Solomon sighed walking over to a chair. He broke off a leg and placed his hand on it. Sparks flew out of his hand and the wood ignited. "Electricity tends to stay in the body" murdered Solomon absent mindedly. "Lead the way" sighed Solomon looking at Cyrus.
Solomon jolted awake falling off of Cyrus's shoulder. He looked around uncertainty and then back to Cyrus. "Where are we?" said Solomon taking off the ring and placing it in his pocket. Solomon really wasn't in the mood to fight.
OOC:
Okay I'm not naming anyone in particular and I'm not complaining but here are a few tips to make your writing easier to read:
Make sure to put in full stops. Some of your paragraphs go on for ever without even one full stop.
Whenever your using the letter I by itself, you have to...
OOC:
Feel free to make a plot twist at any time! Also Spector, you should make something happen that forces me, Rose, David and Cyrus to work together!
David, you can't justify these abilities just because "Sherlock Holmes did it" or "Ocelot from Metal gear Solid did it" or "Chuck Norris did it". You can't just use all of these abilities because you saw them in a movie!
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