- Jul 6, 2009
Lol, i find it amusing that we're not even talking about the songv161 said:Cassita said:Please, oh please do not tell me how to form a paragraph. The last thing I need is English tips from you.ghii3 said:But in a normal paragraph you got point and explanation whereas in your original post you had two arbitrary points one being a possible explanation for the other. It seems fairly easy to make that mistake if you just got two random points.Cassita said:Learn to read?ghii3 said:Cassita said:Um, what?ghii3 said:
I love everything she does because I like her voice and her creativity?
What a silly person, you are.
But you didn't say that; you just mentioned that she looks good and then said that you love everything she does, no other justification. Either way, at least I can use commas properly.
"Rebecca is so pretty."
"Love everything she does."
Just to prove my point:
*In a normal paragraph, you have a point and an explanation. Whereas in your original post, you had two arbitrary points - one being a possible explanation for the other. It seems fairly easy to make that mistake if you just have two random points.*
Please, learn the language before telling others how to use it.
While the song may not be my favorite, the intellectual discourse it's started is awesome!
And returning to my post in this war, to be honest you seem to be proving my point and the fact that your dp is manga only supports my argument.
I think I'd probably know more about english with my teacher being a dictatorial monolith of derp. He is a clever dictatorial monolith of derp, however and he knows what he's derping about