Game Dogs: Episode Two: Break Room
- Thread starter Russ Pitts
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The characters are one dimensional and milquetoast...or maybe "milque-bone"? Haha, already I'm funnier then anything that was said, done or shown in your entire episode.
To the writers of this episode: You guys are either completely untalented or you need something to kick you out of whatever rut you are in and find your muse. I suggest getting altered in some way either via the use of caffeine, alcohol, or other means. Do this with friends to amplify the effect.
Seriously, when I HAD a job, just about every meeting had some kind of funny story attached to it. I had a crazy Alaskan-Republican boss that would talk about his hunting trips in Africa...immediately after these meetings, when he left, we would blast Toto's "Africa" from our computers for a solid half hour afterward as we were singing along. Our boss was just too easy to make fun of.
To the writers of this episode: You guys are either completely untalented or you need something to kick you out of whatever rut you are in and find your muse. I suggest getting altered in some way either via the use of caffeine, alcohol, or other means. Do this with friends to amplify the effect.
Seriously, when I HAD a job, just about every meeting had some kind of funny story attached to it. I had a crazy Alaskan-Republican boss that would talk about his hunting trips in Africa...immediately after these meetings, when he left, we would blast Toto's "Africa" from our computers for a solid half hour afterward as we were singing along. Our boss was just too easy to make fun of.
That was... uh... it was... no. It was just no. NO!
EDIT: I need some constructive criticism.
1.Improve the voice acting and have more interesting voices
2.It feels like a kid show, make it stop
3.Don't over do puns with dogs... seriously
EDIT: I need some constructive criticism.
1.Improve the voice acting and have more interesting voices
2.It feels like a kid show, make it stop
3.Don't over do puns with dogs... seriously
I really liked it! I loved how Roger was giving an inspiringly robust game idea that sounded a lot like Fable and Fable 2 then Chet just says, "Castle Wolfensteen remake", I laughed so hard when Roger agreed to it because of gore content.
I just don't know.
They say, "You can't make a career ripping off other games," then the idea that they come up with is Zelda.
Are they separate jokes? Or was the joke that they didn't want to rip off a game and then did? Or was the joke about how Zelda always rips it's own self off?
It was either completely unfunny or there was funny in there that didn't get worded properly. It needs better execution.
Or an execution.
They say, "You can't make a career ripping off other games," then the idea that they come up with is Zelda.
Are they separate jokes? Or was the joke that they didn't want to rip off a game and then did? Or was the joke about how Zelda always rips it's own self off?
It was either completely unfunny or there was funny in there that didn't get worded properly. It needs better execution.
Or an execution.
Heh, good episode, I liked it.
But since I don't like just going "LOL, AWSUM!" I'll put in some critique.
In regards to the animation itself; I would recommend to animate the eyebrows a bit more. Just moving them up or down every once and a while doesn't really do much and it makes them all look stiff. Gary looked angry throughout the entire thing, and while that is his character I suppose, if you raise his eyebrows to make him look confused or baffled at the "idea dog" thing it would make it that much enjoyable. Same thing with the eyes themselves, have them blink just a tad more, they stare off into space way too much.
As for the jokes themselves, I'm not much of a "comedy" expert (or an animation one for that matter), but don't overdo the dog puns. You've got a good setting, putting in interesting characters, so make something out of that.
Other than that, a pretty good episode. Can't wait for more.
But since I don't like just going "LOL, AWSUM!" I'll put in some critique.
In regards to the animation itself; I would recommend to animate the eyebrows a bit more. Just moving them up or down every once and a while doesn't really do much and it makes them all look stiff. Gary looked angry throughout the entire thing, and while that is his character I suppose, if you raise his eyebrows to make him look confused or baffled at the "idea dog" thing it would make it that much enjoyable. Same thing with the eyes themselves, have them blink just a tad more, they stare off into space way too much.
As for the jokes themselves, I'm not much of a "comedy" expert (or an animation one for that matter), but don't overdo the dog puns. You've got a good setting, putting in interesting characters, so make something out of that.
Other than that, a pretty good episode. Can't wait for more.