Ryotknife said:
If Geralt and Triss never tried to make a family, that would create a time paradox.
-Alvin would have never used the lessons learned from Geralt as motivation to become the Big Bad
-Big Bad Alvin would never send his henchmen to attack the witchers in the beginning.
-With no attack, Geralt would never meet Alvin.
end result, Witcher 1 would have never happened.
I just realized... was this supposed to be a defense of Triss being out of character? Since I just commented that, while awesome, the ending didn't justify that?
Here's the thing. "Because we had this cool ending in mind where the big bad is actually Alvin" is not an excuse for making a character behave out of character unless they also establish that Mind Control was involved.
A good ending is all well and good - great even. But they "foreshadowed" it by making an established character behave strangely for no other purpose than to shoe-horn in that twist. Good writing at the end doesn't make the earlier issue any less sloppy.
I can now see why they did it - but they still did it
badly. That section remains the most painfully out of character, forced, and stereotypical aspect of the whole game. That moment is the weakest link in an otherwise good plot.
Or, to put it another way, I see now why they shot themselves in the foot, but it doesn't make it any less painful.
Considering how much attention and craft was put into the rest of the game, the out-of-no-where Triss character shift just feels sloppy and badly handled. It's like they had an outline, and they put a team of writers on each of the other sections... and wrote out the Triss bit on a piece of napkin. Looking back, it seems even worse now by comparison to all the good character development around it. Like a box of chocolates with one cat turd in it.
Okay, that last comment was a bit of hyperbole. I wouldn't want to eat a box of chocolates with a cat turd in it. On the other hand, while I still choke on the Triss section, the other items in the proverbial box are still edible. But, like the cat turd metaphor, they are also harmed by its presence.
I know. It's like a good meal served with clam chowder.
Of course to understand that, you have to know about my issues with clam chowder. I like clams. I like corn chowder. But if you mix clams and chowder, the smell makes me want to vomit. I don't know why. If you serve clam chowder with a meal, even if I don't eat the clam chowder, it harms the rest of the meal because the smell is still there, making me slightly sickened.
I've rambled a good bit about this, both before and now. Suffice it to say, I see why they did it, but I still think they did it badly. Just... better writing in that section could have helped. Triss instantly transforming into a shrewish mother just isn't believable. Becoming a parent takes time. That is NOT a natural response to sudden parenthood.
To have the attitudes about raising children that Triss has, including her fear of spoiling him, requires that she has raised children or been part of a family. She hasn't - according to others defending this scene, she was taken from her family at a young age and raised as a Sorceress. She knows nothing at all about how to raise children, so her instant transformation into the stereotypical "motherly" character makes no sense. Being bitchy about giving a kid sweets isn't genetically ingrained - it's a learned response. Believing that Geralt would make a good father when he's a professional monster hunter and woman seducer is just... not reasonable. Triss is a smart girl - she previously accepted that Geralt risks his life and fucks around. Now, because she wants to raise a child (fair enough), she expects Geralt to immediately conform to society's image of being a father? Even if she loves him and wants to be with him, that makes little sense, particularly since she doesn't want to give up being a Sorceress. It's just bad - it shows no understanding about WHY parents behave the way they do. Which is absurd - some of the writers must have had kids, had close family members with kids, something.
Yes, I've had more time to think about this and figure out exactly why it is that section of the plot so annoyed me. Geralt has character growth - he examines himself and decides that he'd like a family. Triss, meanwhile, has a child delivered to her home and INSTANTLY her "Mom Hormones" turn on and her character changes for no reason. Now, even if she wanted a kid (which she made no previous indication of), she'd still need time to, you know, GET TO KNOW HIM. To learn to be a parent. To learn that giving a kid candy all the time is a bad idea. To develop, as we see Geralt develop. Instead, we get Instant Harpy Mom.
Fun fact - I always refused to give Alvin candy (since I always stored or sold it, so never had any) and I always refused to train him with my sword (because swords aren't toys) and Alvin always said "I hate you and Triss!" afterwards. Triss, meanwhile, always said "You're so good with Alvin" afterwards.
Meanwhile, when Alvin asked for a Dog, I always promised that, someday, I'd get him one. Because dogs make good GUARDS, not to mention good Monster Detectors, and thus are a very practical pet for a Witcher's son. Alvin would be pleased... and Triss would scold me for spoiling Alvin. Because I promised him a practical gift some undetermined time in the near future.
In the Prologue, Triss tried to fuck Geralt's memories back from beyond the grave. In Chapter 3, she turns into a grouchy mom reminiscent of Marge Simpson. In Chapter 5, she talks about loving Alvin... she's known him for a few weeks, at best.
Lisa Cuddy, of the TV series House MD., took months to attach to her adopted daughter - after spending two whole seasons trying and failing to get pregnant, mind - and had an entire episode dedicated to the fact that she felt like a failure for not loving her child sooner. She has a long running character arc about this - and the process is well developed, so that when she does come to love her child, it is natural and believable.
Triss knows this fairly annoying kid for less than a month, after he gets dropped on her out of the blue (she doesn't even know he exists until after Geralt places the sensors at the beginning of chapter 3), and she loves him like her very own.
IF Alvin was mind-controlling her, then I could see that. He was certainly creepy enough. But, Future Alvin never has those powers. Other powers, yes, but not those powers. The game seems to think that Female Hormones are enough to entirely change a woman's personality and make her instantly love a child. Yeah, no.
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Wow. Not sure how that got so long. When I said "suffice it to say" I really meant to finish there. Huh.
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I think I'll just post this now before I write any more. ^^;;