MLP - "Amending Fences" - Review

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As usual with my reviews, it will contain spoilers. Those of you who have not watched the episode yet, you have been warned.

The premise of this episode is that Twilight, after realising that she wasn't the friendliest of ponies back in the day, goes back to Canterlot to try and make amends to those ponies who tried befriending her in the past.

Let me start this right off by saying that I think this is a great premise for an episode. In fact, I'll give them even further credit by saying how great I think it is that they're focusing on something that, at first, seemed like a relatively minor point on the show. Remember, although they did appear in the very first episode of the show, Twilight's three friends only had a few seconds of screen time, and were only really there to show the kind of anti-social problems that Twilight was dealing with at the time. Taking those three and crafting an entire episode's plotline around it is an interesting thing. But, then again, since "Slice of life", I think it's safe to say that I don't think there?s any real limit to who gets the spotlight these days. Now, before I talk about the positives of this premise in further detail, let me just take a moment to somewhat defend Twilight's actions in that first episode. I mean, yes, she did kinda of blow them off, and yes, the show is about making friends, but remember, she did have somewhat more important things on her mind at the time, namely the return of an evil mare who sought to bring about eternal night. Granted, she could have been somewhat more diplomatic with those three mares, but still, priorities people.

As for the setup itself, it's one that not only makes sense for the show, but also for Twilight's character. Because, not only, as I said earlier, is this show all about how you can make friends with many people, but Twilight herself has, over the course of the show, become the kind of character who goes out of her way to try and do the right thing by others. Just remember last week's episode and how much she bent over backwards just to make a bunch of ungrateful yaks seems welcomed. As such, it makes sense that she would feel some measure of guilt for those she wasn't all that friendly with during her early days in the series, especially when those three mares in question actually seemed to want to go out of their way and include Twilight in what they were doing. They wanted to be friends with her, and she did not, hence the remarks back in episode one of her preferring "books to friends", which gave the distinct impression that that was not the only failed attempt they'd made to befriend her. Plus, I think this is also a very relatable situation for Twilight to be in. After all, I think, at some point in our lives, we've all encountered people that we weren't entirely nice towards, and would, later in life, come to regret our treatment of. Like Twilight, I think a lot of us would go back and try to make things better if we could.

In stark contrast to the last few episodes we've been given, this one is a lot more heartfelt story for us to be given, and most of that is centred around the four friends of Twilight's past. The first three, to my surprise, were all well and good, and seemed like some fairly fun friends for her to have had in her youth. Their willingness to accept Twilight back came as much of a surprise to me as it did to Twilight, which is good, as I always approve of moments when the show managed to catch me off-guard. It shows well how some people won't hold it against you if you drift away, and those three certainly seemed to be the forgiving types. And then we have Moondancer. Right from the start, this is a character that seems to be a veritable mirror for Twilight, showing exactly the kind of person she could have become if she hadn't made friends in Ponyville. Obsessed with books, introverted, even somewhat aggressive towards others, viewing friendships as unimportant. Had Twilight's life not gone the way that it did, I have every reason to believe that she would have ended up just as isolated as Moondancer was. And just to make the point abundantly clear, they even have her be a palette-swap of her, making her literally look like another Twilight.

But Moondancer is, without a doubt, the very heart and soul of this episode and everything that Twilight is trying to accomplish. At the start of this story, Twilight laments that her actions in neglecting her Canterlot friends might have negatively affected them, and Moondancer is the very embodiment of that fear. It really took me aback to see how that one tiny detail from the pilot, Twilight turning down a party invitation, could have led to another pony being so devastated, and yet when Moondancer ended up letting out her frustrations and crying at the end of it, that really hit me where it hurts. Because, in all honesty, I've been in Moondancer's position a few times in my life. I wasn't the best at making friends myself when I was younger, and there were moments where all it took for me to feel down was one moment. I know exactly what Moondancer was feeling here, and how hard it sometimes is to make friends when it feels that the friends you have don't seem to care. Plus, the fact that they go out of their way to show how a few gestures aren't going to be enough to fix such problems is a very adult thing to show. As such, this episode is perhaps one of the most impactful the show has given us in a long time, and I give great credit to Mr Larson and the other writers for managing to pull it off as well as they do.

Time to discuss the humour of the episode now and, as you might expect of a story centred around Twilight, much of the jokes and funny moments of the episode are centred around her stressing out over her plans and goals to make amends with her three Canterlot friends. As we saw back in last week's episode, Twilight still freaks out over her plans going awry, and the animators always manage to come up with amusing ways of showing how her stress gets to her. As cruel as it is to say, and I do say it a lot with this show, MLP has this way of making a character's uncomfortable situation seem funny, both with the delivery of their lines and with the facial expressions they give them, and Twilight?s, in this episode, nails it on the head almost every time. However, as I said before, humour is not the real focus of this episode, so overall, the jokes are a bit on the light side. But for me, that's absolutely fine, because while this show does have a good track record when it comes to comedy, it shines even brighter when it delves into more serious issues.

When it comes to songs, this week, yet again, there's none to speak of.

As for the moral of the week, this episode seems to have a general message that's difficult to really say, as they don't really blurt it out loud like they do in most episodes. Obviously, there's the moral of trying to not lose touch with your friends, and just generally treating them right, which is a good lesson to teach, don't get me wrong, but it's done in a very realistic manner. The way that Twilight's apparent neglect all those episodes ago could have had such an impact on those closest to her was a devastating thing to watch, and it really makes you think hard about how little it takes to really spoil a friendship. Its, as I said before, one of the more adult things this show has tried to teach in a long time, made all the more evident when they portrayed it the way that they did, showing just how difficult it is for some people to put themselves out there and try to make friends. Every single one of us has been in that position at some point in our lives, and this episode captured those difficult moments perfectly.

So, how did the episode fare overall? In truth, I loved it. Having the kind of premise that it did, the story was a much more emotional and heartfelt one than we've been given in the last few outings of this show, with Twilight?s situation being not only a relatable one, but also something that ties in well with her role of being someone who has been trying to spread lessons of friendship. So it's good to know that even she has some things to learn every now and again. There were plenty of funny moments, but it was the emotional scenes that really stole the show for me. The characters all behaved in realistic ways, and the episode just had a more grounded and believable feel than many of the show's more recent episodes. Overall, I'd say it's a massive improvement over the last two episodes that we've been given, and one that I think should definitely be watched. In fact, I'm willing to go so far as to say that this episode has usurped "Slice of Life" as my number one episode of the season thus far, just because of how much of an emotional punch it had. It was sweet, an understandable situation, and finally brought a close to a loose end that's been hanging over Twilight since the start of the series. Highly recommended, this one.
 

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Heh for once, I actually wanted to see your thread pop up asap after the episode aired as I had found today episode to be INCREDIBLE!!!

To start it off, I admit I originally wasn't too thrill by the primier when I read about it weeks ago. Despite knowing we will get to see the ponies she ditched as abit of fanservice, I see it as a desperate attempt into making an episode especially when it had taken this long to realise her neglect toward them. I also predicted that was her psyche that will also dragged the episode long aswell especially when they were ok with it. I can honestly say how glad how wrong this episode had turned out!

Ok where do I begin?-
Ok sure it DID took her long enough to realised she had forgot about them all this time which I guess we have to thank Spike for his remark about her being a bad friend at the start of it all. Honestly I don't see it that way but rather as a huge character development she has grown. She started off as nothing but soon rise as a princess kinda like from a zero to a hero (Gurren Lagann is a good example at how Simon became from a simple digger to a courageous man who face the impossibles head on). Also I guess it also thanks to her psyche that she wouldn't let go for it just shrug it off knowing how much of a better pony she has become (still it was good she did wen through with it given to what happened later on the episode).

Speaking of neglects, forgetting her friends was one thing but forgetting her old home (the tower) is another! You would think she could had revisit it when she is temporary back in Canterlot like for the wedding or the Princess Spike episode. I guess the Castle bed must been more comfy. I guess we have to thank Celestria for not touching the tower or the properties ponies would had gotten their hooves on it! Also I guessing Spike must of digged the library treehouse alot to had forgotten the birthday gift especially when it seen his old bed was a pile of books!

While I am dissapointed that they used Minuette instead of her fandom name "Colegate" but yet again I am certain that name is a trademark. Regardless of her given name, I simply ADORE her! I like her perky/ jolly/ upbeat attitude since it's not over the top like Pinkie Pie so it kinda make her realistic in a way (like that "Let's fly" joke). In saying so it kinda dissapointing that Lemon Heart and Twinkieshine didn't shine as much compare to her but they did have to cover alot in the episode.

Oh that big reveal scene on why she went to visit them. It was handle alot better than I would had episode as I mention above (I thought Twilight psyche wouldn't let her ended it with that simple closuer). The episode could had ended there and now if it weren't for them mentioning Moon Dancer.

Ok time to comment on Moon Dancer, I am pretty sure some people if most people who watched the show can easily relate to her ALOT. It kinda make me think the crew had pretty much embodies all of our antisocial behivours etc into a pony form. Seriously she is that relatable! Yes it was obvious that Moon Dancer is made out to be the whole "What if" Twilight had never discover friendship and I pretty sure her colour pallete swap with Twilight wasn't intentional per say but rather it work on two levels. Ever notice that Minuette and Lyra (loved the connection) are the same unicorn in term of shape but different colours? Same apply to Twinkleshine and Lemon Hearts too so they made Moon Dancer to be the same template to Twilight but without her wings.

Also yes I agreed with you OP on how the episode relates with our lives. The episode did spoke to me on two things. One I was an ass to somebody I know from High School since I didn't aknowledge her well talked to her properly and she hated me for that (she confess near the end of my High School years). As for wanting to make amend? I guess? Well I rather admit to her that I was a complete ass to her and aknowledged my flaws/ faults than to rekindle my friendship to her (last time I've check she was a *****). Second thing, being hurted for simple because your friends didn't know up. This happened to me quite often eventhought I wholehearted agreed on the reason on why my friend didn't show up (I guess emotions overruled logics). In saying so I never once tell them how sadden I had feel when they can't make it.

What I also found great with the episode was the reference and connection it hand other than it being directly connect to the very first episode. It was good thing that this aired after the 100th episode. I mention that since it seen Twilight kinda know Lyra (same Lyra from the Slice of Life) episode. It remain to be seen if they will reconnect (I will metion this more in the next paragraph). It was interesting that Pinkie knows Minuette from the Wedding (how does she know Cadence to the point of becoming her braidmaid, I guess this means they are also friends) which I feel that scene with Pinkie calling Twilight the Princess of Friendship as a burn remark given that Twilgiht did saw Minuette as a bridemaid in the mine scene from the wedding (yes Minuette was brainwash and Twilight didn't know her well but still). Speaking of Pinkie Pie and Minuette, I really don't recalled her ever interacting with Minuette, you know like given her a cake or handy out her a party in a party scene (fanfic fuels). Also seeing the reference like Donut Joe and Fancy Pant and that unicorn was a nice touch.

About the connection, yeah I don't think this will be the last we will see of them as I discover a suprise from the comment section on the episode-
During that scene with Twilight invite Moon Dancer to the resturant, guess who else was inside? Starlight Glimmer of all the ponies! She had the menu covering her face on the next table near the group! I am pretty sure Starlight will make a comment about the "friendship" that Twilight try to shove onto Moon Dancer when she meet with Twilight again. Unless she was stalking her throughtout the episode, she probably doesn't know that it had all worked out in the end thanks to the power of friendship! With unexpected cameo, it kinda make the episode even more significant than ever. Remember Starlight motive other than removing the cutie mark altogether to make everyone "equal"? She view on "friendship" is different compared to Twilight. Yes, I am certain they will called back to today episode!
Still I wonder if future episodes we will see them in the background but in a new light like if Twilight will aknowledged them more when she doing her Princess stuff?

One last thing! While I agreed with the moral/ lesson you made OP but I kinda see it differently. I'm not saying you're wrong but I see the episode as a kinda like a butterfly effect in that in every action you take with your friends, even the smallest one can have a huge impact on them later on in life. With that in mind, you be more considerate or thoughtful towards your friends.

Ok I think I am all wrap up and got everything out of my chest (christ I haven't made a BIG comment in the episodes since the season final)!

Overall, yeah today episode is by far my favourite episode of season 5 so far (unless a future episodes can possibly top this one!). I also agreed OP, Slice of Life episode was a great episode but that what the episode was, fun and aswell a huge fanservice episode. Amending Fences kinda gone back to the root on the whole friendship lesson (a lesson on a minor role can be just as important as an big role isn't exactly about friendship). Today episode was just so emotional on several fronts this making it the biggest relatable and impactful episodes of them all!

A couple of trivial things. Why is Moon Dancer studying alot if being a professor is not her goal? Also did Twilight learn a spell to see the past like a past o vision or was it just there for us to see. It seen a convient spot that she know the exact spot where her party was held unless that spot is a common spot to hold parties?
 

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Twilight may have had a good excuse to brush off the party (i.e., saving the world), but what excuse did she have to forget about the whole thing? She found the time to say goodbye to her brother if the BBBFF song is any indication, yet she didn't do the same with her other friends. And even after averting the ponypocalypse, what kept her from going back to tie up loose ends? Either of these would've softened the blow of her sudden departure, and perhaps they even would've helped Moondancer in the long run. But instead, she just left her past on a shelf to gather dust, just like her old home.

"Come on, Twilight. Princess Celestia gave you an assignment. Nopony could blame you for that."
"But look at the way I left this place. It's a total mess! Just like how I left my friendships."
This is why she feels so awful, and why her friends have every right to be mad at her, even though most of them aren't.
 

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immblueversion said:
Twilight may have had a good excuse to brush off the party (i.e., saving the world), but what excuse did she have to forget about the whole thing? She found the time to say goodbye to her brother if the BBBFF song is any indication, yet she didn't do the same with her other friends. And even after averting the ponypocalypse, what kept her from going back to tie up loose ends? Either of these would've softened the blow of her sudden departure, and perhaps they even would've helped Moondancer in the long run. But instead, she just left her past on a shelf to gather dust, just like her old home.

"Come on, Twilight. Princess Celestia gave you an assignment. Nopony could blame you for that."
"But look at the way I left this place. It's a total mess! Just like how I left my friendships."
This is why she feels so awful, and why her friends have every right to be mad at her, even though most of them aren't.
It's also mentionted that despite the numerous times that Twilight has returned to Canterlot, she never bothered to go say hi to her old friends. And then there's the semi-overlooked fact that Lyra lives in ponyville and I don't think twilight has ever bothered to so much as say hello.