacturer: Dyson Shipyards Sponsors: Makayev-Energia Space Systems (Missiles) Aquataine Engineering...

Loosing power just before you funish a uber-awesum ship in Battleships Forever, on which I worked on for the entire day, and the night before that. It happened to me once, the power went out as I pressed the save shortcut key. And in my view, a ship isn't finished until the final save is...

I Turn to You - Machinae Supremacy aka. Hubnester.

Say, Aidan. Some of those ships look kinda like some of mine. Inspired?