My name is Cameron Bryce and I am attempting to work on my commentary and ability to entertain as a comedian. I'm starting off making videos for YouTube that are related to video games, and I am looking for constructive criticism as to the quality of my videos, the way I speak, etcetera. Feel free to critique in any way possible, I will give two videos here:
Halo Reach New Year Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7k-nRFWkaSk
Penumbra Overture Let's Play Part 1: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZomDEu9eo2M
The beginning of the Penumbra one has kind of low audio at the beginning, that was more of a technical malfunction that I will fix in the future, so please excuse me on that account.
Anyway, all help would be appreciated.
Halo Reach New Year Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7k-nRFWkaSk
Penumbra Overture Let's Play Part 1: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZomDEu9eo2M
The beginning of the Penumbra one has kind of low audio at the beginning, that was more of a technical malfunction that I will fix in the future, so please excuse me on that account.
Anyway, all help would be appreciated.
