Can i have some feedback please?

[johnman]

Me and a freind created a video for the escapsit film festival, and other than a few people, havent really had any meaningful feedback on it. We are looking to resuse a few ideas from it for projects (school mostly), and as you escapists understand the kind of humor we're going for, would you be kind enough to watch it and tell us which parts, if any, were anygood and which parts failed

http://www.escapistmagazine.com/videos/view/the-escapist-film-festival/372-2-Gamers-from-Lincolnshire
Thanks

 

[Thespamanator]

Well....

a) Record your sound later on so it is all the same volume, I found myself turning my speakers up for one bit, then down the next, then up again etc.

b) Didn't find most of it that funny...