I watched it all the way through, I quite liked it visually, but the writing made me bite my knuckles. If there are new episodes currently being planned or written, then I beg the writers to get hold of a DVD of the British series 'The Day Today' (news), its sequel - Brass Eye (documentaries) or even its radio precursor 'On The Hour' for a masterclass on how this type of stuff should be written.
Within 10 seconds of the video proper starting and the first line of 'Get me another beer woman...' I could see what was coming. Not just a faint outline of it either, I could have stopped there and described each scene (although possibly not in sequence)
Maybe at the end it was a toss up between a prison sentence or a fatal overdose, but either way, I'm not in love.
I'll watch the second one because I understand how much effort goes into getting something like this together into a finished form, and how soul destroying heavy criticism can be.
However, I really mean it about the writing.
Within 10 seconds of the video proper starting and the first line of 'Get me another beer woman...' I could see what was coming. Not just a faint outline of it either, I could have stopped there and described each scene (although possibly not in sequence)
Maybe at the end it was a toss up between a prison sentence or a fatal overdose, but either way, I'm not in love.
I'll watch the second one because I understand how much effort goes into getting something like this together into a finished form, and how soul destroying heavy criticism can be.
However, I really mean it about the writing.
