Except for the part where it says there was water before their was light. Which is impossible, because H2O requires the whole O part. Fussion of light elements into oxygen would give off light. Light was one of the first things after the big bang.madwarper said:"In the beginning, God created the Heaven and the Earth. And the Earth was without form, and void; and darkness was upon the face of the deep. And the Spirit of God was moved on the face of the waters. And God said, Let there be light: and there was light."believer258 said:(can't remember Genesis 1 at the moment, sorry)
ie. Big bang -> Space and matter. Matter =/= Planets & Stars; Darkness + Hydrogen > other elements. Stars and planets started to form.
That's just my take.
But if you ignore that, then sure, it..... kind of..... fits..... almost like..... some desert wanderer made a poetic guess...