Ok, I am trying to be a writer and get something ready for publication.
I tried to recruit my friends on Facebook, but but nothing but a few likes in the last month and I know I am not that good of a writer for people not to not need a good kick in the butt in some areas. In any case I need fresh eyes to see what I can't, and give me impute. I will have final say, but will take into account what people say to make this the best I can make it.
This is what I am looking for:
People willing to read what I am writing, and I report back. I will try to do twenty pages, give or take, at a time which should be 2 or 3 chapters. I can do it one chapter at a time if people prefer. Otherwise, I will do this amount.
What kind of people I am looking for:
Any and all.
People with only ten minutes in a day to themselves, people that only have say the time on their commute on the bus, and those with all day.
Well read and those that only read a little bit.
Any all. A fire fighter and painter will walk into the same room and see different things.
What I need people to look for.
1. Spelling and Grammar errors: Grammar should be ok, but I screw up here and there, and spelling has never been my strongest point. Also what makes sense in y head as writing may not when I read it again
2. Pacing: Many of you have all the time in the world due to the plague at the moment. Some of you only have five minutes in a day also because of it. I need to know the pacing is good, I am not bogging you down with things, and you have plenty of areas to comfortably stop periodically or just quit for a day and not feel lost.
3. To see What works and what doesn't: I need to know what needs to stay, change, or be cut out completely.
4. I want honest opinions. No sugar coating; I need to know if this is Heavenly, Good, Passable, Bad, the worst thing to happen to literature since 50 Shades.
5. Sensativity readers: Not always in the first few books, but will be dealing with a lot of characters and they will be of all kinds of orientations, heritages, and identites.
Content of story: Science fiction. Idea came from watching Digibro rip Asterisk Wars apart for several videos and going: I can make a better story with the elements it has and went CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!
This is a more soft scifi, very science fantasy, but has some hard science elements.
Content will be PG-13 ish, maybe borderline R. Basically James Bond and X-Men on one end, Conan The Barbarian and Predator at the other end. There will be violence and swearing.
Basic Plot: Several centuries in the future when humanity had a massive war over several plants, a student named Samson Wulf has to prove his the biggest badass in a school of other super powered teenagers.
Humanity conquers 10 more uninhabited worlds with the use of the discovery of Jump Gates they find in 15 different parts of the world. They go to different planets and with the exception of a hell world that is used to house the most dangerous of people, they go to only one other world. They might go to others but few dared to experiment as this made several third world nations very wealthy with the travel, and elevated overpopulation. The worlds also have abandoned alien tech that is reverse engineered.
Then 300 war that involved all 11 planets reduces humanity from a trillion to 100 billion. Part of this was due to 20% of humanity developing super powers that is basically in most video games, sci fi or fantasy like conjuring suits of armor and weapons out of thin air, even stuff that doesn't exist yet. Others shoot energy or the elements, boost sped and strength healing factor. Even some weirder ones. They are still more questions than answers when the story starts with them, but enough is known to have special schools to train them in their powers, rankings in power level, with the most powerful ones basically being one man armies.
Tech goes back and forth, but flying cars and sophisticated A.I are a norm.
If anyone is interested, PM me an name and Email, and how much you think you can get out of this, and I will keep this for some some questions and answers for less spoiler parts.
Anyone interested?
I tried to recruit my friends on Facebook, but but nothing but a few likes in the last month and I know I am not that good of a writer for people not to not need a good kick in the butt in some areas. In any case I need fresh eyes to see what I can't, and give me impute. I will have final say, but will take into account what people say to make this the best I can make it.
This is what I am looking for:
People willing to read what I am writing, and I report back. I will try to do twenty pages, give or take, at a time which should be 2 or 3 chapters. I can do it one chapter at a time if people prefer. Otherwise, I will do this amount.
What kind of people I am looking for:
Any and all.
People with only ten minutes in a day to themselves, people that only have say the time on their commute on the bus, and those with all day.
Well read and those that only read a little bit.
Any all. A fire fighter and painter will walk into the same room and see different things.
What I need people to look for.
1. Spelling and Grammar errors: Grammar should be ok, but I screw up here and there, and spelling has never been my strongest point. Also what makes sense in y head as writing may not when I read it again
2. Pacing: Many of you have all the time in the world due to the plague at the moment. Some of you only have five minutes in a day also because of it. I need to know the pacing is good, I am not bogging you down with things, and you have plenty of areas to comfortably stop periodically or just quit for a day and not feel lost.
3. To see What works and what doesn't: I need to know what needs to stay, change, or be cut out completely.
4. I want honest opinions. No sugar coating; I need to know if this is Heavenly, Good, Passable, Bad, the worst thing to happen to literature since 50 Shades.
5. Sensativity readers: Not always in the first few books, but will be dealing with a lot of characters and they will be of all kinds of orientations, heritages, and identites.
Content of story: Science fiction. Idea came from watching Digibro rip Asterisk Wars apart for several videos and going: I can make a better story with the elements it has and went CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!
This is a more soft scifi, very science fantasy, but has some hard science elements.
Content will be PG-13 ish, maybe borderline R. Basically James Bond and X-Men on one end, Conan The Barbarian and Predator at the other end. There will be violence and swearing.
Basic Plot: Several centuries in the future when humanity had a massive war over several plants, a student named Samson Wulf has to prove his the biggest badass in a school of other super powered teenagers.
Humanity conquers 10 more uninhabited worlds with the use of the discovery of Jump Gates they find in 15 different parts of the world. They go to different planets and with the exception of a hell world that is used to house the most dangerous of people, they go to only one other world. They might go to others but few dared to experiment as this made several third world nations very wealthy with the travel, and elevated overpopulation. The worlds also have abandoned alien tech that is reverse engineered.
Then 300 war that involved all 11 planets reduces humanity from a trillion to 100 billion. Part of this was due to 20% of humanity developing super powers that is basically in most video games, sci fi or fantasy like conjuring suits of armor and weapons out of thin air, even stuff that doesn't exist yet. Others shoot energy or the elements, boost sped and strength healing factor. Even some weirder ones. They are still more questions than answers when the story starts with them, but enough is known to have special schools to train them in their powers, rankings in power level, with the most powerful ones basically being one man armies.
Tech goes back and forth, but flying cars and sophisticated A.I are a norm.
If anyone is interested, PM me an name and Email, and how much you think you can get out of this, and I will keep this for some some questions and answers for less spoiler parts.
Anyone interested?