Batman and Captain America Rescue Cat From Burning Building

Chessrook44

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Chaosritter said:
Respirating a cat is pretty badass. And probably pretty disturbing to watch...

Chessrook44 said:
I like this story. I mean, how often can you say "Batman rescued a cat from a burning building" and NOT be talking about a comic book plot?
Has Batman ever resuced a pet in distress in one of the comics?
Hell if I know, I don't really read comic books.
 

StewShearerOld

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Very cool story though if the house was unoccupied I can only assume the so-called "heroes" started it, or the cat.

Stew I think you need to whip your editor into shape. There are a few typos:
"in this case played John"
"uses superheroes help teach"
"began to performing mouth-to-mouth"
"pleased to be see the Dark Knight"
"adult selves can do think"

And I'm not sure you can vacate smoke, that sounds like a person moving out of a cloud of smoke. Sorry to be a douche, but I hope it helps.
You're not being a douche at all and I appreciate you pointing those out. That I let that much slip by me is unacceptable and I'd rather they be pointed out so I can fix them than leave there for the world to keep seeing. Thanks much.
 

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This is quite a nice story. altrough i wish it was something like a baby so this story coudl go further. not that i want a baby tu burn or anything but rather a "real world superhero" actually being a hero would be very nice for a change.