MiracleOfSound said:
Here you go guys, another one for you, as promised!
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Enjoy and let me know what you think
Dude, please put your name or an indication of what the video is in the title... I opened this expecting some totally random and useless thread about the character
Aaaaand, hmmm. First impression much lower than the other two (mind you, that's as much of a praise to the other two than it is a "boo" against this one). Music is alright, but the text is somewhat weaker imo as is your voice going with it and the music. Chorus is the worst offender to me, I think with something better there (lyrics) it could improve the whole song tenfold for me.
Note, that's just my 2 cents, not even close to a professional opinion or anything and it's still not bad by a longshot, just see several places that could use improvement to move the song from "ok" to "awesome" in my eyes
