I'm going to have to disagree. "Small" and "fool" don't rhyme, and there were a couple others that were kind of a stretch but sounded similar because of the way he pronounced them. Some of the verses were a little long and clunky too. I realize Yahtzee's had a part that didn't rhyme either, but it was intentional, made a point, and was funny. It could also be that Jim's just didn't hold anything personal for me because I've never played Animal Crossing. It doesn't really sound like that much fun. I couldn't get into Harvest Moon either.rayen020 said:Jim wins. No ifs ands or buts. Yahtzee's limerick was good, describing the tortured development of thief(4???). but jim's poem reminded me of this [http://lparchive.org/Animal-Crossing/Update%201/] and i have to give it to him.
yahtzee - 2
Jim - 3.5