Recent content by NaitsabesH

I see. Thank you very much for your feedback. I appreciate it. Somethings are somewhat hard seeing as English is my second language, but that's just why i wanna improve. As for the short story it seems i somehow managed to get a 6 (highest grade) But after reading your feedback it seems our...

Just do a mix of them all. I can take it

So basically i need some tips on how to become a better writer. I try my very best but i know i have a long way to go. Below is a short story i was to write for a two hour english test with the subject of not fitting in being between 500-600 words long. constuctive criticism needed. Not...

Have you ever seen a movie and though to youself: "I can't believe this was mere acting" or "Why are tears streaming down my face?"? Captain Phillips is exactly that kind of movie. In Captain Phillips (played by Tom Hanks) you follow a dedicated captain and his crew as they are shipping...

To the moon is basically a text adventure with puzzles at the end of each level. It's rather text heavy and has most of it's emphasis on the story with soothing piano music in the background. The only gameplay you get from it will be moving from place to place to continue the story, it leave you...