A proofreading request:

[chaser[phoenix]]

I'm not particularly sure if this is allowed on the forums and if it's not, please just close or delete this thread.

I missed my last class before Spring Break began (due to travel), and in that class my professor returned the first draft of a paper we had been assigned perhaps a week prior.
Well the final draft is due tomorrow.

I warned the teacher about my absence from her class on this final Thursday prior to Spring Break, and she told me she'd email me what needed to be done to my paper to raise the grade of the final draft.
Aside from a parenthesis issue, alphabetizing and titling my works cited page, the main issue is just grammatical.

I've always been terrible at correcting my own paper's grammar since everything looks fine to me as far as locations of commas and whatnot go.
So my cordial request to anyone (since I know for sure there are a lot of you far more skilled in the language than I) is if one of you would be willing to proofread my paper.
I'd ask elsewhere if I had any friends or family as good at English as I, but I don't.

Thanks in advance if anyone can do it, and like I said, if this is not allowed can you please just delete the thread.

 

[J-Man]

If you posted it here, I'm sure some escapists would help.

 

[chaser[phoenix]]

*yoink*

 

[sky14kemea]

yeah just copy and paste the whole thing, if one person cant find a mistake someone else will XD

edit: ninja'd

looks pretty good to me

 

[chaser[phoenix]]

looks pretty good to me

My teacher said the only things that were "wrong" with it was grammar and I'd imagine a lot of that is punctuation since I've fixed all of the other things she told me to. Everything else, to me, still looks fine. I can keep looking and hope someone sees the same stuff my teacher saw. But thank you for looking at it ^^;