Creepy story, could be true. Either way still cool.

daveman247

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Story i found while browsing the internets:

Source: http://www.fark.com/comments/3985541/45887207#c45887207


Story: I was driving a shortcut from Twentynine Palms, CA to Albuquerque, NM. Twentynine Palms is located in the desolate high desert east of LA. The shortcut was all two lane road through total nothingness, except for passing through Amboy, CA. Amboy is a nearly abandoned town nearly as far below sea level as Death Valley, with a dormant volcano and lava field on one side and a salt flat on the other. It was also, at the time, a hotspot for satanic group activity.

So I was driving by myself in the afternoon. I stopped in Amboy and snapped a picture of the city sign, just to prove I was there to friends who dared me to take that route to I-40. I got back in my car and proceeded to drive up into the mountain range between Amboy and I-40.

Once I reach the top I am driving north through a canyon with high grass on both sides of the road. Up ahead I see some stuff in the middle of the road. As I approach I slow down to see a red Pontiac Fiero stopped sideways across both lanes, a suitcase open with clothes scattered everywhere and two bodies laying face down in the road, a man and a woman.

I stop a hundred feet or so away and the hair on the back of my neck is standing up. Being a Marine, I reach under the seat and pull out a 9mm pistol and chamber a round. Something seemed very wrong, it looked too perfect as if it were staged. An ambush? Was I being paranoid? Something was just wrong. Getting out of the car seemed unthinkable, it was the horror movie move.

As I scanned the road I saw a line I could drive. Pass the guy in the road on his left, swerve to the right side of the woman, behind the Fiero and I'd be on the other side. I dropped it into first gear, punched it and drove the line I planned.

I passed the back of the Fierro without hitting it or either of the bodies in the road. I continued forward a couple hundred feet and slowed down so I could breathe and let my heart slow down. As I looked up into the rearview mirror I saw that the two bodies had gotten up to their knees and twenty or so people emerged from the tall grass on either side of the road by the car and bodies.

At that moment my right foot smashed the gas pedal to the floor and did not let up until I had to slowdown for the I-40 east onramp.

I will never know what would have happened to me had I gotten out of the car to check on the bodies or stopped my car closer to them. Somehow I do not think it would have been good. Sometimes real life can be scarier than a movie.
 

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Nice story, pretty short.

Anyway, for discussion value, I say it's to post some maybe-true but scary stories. Here's a longer one that holds a special place in my heart: http://www.angelfire.com/trek/caver/page1.html
 
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I dunno if I believe that story, but holy cow was it entertaining.

And if it IS real? That man can probably shave a good year off his life expectancy. That sounds scary as hell.

daveman247 said:
Getting out of the car seemed unthinkable, it was the horror movie move.
This man is smart. No doubt about it. Only a moron or a horror movie character would have gotten out.
 

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aegix drakan said:
Exactly. There is no supernatural here. It could EASILY have been real. Good story all round :)

Plus mentioned the satanist thing at the beginning gave it a real "oh shit" reaction :)


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I heard that story on the RT podcast yesterday and my reaction was simply this. That phenomenon has a name and has been documented. It's called Hills Have Eyes
 

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Just found this list of 10 horror films inspired by real events. The story that inspired Child's Play is creepy.
http://www.toptenz.net/top-10-real-events-that-inspired-scary-movies.php
 

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aegix drakan said:
daveman247 said:
Getting out of the car seemed unthinkable, it was the horror movie move.
This man is smart. No doubt about it. Only a moron or a horror movie character would have gotten out.
Why? He could have at least called the police. The longer the bodies stay there like that, the greater the chance that important evidence will be lost. The idea that the murderer is just hanging around the bodies waiting for the next victim is far more ridiculous. Something like that would only ever happen in a horror movie.
 

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TheYellowCellPhone said:
Nice story, pretty short.

Anyway, for discussion value, I say it's to post some maybe-true but scary stories. Here's a longer one that holds a special place in my heart: http://www.angelfire.com/trek/caver/page1.html
The story is good, kept me reading in the hope of a payoff. But it never came! most disappointing :(
 

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g-SL4ejpP94

This is one of my favorite "could be real" stories. Now let me say right off the bat, I know this story is not real. It was a well written and well done short film, but I love showing this to people and watch their reactions out of the corner of my eye.

Even if you know it's fake (which...I guess you do 'cause I just ruined it for you...sorry) I seriously recommend watching it. It's a great video.
 

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TheYellowCellPhone said:
Nice story, pretty short.

Anyway, for discussion value, I say it's to post some maybe-true but scary stories. Here's a longer one that holds a special place in my heart: http://www.angelfire.com/trek/caver/page1.html
Does it just stop at Page 10? I can't seem to go any further.

EDIT: Damn it a cliff hanger >.>.
 

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Christopher Bocanegra said:
http://www.creepypasta.com/

Sweet dreams my friends.
My exact reaction to this was "geez, almost sounds like the set up to a very detailed creepypasta"

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manic_depressive13 said:
aegix drakan said:
daveman247 said:
Getting out of the car seemed unthinkable, it was the horror movie move.
This man is smart. No doubt about it. Only a moron or a horror movie character would have gotten out.
Why? He could have at least called the police. The longer the bodies stay there like that, the greater the chance that important evidence will be lost. The idea that the murderer is just hanging around the bodies waiting for the next victim is far more ridiculous. Something like that would only ever happen in a horror movie.
Well, he comes across an apparently wrecked car and two bodies with signs of ambush. He's a Marine so he's got that "spideysense" we tend to develop and it just didn't feel right, especially since the area is known for trouble. It's a lot smarter for him to keep driving and call it in at the next phone he sees, or just get down the road a mile or two and use his cell if he has one.
 

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And what the protagonist never mentions was the ninety different drugs he took that night and was later arrested on the account of this.

StarCecil said:
Well, he comes across an apparently wrecked car and two bodies with signs of ambush. He's a Marine so he's got that "spideysense" we tend to develop and it just didn't feel right, especially since the area is known for trouble. It's a lot smarter for him to keep driving and call it in at the next phone he sees, or just get down the road a mile or two and use his cell if he has one.
Don't you mean common sense? As far as I know, we don't exactly have a "Spidey Sense" that is accurate, in fact, its usually very in-accurate. I'm only saddened that he didn't automatically drop a Bonny-and-Clyde* reference.
[small]*Woops, its not benny and clyde, its bonny and clyde.[/small]
 

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Alright now this kind of story I like, it's to the point but with details. I don't know why but alot of creepypasta just seem's to bore me very quickly even as I know it takes time to built up a sense of dread in them. This one on the other hand I loved, short but sweet. :D

Great find there OP, you've earned yourself a cookie.