Gripes:
1) Try not to mumble so much.
2) Work on your recoil.
3) "Is that some sort of... future version of the F-word or something?" "No, but this diving board is really interesting, so I'm going to look at it.
4) "What's that smell?" "Cotton candy." "You mean like the smell of the dead guy at our feet?"
5) "Woah, that gun just knocked him on arse! I bet this aluminium snow shovel Can deflect the bullets."
6) "I have a knife. Instead of stabbing the conscious and able bodied guy, I'll try and strangle him, and save my knife for the guy who's having trouble breathing."
7) "I can speak, but I'm not going to warn my companion about the creepy mask wearer sneaking up behind him."
8) "I just put a bullet through this mask, and painted the inside of it with the demon's blood. I think I'll wear it."
I really like this series, but there's so many niggling little *insert correct term here* that form a giant wave of discontentment.
You've stated the next episodes pick up the ball, so I'm eagerly awaiting them.