A very well put together sequence, if let down by the Adam and Eve scene which just felt misplaced. However, it does encapsulate my big issue with the Genesis story, which has never been the creationism v science aspect or anything like that, but rather, that the Genesis story is profoundly anti-human. The whole "humans have screwed up paradise" concept is just so ridiculous. Don't misunderstand me, I think the world could be a much better place than it is, and things like pollution are on us, but I just can't accept the notion that prior to human beings the world was some kind of disney-esk enchanted forest where all the animals live in harmony and everything is right with the world.
A world without human beings, while it might have more trees, would be just as harsh and cruel place as the world today. When people depict this fanciful "natural paradise" you never see a scene of a zebra screaming as a lioness drags it down by it's throat, or of a male chimpanzee killing the young of a rival group. There is now, and always has been pain and suffering in this world with and without human beings.
Now as a foot note I do just want to make it clear that just because there is pain and suffering in nature, that does not mean I think it is OK for humans to cause pain and suffering, we should strive to be better than that. I just object to the propagation of the fallacy that humans are somehow the root cause.