The most disturbing fan fiction you have ever read.

Trooper924

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This thread reminds me why I don't read fan fic.

Sure, I've heard that ten percent of all fan fic written is actually pretty good but I don't want to have to sift through the other ninety percent of sick, disgusting crap to find it.
 

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SPOILERS: This three part Pokemon fanfic. The world gets taken over by pokemon hybrids. The main character dies at the end of the first part and gets brought back to life at the start of the second. Later in that part she discovers that she has the ability to control the fusions since she was injected with their DNA to help bring her back to life.
 

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Well, since Cupcakes and Sweet Apple Massacre have been mentioned...
Time for more twisted pony fan fics!
This one is called Rainbow Factory [https://docs.google.com/document/d/1td5r9BGGA7l2-rnlFTnVrJN2NdZclcVWUMoCqaSujnM/edit?hl=en_GB] which was inspired by this song. [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YRx_iXgLAyw&list=FLOf5T2XRgypqFQLVoqNL5lQ&index=39&feature=plpp_video]

SOYLENT RAINBOWS ARE MADE OF PONIES!
 

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Indiana Jones practically raping voldemort. Not regular voldemort either, kid voldemort. Tom Venster..

Want proof?

http://www.cracked.com/article_16554_the-5-most-baffling-sex-scenes-in-history-fanfiction.html

It is on page 2.

Don't say I didn't warn you about the nightmares, cause this is that warning.
 

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DeathChairOfHell said:
Some girl made a fanfiction about Ian and Anthony from Smosh being gay. It was disturbing. VERY disturbing.
Are you sure that "girl" wasn't Ian or Anthony, cause this seems on par than their usuall subject matter. :p

OT: My knowledge of fan-fiction is mostly limited to what I've seen from "Master-Peice Fan-fic theater," (http://thatguywiththeglasses.com/bt/the-sage/fanfic-theatre) and the various youtube adaptations of works that are funnier than they are disturbing, most of which have alread been posted. Also, technically haven't read them.

So, to abandon the op's rules to a degree short of starting a spiderman thread, Cloud Mows the Lawn. Haven't read, just heard the first paragraph being read and NOPED.
 

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dammit, I was hoping to say cupcakes first before reading anyones' responses, and then see just how unoriginal I was after reading them, but you said it yourself

but in reality cupcakes is pretty tame, it just gets the shock factor because it's about ponies.
 

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CUPCAKES!
So Sweet and Tasty
CUPCAKES!
Don't be too hasty
CUPCAKES!
CUPCAKES, CUPCAKES, CUPCAKES!!!
 

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Treblaine said:
Mittenz said:
Treblaine said:
Most disturbing fan fiction I have ever read... I wrote myself.

It's a Star Wars Original Trilogy rewrite (though it's altered so much you may not actually recognise it) and I don't think I will ever put it online. Though I suppose it's pretty awesome in just how over-the-top in exploitation it gets, and how it follows the development of Campbell's Hero's Journey even more rigorously than A New Hope itself. It still goes places that would make a japanese anime censor squirm and Alderaan suffers a far worse fate than being blown up.

It doesn't really have an ending though, it tries to continue on seamlessly into what would be the equivalent of Empire Strikes Back but also Splinter of Mind's Eye trying to squidge the elements of both of those together. But that's just too hard, the Leia character has to be in two places at once and either way her character ends up completely different.

Anyway, the way it is being written it is more like an OVA or mini-series, split into about 10 1-hour-long episodes rather a 3 x 3-hour feature films a la LotR Epic-trilogy. I'm probably taking this too seriously as no one would ever EVER make what I have written.

Yeah, I'm rambling about unfinished and unpublished writing, boooring.
Please put it online. I have a fascination with awful over the top fan fics and that sounds magnificent.
-Jedis are pretty much replaced with something more like witchcraft, it's considered a female-only deal, Jedis aren't really a combative order, they do have magical powers which are great help in combat but it doesn't mark the out as elite warriors, I don't want to go down the path of Star Wars prequels of Jedis commanding groups of soldiers.

-All the principal cast of protagonists are now female: Luke is Luca, Han Solo is Hanna Solo (though still called "Han" for short) even Obi-Wan has been substituted for a witch-type character but still a "crazy old wizard Witch" up in the mountains. However I realise I've made what might be called an entire cast of Mary Sues! But I am trying to subvert that and make these seem like real characters I think having many different female characters is the key to having real distinction. They have definite flaws and strengths, I hope.
Chewie is now a battered old android left over from the Clone Wars and the R2D2/C3PO are now Elves. Go figure.

-It's essentially a war of the sexes, The Empire is a male dominated extremely-misogynistic authority and part of the oppression of the Empire is basically enslavement and subservience of all women throughout the galaxy. Because that's kinda the problem with A New Hope, why did Luke have such a problem with the Empire? There was no imperative for the characters to really want to overthrow or avoid them.

-I don't think the "vader-father-redemption" from RoJ deal works when Luca's father is a rapist arch misogynist, so that will have to be changed for something completely different though Vader remains her father. Also, Vader is not going to start as a cyborg, he will be put that way by a serious injury dealt by one of the protagonists in the first third of the series and will be "resurrected" to a zombie like state his life dependant on The Emperor's continued existence.

-Also the Death Star isn't destroyed in the end of the first "third" (equivalent New Hope ending) its planet destroying laser is destroyed by a critical hit just at the moment it is firing, this leaves the Space Station crippled without its main weapon but still orbiting the Rebel Planet that is then occupied (invasion of Hoth) and has its resources stripped to rebuild it. So there is no sudden "build another death star" there is just one, that they spend the entire series trying to figure out how to destroy it once and for all (infiltration of Endor). It's all on the same planet.

-I've expanded on the triad of power between The Emperor, Grand Moff Tarkin and Darth Vader: the Emperor in "Pampered Dictator" role he doesn't do day-to-day politics, that is Grand Moff Tarkin's role in the senate and Darth Vader the head of judiciary/military branch, he's the Fixer, the Heydrich, of The Empire. Tarkin does not get killed off in the first third of the saga, this power balance will evolve throughout the series and has a key role in the undoing of The Empire.

-I'll be frank, there is a lot of sex, lesbian bonding, implausible nudity, Tentacle monsters, sex beasts, imperial rapist it's everything from the dirtiest most perverted anime/hentai you've ever heard of. Yep, tentacle rape warning! I hear even Ridely Scott's Alien was originally going to have a tentacle-raper alien but they decided against it after HR Geiger's designs. And we all know what happen to Leia when she was captured by Jabba:
Nothing is left to speculation

Though I don't think I am going too far. Far for fan-fic, but at least it doesn't get as bad as typical torture porn like Saw, Hostel and especially not as bad that title that I can't even mention but I will say it rhymes with Kuman Peinticeed. Frankly, THOSE film are more awful than any fanfic I can find. Really. It's worse than anything I can even think of.

-The violence is extreme and escalates. Luca is a knife toting punk on Tatooine where she depends on that to avoid a terrible fate at hands of Tusken Raiders, she quickly graduates to lightsabres where they are not clean weapons, it's like being hit with a white-hot chainsaw there is no clean cauterisation but an explosion of fire wherever tissue it touches. Blasters too are pretty much mini-localised lightsabre strikes.
One thing I want to do is have Luca using a lightsabre by the time she gets to the Death Star and really the combat aspect is no the special training Luca needs on the Degoba system. You can learn how to fight as you go, but on Degoba the training is something far more subtle to do with inner strength and wisdom, no just learning how to dodge laser blasts and kill.

-lighsabres still feature heavily with Jedi but really anyone can use a lightsabre and not all jedis/witches use them. Lightsabres are essentially common components of industrial cutting equipment. Also no one has them drawn for often by the logic that they consume a lot of power just running that can run out (for plot convenience) also an excuse for many cool quick draws and make them a really special weapon to use. Non-jedis use them but jedis have most benefit of them and will still wield blasters and firearms.
Yeah

-Also on the death star being so huge and spherical it doesn't have a universal direction of gravity like all down in line with the central axis or towards the core, the entire facility is a complex three-dimensional maze of gravity generators, you can have corridors where the ceiling has an opposite gravitational pull so if you jump up you can then be pulled up to the ceiling. You have corridors where the floor bends up and down around 90 degrees and cargo corridors with no gravity, and security lockdowns that set to 4g where everyone weighs 4x as much. There is so much fun to have when gravity can be manipulated

-Yet to spite all this, it is still hugely derivative of George Lucas' original screenplay and others, whole sections are lifted in their entirety, as different as all this may be it is similar enough to be plagiarism. Yeah, Han is a female but I've now essentially written Lara Croft, who is essentially a female Indiana Jones who is basically 1930's Han Solo. Be I'm not confident enough to start a story from scratch.

Imitate, innovate THEN create. That's my motto.

PS: my Star Wars Re-write the T16 Skyhopper returns(!) after it was cut from the original Star Wars. Luke makes a reference to "shooting womp-rats in my T16" though depiction was cut from A New hope for budgetary reasons though my problem is finding a place to fit a flying sequence in the opening. I'm thinking maybe the T16 flying it is the title sequence and the boarding of the blockade runner be pre-title sequence. Yeah, and I plan to have T16 flying sequence be based on this:


Interior shots you hear the funky music, cut to exterior shots just the sound of the wind and engines and maybe an over the shoulder view of Tusken Raiders. Like the funky music is playing from inside on the pilot's tape deck then in contrast with the barren planet. I think this is a great way to introduce Luca and also what a world Tatooine is, it establishes her as a skilled pilot also a mechanism for Luca to discover the escaped droids/elves. My Luca is rebellious from the start and has no love for her abusive and lecherous uncle (who I am writing as a Peter Griffin type character only he won't constantly be written out of his ill deeds) so you don't need that scene from A New Hope establishing depth of family relations. But things are still taking too long to get established, it's not done, not by half.

So, how bad or good does this sound? Considering it is totally unfilmable, and even unpublishable it is I can never do anything with it.
I'm still waiting on that fanfiction >:
 

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On the recommendation of this board I'm reading My Immortal right now. Dumbledore just screamed "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING YOU MOTHERF***ERS!" While the whole piece is hilarious, that line, coming from that character, made my morning.

Edit: Now Ebony is having a bath. After considering commiting suicide with a "steak" she discovers she's being spied on by two of her professors! And guess what one of them was doing? "Loopin was masticating to it!"

Edit 2: I'm now at the stage that I think someone decided to write this in an effort to take the piss out of overly dramatic emos whining about nothing. And just to have a laugh at the reactions of the reviewers. And if that's not the case, I feel very, very sad.
 

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Mittenz said:
I'm still waiting on that fanfiction >:
Well I do have some actual work for college to do today, but when I do get round where should I post it?

I'm not going to bullshit that I am a perfectionists but the manuscript (if you can call it that) it really is full of notes, half finished sentences and bullet-point chapters.
 

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I kinda thought that Cupcake story was a comedy, I thought it was very well written and about the only time I've ever liked any kind of pony media... Can't win them all it seems.



michiehoward said:
My Immortal -- I read it, then found this.
http://www.youtube.com/user/szaleniec1000
Thank you, A great afternoon spent yesterday. As much as I resent the series, he's really good.

OT: The worst one I've been sent, involved Pokemon rape on the highest extreme and it was just... what. Not good.

Forbiden Fruit: the temptation of Edward Cullen [http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5436269/1/Forbiden_Fruit_the_tempation_of_Edward_Cullen]
Sweet Jesus this is bad. ...Funny at least.
Heh, man-carrot.
 

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It's either Cupcakes or Scootatrap...
Those are also the only fanfics I've read.
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Well, other than some pokemon things...
 

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Trooper924 said:
This thread reminds me why I don't read fan fic.

Sure, I've heard that ten percent of all fan fic written is actually pretty good but I don't want to have to sift through the other ninety percent of sick, disgusting crap to find it.
TVtropes can help you here [http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/FanFicRecommendations].
 

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Weealzabob said:
Edit 2: I'm now at the stage that I think someone decided to write this in an effort to take the piss out of overly dramatic emos whining about nothing. And just to have a laugh at the reactions of the reviewers. And if that's not the case, I feel very, very sad.
Yes; it's trollfic.
 

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The fake harry potter book
Do you mean The Girl who Lived, by Keiran Halcyon?

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/TheGirlWhoLived

If so, I see what you mean. Though the story itself didn't disturb me half as much as the idea that some creep out there decided to rewrite the WHOLE DAMN HARRY POTTER SERIES to feature an underaged lesbian nymphomaniac Mary Sue as a protagonist. And actually thought it was a good idea to POST IT ONLINE!
 

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My brony friend that I see in school every day always tells me about his adventures in MLP fanfiction.

I've heard a lot, but he thinks all the disturbing stuff is more funny.

I purposefully blocked most of the fanfictions out, but he's read many of the famous ones -- Princess Molestia, Cupcakes, Sweet Apple Massacre.

I haven't done anything but listen to My Immortal by these jokesters. Worth listening to them, if you have a few hours to burn.
 

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busterkeatonrules said:
synobal said:
The fake harry potter book
Do you mean The Girl who Lived, by Keiran Halcyon?

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/FanFic/TheGirlWhoLived

If so, I see what you mean. Though the story itself didn't disturb me half as much as the idea that some creep out there decided to rewrite the WHOLE DAMN HARRY POTTER SERIES to feature an underaged lesbian nymphomaniac Mary Sue as a protagonist. And actually thought it was a good idea to POST IT ONLINE!
Question: why does this Mary Sue label exist solely for female characters?

Answer: Sexist bigotry

Males can be the centre of attention and have implausible importance and talents (best quiddich player ever! World saviour still in school) idealized and lacking noteworthy flaws, the primarily functioning as a wish-fulfillment fantasy. Doesn't that exactly describe Harry Potter? But for a woman character to be like that she gets labelled a Mary Sue.

"HOW FUCKING DARE they even THINK or writing a WOMAN of inflated importance Ha... HA! Surely she must have a fatal womanly flaw"[/sarc]

The male equivalent of Mary Sue is SO UNDERUSED there has been zero consensus on what the male-equivalent should be called. Fan-fic is utterly full of over-idealized male characters without any flaws as the most-pure wish fulfilment fantasies yet the reason the Mary Sue label resonates so much is pure misogynistic sexism.

Yeah it was bad idea to put it online, a place infested the woman-hating basement trolls who prattle on "get back in the kitchen" jokes for all eternity. It was a bad idea to put it online ONLY in the same sense as a woman speaking on Xbox Live is a bad idea, how it draws the attention of sexist bigots and hypocritical lecherous perverts. The problem is not with the work or the woman or mary sues, THE PROBLEM IS WITH THE INTERNET!

If the character is badly written, then just say they are badly written. If it is cliche'd then say so. But DO NOT use these sexist labels that act like it is something so unacceptable for a female to be idealized.

Just stop and think about MALE characters of established fictions:
-Captain Kirk
-Luke Skywalker
-James Bond
-Indiana Jones
-Han Solo
-Fucking Batman

Are these men not idealised like all hell? James Bond is the most obvious idealised proxy for Ian Fleming yet the character is NEVER panned for that reason! The most criticism there have been for various incarnations of Bond over the years is that occasionally he is not perfect enough, that on extremely rare occasions he might hint at some sort of weakness or flaw. Its for labels like these that modern fiction has such a critical lack of compelling heroines.

Every time I see someone use the Mary Sue label I just know right away they are a sexist bigot. Male or female, it doesn't matter. Either that or a fool who has put next to no thought into what they are saying.
 

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When I was 16 (about ten years back) and I first discovered fanfiction I came across a Chrono Trigger (a game in which all the main characters are young teens) fanfic that featured rape in the first three paragraphs.

I've stayed the hell away from fanfiction ever since.