SpiderJerusalem said:
malestrithe said:
I'm not a fan of his dialog, something that gets a lot of praise. It is not clever to make a pop culture reference when describing something. Clever is finding a novel way to describe something.
I'm not a fan of his original creations. His original creations are sarcastic nerds, which is fine when there is only one of them, but not a whole team of them.
So, I take it you actually haven't WATCHED (and I mean watched, by putting actual thought into it) any of Whedon's shows? Because you couldn't be further off with this.
His series, like Buffy, Firefly and Dollhouse, feel unfinished from the first episode and in all cases, it takes around 8 episodes before they have a direction. Angel and Fray were different. Both were in Buffy's Universe and already had established ground rules when he wrote them. The Serenity movie worked better than the Firefly series because the universe was already built and he only used the parts that were necessary for his movie. They felt like they belonged and not cobbled together like in the series.
So a series in the beginning doesn't have a fully furnished and finished world, but takes a moment to get going as it sets up the story arcs? WHO KNEW? Of course the latter stories feel more whole, because that's what the first episodes and seasons build towards.
It feels odd that you feel entitled to criticize someone as a writer, when you display having such complete ignorance over what writing actually is.
Getting upset over this proves why I have a huge dislike for Diehard Whedonites. Do you get some happiness out of "disproving" a well thought out and reasoned argument? Do you realize that I've heard these asinine rebuttals before and it has not swayed me?
As for the points:
1: Yes, I've heard his dialog. Yes, I have seen his shows, probably more times than you'll ever have and it is not clever to make some pop culture reference while talking. Clever dialog explains the situation in an original way without having to rely on some pop culture short hand as a cheat. Do you know who makes references to other movies? Those guys that do the Scary Movies, the Epic Movie and those kind of parody films. Would you call those clever? No you wouldn't, and Whedon does not get a pass for doing the same thing.
And 2: It is not a character flaw on my part to expect a universe that feels put together before the first episode is written. It is me trusting the writer to tell the story he wants to tell and not get bogged down making the things up. That's the problem with Firefly: he did not do enough prior planning before writing the first episode. He was throwing shit on the wall and seeing what sticks. I'm aware that he had a plan for where he was taking his 9 Han Solo clones, but that should have been obvious from episode 1 and not in the Serenity movie.
Also, Worldbuilding 101 dictates that you should atleast develop the world you are in before the start of the first adventure in it. I'm not asking to explain everything about the universe. I am asking that he does the work so it feels like it belongs in that universe.
Do you know where it's done right? Before he got the green light to do the first episode of Young Justice, Greg Weissman started creating the world. He spent time picking heroes for the universe, creating the tech, building outer space, and so on. He spent time creating all of the characters, and making them fit into his vision of the DC universe. He also took the time to figure out what his ideal plot progression for each character is. After he got the green light for the show, he started writing episodes and used his already built plot lines as his blueprint for the series. He has a "master book" that has over 200 pages of stories that he is never going to use, but it does not matter. That kind of work makes universes feel alive. He is not alone in doing this. Creators of Ben 10 do this, so did the creators of Avatar: the Last Airbender and the Legend of Korra. Had Joss Whedon done even a tenth of that preparation for any of his non Buffy related project, he would be a lot more received outside the community.
Quit protecting Joss Whedon from criticism. He does not need you to do it. He understands his short comings. When I talked to him at the SD comic con a few years ago, he was not upset I did not like his writing. He was taken aback that I told him he was a great director, just not a good writer.
Furthermore, come up with better "attacks." All of us non Whedonites have heard them before and we are still not convinced by them.