Now I do that too im my posts, but its a bit silly from a reviewer stand point. Techinically, what your writing tells me is that something like this
Character models are a lot better than the awful, hideous monstrosities in the first game, but can still look a little unfinished and clumsy in parts.
is important enough to deserve its own paragraph. It just generally flow breaking and doesn't make much sense. When you break the page you are telling us you have completed a though, and when you do stuff like that it makes your thoughts seem completely unorganized and throws us into disarray.
And stuff like this
Combat can become a mess sometimes though, most noticeably in large battles with a few enemies at once. The blur effect when you get shot is very annoying and causes confusion, and elemental effects can cause the frame rate to drop quite badly, which is pretty much unacceptable in a 2010 mainstream release.
Also, when a Big Daddy gets involved in a ruckus between you and splicers, it becomes utter chaos. Which can be fun, but is mostly just frustrating.
Is not as effective when you break it up like this. Read the passage out loud. And count to 3 in your head when you break the paragrah. Thats what its like to the people reading this.
Not to mention that whole paragraph is a giant run on sentence. Something like this would be more effective.
Large battles with few enemies? WAHH?
Combat can become quite a mess sometimes. Most noticeably in larger battles with multiple enemies charging at once. This isn't helped by The blur effect when you get shot being annoying and a major cause of confusion. All while elemental effects can cause the frame rate to drop quite badly, which is pretty much unacceptable in a 2010 Triple A release. And When a Big Daddy gets involved in a ruckus between you and splicers, it becomes utter chaos. Which can be fun, but is often just frustrating.
Anyways, love the review series name.
-Take this as it is, its just friendly constructive criticism.
-Pimppeter2, "Pimpin reviews"
[sub]Just somehting I plan on signing my opinions in here with[/sub]