Bardom #2-4

[thespyisdead]

well... here i am again to make a fool out of myself, but i did read the suggestions, and has now been more or less aimed at the target audience. After reviewing the those said comments i have to apologize for my first stab at web comics... it was a tiny bit inappropriate. But now that that is out of the way, please let me know what you think about these.

On a side note unpopular opinions rule!!!

 

[lRookiel]

haha, I liked #2 especially. it does what it's supposed to, keep at it I guess.

 

[Jonluw]

The jokes are getting better, but you really need to do something about the font and the placement of the "speech bubbles". As it is it's uncomfortable and confusing to read.

 

[Padwolf]

The second was my favourite. You have improved greatly from the first one. All I can think of is to change the font. Good job good sir! Keep at it.

 

[JoJo]

I concur with Matthew and Jonluw, the font could definitely do with changing to one easier to read. The spelling and grammar could do with some improvement too, I spotted at-least two spelling mistakes between the three strips which really damage the web-comics professionalism since if you aren't willing to put in a few seconds to proof-read each tile, that indicates you aren't willing to really put in the effort to make a good web-comic. Finally the jokes are better than last time but I was still kinda "meh" to all three, the content needs to be stepped up a notch if you want this project to be a success.