The current iteration of DC cinematic characters thus far have very little by way of inner life, which makes it difficult to care about them when the multi-million dollar special effects sequences are being thrown around.
(Potential spoilers ahead if you haven't seen the recent DC Universe movies... Also, what are you doing in this thread?)
I should feel like Superman is making a big, noble sacrifice at the end of BvS, and his loss is a terrible one, rather than wondering why he couldn't have just given the weapon to someone who wasn't vulnerable to Kryptonite. I should feel that Batman is actually carrying the weight of feeling responsible for all the vulnerable humans exposed to super-human conflicts, not that he's an extremist psychopath who's just been waiting for a chance to act out. I shouldn't laugh when the Suicide Squad gets a last-minute addition with a lame power, knowing that he's going to die fast in a vain attempt to suggest that we should be taking the tough-guy act of Waller and company seriously. I shouldn't feel that El Diablo giving up his oath of pacifism is trivial, or that his declaration that his team is his "family" is laughable.
Rocket Raccoon and Groot from Guardians of the Galaxy have more inner life, and a more credible and meaningful relationship, than anyone in the the cinematic DCU right now. And they're both made entirely out of CG!!!!
Nearly everything in the recent DC movies has been right out of Scriptwriting 101. You can map out the plot arc and the intended emotional arc beat by beat, and set a clock to their attempts at paying off. The unwillingness to indulge in humor between characters and the determination that everything be grand developments and artificial short-hand for sentiment shortchanges everything. You can imagine brackets around pieces of dialogue and whole scenes that say things like [THEY HAVE A WARM, INTIMATE BOND!] and [HE'S BEEN DRIVEN TO THE EDGE!] and [SHE CRAZY!] and [THIS MOMENT OF TENSION UNDERSCORES HOW STRONG THEIR LATER BOND WILL BE! NO, REALLY!]
But as to the original question: Can it be fixed?
Yes. But I don't know that it will be.
Having beaten chests and staked ground that THIS IS NOT THE MARVEL UNIVERSE. THESE SUPERHEROES ARE, AND WILL BE, VERY DIFFERENT, they can't now just crib the Marvel playbook. They'd probably muck it up if they tried, anyway.
But they need to turn down the volume, badly. These last few movies have been "comic book" in just the way that makes the phrase derogatory. Big melodrama, cataclysmic events, and very little to effectively build up the people behind all of that to make us invest. If you stand behind a jet all of the time, you don't become more impressed with the power of a jet engine; you just go deaf. We need quiet moments that aren't just obligatory set-up for later explosions, trying to give them meaning.
BvS was 151 minutes, and it felt like it. Possibly longer.
What if we had had two minutes of Bruce Wayne being a warm and efficient boss in his Wayne Enterprises building to give his character more dimension and a little more significance to what he felt when it was being torn apart? Surely that would have been worth a damn dream sequence or two?
And, you know, develop one of those characters who die in the attack. Don't write that off as time that could be better spent on things where the soundtrack overcompensates.
Captain Boomerang in SS carries around a plush unicorn. As it stands in the movie, that's not character- it's just quirk. It's "flair"- like the quirky buttons the waitresses in the chain restaurant in Office Space are required to wear. What if one of these supervillains made fun of him for it- and he was hurt, and embarrassed? Not macho-bravado, "I'm gonna kill you" hurt, not some cheap "ha, ha, tough guy has a plushie" joke, but just- stops talking, cuts himself off, shuts down? Even if the plush unicorn never gets its own neon-lit character introduction, even if they never brought it up again, it would suggest that maybe the character has a depth and a history that's deeper than what stands on the surface.
And it would take maybe a minute of precious running time.
And that's it in a nutshell. They need to stop taking intimate character moments as merely set-up for later stake-raising (hostages!) or sacrifices, and assuming that if they don't fulfill those requirements- and as expediently as possible- they're a waste of time. Good rhythm, good pacing, isn't just a series of moments that go "boom"; they're all the proceeding moments that go "Ha ha" and "huh..." and "aw...".
Will Wonder Woman do that...? I dunno, the previews seem awfully determined to pass of gray- and sepia-toned scenes as pseudohistorical and therefore meaningful, and there's a lot of crash and bang and not a whole lot of "and here's why you should care." Saddled with the additional burden of "And we can make a female hero who fights just as hard as the big boys, foiling every meme of the mean, sexist world while we're at it", we may have even less time and energy to invest in genuine heart.
I hope I'm wrong. I hope WW is where they turn it all around. But I wouldn't give it even odds.
(Potential spoilers ahead if you haven't seen the recent DC Universe movies... Also, what are you doing in this thread?)
I should feel like Superman is making a big, noble sacrifice at the end of BvS, and his loss is a terrible one, rather than wondering why he couldn't have just given the weapon to someone who wasn't vulnerable to Kryptonite. I should feel that Batman is actually carrying the weight of feeling responsible for all the vulnerable humans exposed to super-human conflicts, not that he's an extremist psychopath who's just been waiting for a chance to act out. I shouldn't laugh when the Suicide Squad gets a last-minute addition with a lame power, knowing that he's going to die fast in a vain attempt to suggest that we should be taking the tough-guy act of Waller and company seriously. I shouldn't feel that El Diablo giving up his oath of pacifism is trivial, or that his declaration that his team is his "family" is laughable.
Rocket Raccoon and Groot from Guardians of the Galaxy have more inner life, and a more credible and meaningful relationship, than anyone in the the cinematic DCU right now. And they're both made entirely out of CG!!!!
Nearly everything in the recent DC movies has been right out of Scriptwriting 101. You can map out the plot arc and the intended emotional arc beat by beat, and set a clock to their attempts at paying off. The unwillingness to indulge in humor between characters and the determination that everything be grand developments and artificial short-hand for sentiment shortchanges everything. You can imagine brackets around pieces of dialogue and whole scenes that say things like [THEY HAVE A WARM, INTIMATE BOND!] and [HE'S BEEN DRIVEN TO THE EDGE!] and [SHE CRAZY!] and [THIS MOMENT OF TENSION UNDERSCORES HOW STRONG THEIR LATER BOND WILL BE! NO, REALLY!]
But as to the original question: Can it be fixed?
Yes. But I don't know that it will be.
Having beaten chests and staked ground that THIS IS NOT THE MARVEL UNIVERSE. THESE SUPERHEROES ARE, AND WILL BE, VERY DIFFERENT, they can't now just crib the Marvel playbook. They'd probably muck it up if they tried, anyway.
But they need to turn down the volume, badly. These last few movies have been "comic book" in just the way that makes the phrase derogatory. Big melodrama, cataclysmic events, and very little to effectively build up the people behind all of that to make us invest. If you stand behind a jet all of the time, you don't become more impressed with the power of a jet engine; you just go deaf. We need quiet moments that aren't just obligatory set-up for later explosions, trying to give them meaning.
BvS was 151 minutes, and it felt like it. Possibly longer.
What if we had had two minutes of Bruce Wayne being a warm and efficient boss in his Wayne Enterprises building to give his character more dimension and a little more significance to what he felt when it was being torn apart? Surely that would have been worth a damn dream sequence or two?
And, you know, develop one of those characters who die in the attack. Don't write that off as time that could be better spent on things where the soundtrack overcompensates.
Captain Boomerang in SS carries around a plush unicorn. As it stands in the movie, that's not character- it's just quirk. It's "flair"- like the quirky buttons the waitresses in the chain restaurant in Office Space are required to wear. What if one of these supervillains made fun of him for it- and he was hurt, and embarrassed? Not macho-bravado, "I'm gonna kill you" hurt, not some cheap "ha, ha, tough guy has a plushie" joke, but just- stops talking, cuts himself off, shuts down? Even if the plush unicorn never gets its own neon-lit character introduction, even if they never brought it up again, it would suggest that maybe the character has a depth and a history that's deeper than what stands on the surface.
And it would take maybe a minute of precious running time.
And that's it in a nutshell. They need to stop taking intimate character moments as merely set-up for later stake-raising (hostages!) or sacrifices, and assuming that if they don't fulfill those requirements- and as expediently as possible- they're a waste of time. Good rhythm, good pacing, isn't just a series of moments that go "boom"; they're all the proceeding moments that go "Ha ha" and "huh..." and "aw...".
Will Wonder Woman do that...? I dunno, the previews seem awfully determined to pass of gray- and sepia-toned scenes as pseudohistorical and therefore meaningful, and there's a lot of crash and bang and not a whole lot of "and here's why you should care." Saddled with the additional burden of "And we can make a female hero who fights just as hard as the big boys, foiling every meme of the mean, sexist world while we're at it", we may have even less time and energy to invest in genuine heart.
I hope I'm wrong. I hope WW is where they turn it all around. But I wouldn't give it even odds.