La Resistance! (RP Game)

[Alpha Centauri]

Your country has been taken over, join the resistance today, and fight for its liberation! Or, establish a nefarious organization and cause chaos and anarchy.

Back Story:

Your country (that shall always remain nameless) has been in a brutal war that it did not start, a year ago a neighboring country by the name of Kelinkov, invade with out warning or provocation your peaceful nation, the world assembly truend a blind eye to this, and you were left on your own to defend against a strong bigger nation.

Your military fought valiantly and tirelessly, making the enemy pay for every inch of soil they took, but alas they did take and after 8 months of brutally fighting, they took the capital ans exiled your government.

You, now must take a stand against this evil country, but how? Are you fighting to reinstate the original government? Your own government? Or are you fighting more the possible profits of crime?

For the country.




Character Sheets

Name:
Age:
Occupation: (Job before you became, or cover, a/for rebel,)
Disposition: (How much do you hate occupiers of your country? 1 Neutral, 2 hate, 3 Really hate)
Items: (Basic no over powered, and no guns, you'll get them latter)
Back Story: (Why are you becoming a rebel?)
Personality: (Who are you as a person?)


I'll start when 5 character sheets have been submitted.

 

[Alpha Centauri]

No intrest in fighting for your country? *edit sorry for the quick bump*

 

[Timotei]

Spoiler

Name: Dominique Sutherland
Age: 26
Occupation: Store clerk (former military experience: company commander)
Disposition: 2
Items: plain grey shirt, cargo pants, tan jacket, boots, army fatigue cap, tan full-finger gloves, goggles, cigarettes + lighter, messenger bag containing various items
Back Story: Town of birth destroyed
Personality: Reserved, analytical, logical, performs well when given authority, caring and mindful of those under her command.

 

[Shapsters]

Ok, time for some constructive criticism.

When you make an RP, you need to post some information, a back-story, what the RP is about, all that jazz. You did this to an extent, but for players to take an RP seriously, you should be able to write more than just one line of information. You need to write enough information to entice the players, draw them in thinking 'this RP sounds exciting'. When I read your info I think, 'This guy doesn't seem experienced enough to GM maybe he should get some more experience first.'

Anyways, just a little bit of help form your friendly neighborhood RPer, good luck with your RP in any light. And another thing, dont bump your thread after 12 minutes, Rps take more than 12 minutes to fill up, be patient.

 

[maddawg IAJI]

Your country has been taken over, join the resistance today, and fight for its liberation! Or, establish a nefarious organization and cause chaos and anarchy.

Character Sheets

Name:
Age:
Occupation: (Job before you became, or cover, a/for rebel,)
Disposition: (How much do you hate occupiers of your country? 1 Neutral, 2 hate, 3 Really hate)
Items: (Basic no over powered, and no guns, you'll get them latter)
Back Story: (Why are you becoming a rebel?)
Personality: (Who are you as a person?)


I'll start when 5 charater sheets have been submitted.

Spoiler: Some friendly advice

When you make an Rp it is usally a good idea to post some background info. I understand that you put that little bit, but it wouldn't kill you to add some more to it such as why there in you're country,why there occupation is considered wrong, and what have you done to deserve this.

Dispsition is not needed. If you're joining as a rebel then you must want to get rid of them right? Other wise there would be no real reason for the backstory.

Finally do not bump you're thread after ten minutes. It's early in the morning for a lot of users and we can't see the thread when were sleeping in bed. No need to bump if it's still on the first page.

I'm sorry if I offend you with these views, but I am simply offering constructive criticism.Other then that:Welcome to the Rp section and I hope you have a nice time here.

 

[Alpha Centauri]

Your country has been taken over, join the resistance today, and fight for its liberation! Or, establish a nefarious organization and cause chaos and anarchy.

Character Sheets

Name:
Age:
Occupation: (Job before you became, or cover, a/for rebel,)
Disposition: (How much do you hate occupiers of your country? 1 Neutral, 2 hate, 3 Really hate)
Items: (Basic no over powered, and no guns, you'll get them latter)
Back Story: (Why are you becoming a rebel?)
Personality: (Who are you as a person?)


I'll start when 5 charater sheets have been submitted.

Spoiler: Some friendly advice

When you make an Rp it is usally a good idea to post some background info. I understand that you put that little bit, but it wouldn't kill you to add some more to it such as why there in you're country,why there occupation is considered wrong, and what have you done to deserve this.

Dispsition is not needed. If you're joining as a rebel then you must want to get rid of them right? Other wise there would be no real reason for the backstory.

Finally do not bump you're thread after ten minutes. It's early in the morning for a lot of users and we can't see the thread when were sleeping in bed. No need to bump if it's still on the first page.

I'm sorry if I offend you with these views, but I am simply offering constructive criticism.Other then that:Welcome to the Rp section and I hope you have a nice time here.

No you havent, this is my first one and i was going to post the back story after 5 people have joined, and I added dispostison, as a kind of, how badly do you hate, because the more one hates the more easily one dose stupid things.

Thanks for the tips, I'll add the back story.

 

[Alpha Centauri]

CHAPTER 1: Finding the rebles.


Ok well, its bee a while, so 'Dominique Sutherland' you can start off, you haven't joined yet because you need to find the reble leader, your in the capital city, and its hell getting around any where, seucrity is tighter then my gir... well its tight. Where to you start off in your shearch? (Keep in mind this is a city with its own sectors like industrial commerical residental, ect)

 

[Timotei]

* "Hmm... the Industrial District will surely have the tightest security as will the Commercial District. The urban areas are likely to have less guards, however I can't discount the possibility of them doing raids today or if they have brought in heavy technicals. If I'm to make it around he Residential areas, I'm going to need to be inconspicuous, but that would mean heading to work to grab a few things, however that is in the Commercial District. I guess you have to take risks with everything." *

*heads off to work*

 

[Anarchemitis]

Ok, time for some constructive criticism.

When you make an RP, you need to post some information, a back-story, what the RP is about, all that jazz. You did this to an extent, but for players to take an RP seriously, you should be able to write more than just one line of information. You need to write enough information to entice the players, draw them in thinking 'this RP sounds exciting'. When I read your info I think, 'This guy doesn't seem experienced enough to GM maybe he should get some more experience first.'

Anyways, just a little bit of help form your friendly neighborhood RPer, good luck with your RP in any light. And another thing, dont bump your thread after 12 minutes, Rps take more than 12 minutes to fill up, be patient.

In my mind, the minimum waiting period before a bump is usually an hour, and typically within one day.

I heartily agree- I have seen many a valiant concept for Role Plays die on their knees as they began to stand up, due to disinterest and disorientation, because of the vaugeness or lack of activity by the Game Master, because the Game Master thought the players would create the story.

Stories will always need leadership, or at least some kind of guidelines.

 

[Timotei]

Spoiler

In my mind, the minimum waiting period before a bump is usually an hour, and typically within one day.

I heartily agree- I have seen many a valiant concept for Role Plays die on their knees as they began to stand up, due to disinterest and disorientation, because of the vaugeness or lack of activity by the Game Master, because the Game Master thought the players would create the story.

Stories will always need leadership, or at least some kind of guidelines.

Please do not interupt the flow of play good sir. The RP has started

 

[ThreeWords]

Any space left? This sounds fun...

 

[Timotei]

Spoiler

Any space left? This sounds fun...

Yes there is. But please be mindful that the RP has technically started.

 

[Alpha Centauri]

You get to work, as a store clerck, its a normal day nothing intresting, (aside from its payday) your boss has been acting odd, though.

 

[Timotei]

*Shift ends, punches out clock and collects paycheck*

* "*Sigh* Why am I still here? I don't even like his job yet I just can't bring myself to leave. At least in my last job I used to manage people. Why didn't I re-enlist when the invasion started? I could have had the job I liked and been paid a hell of a lot more than the peanuts I get paid now. First I need to make a stop at the bank, deposit my check first. Then I'll head home." *

*Heads off to the bank and deposits check, makes way towards Residential District*

 

[Alpha Centauri]

You are almost home, when you 3 military jeeps blasting sirens to get out of their way, you see them pull up to a house and rush in, there are 5 solders and a officer. Each are holding Akm/3's (aside the officer who is holding a Pistol

 

[Timotei]

* "I don't want to involve myself in this. Not now at least. Just keep walking Domi, you aren't in military anymore..." *

*pulls cap down, continues walking*

 

[Alpha Centauri]

You turn the cornner as you screams of a woman, then a gunshot, no scream echo from beind you it as if the whole city had become silent, the you hear, barely

"Oh they are going to pay"

 

[Timotei]

* "This doesn't involve you. Just keep walking. Acknowledging the situation only puts you at risk for getting hurt. Save yourself for later." *

*continues walking*

 

[Alpha Centauri]

The military jeeps continue down the street passing you. Suddednly, from a house just across the street for you, gun fire erupts from it.

"For the country!" you hear, on jeep swirves shraply and flips as the driver is killed

 

[Timotei]

*takes cover behind a car while attepting survey the situation*

"Not my best day!"