Quite enjoyable this week guys, though i do have some points to say which i hope you do take upon yourselves for your next video in the same vein as this one.
First of all, Tad Maul? - if i heard correctly- I hope this was simply done as a tribute to Brass Eye's Ted Maul. However even if it was a simple tribute, or possibly you heard the name watching Brass Eye back in the day and it stuck in your head, or maybe you ripped it off completly. People will generally focus on the latter of the 3 and use it to bash you.
Next, you're using only a handful of actors for multiple roles, similar to a sketch show. I Implore you to - guessing by your accents and what you may be familiar to - like Harry Enfield, Big Train and Man-Woman that you make more of attempt to disguise an actor if he has just appeared on screen. In this case using the Actor for the Newscaster as some of the people whitin the stories themselves. Just seemed lazy to me.
And it doesn't have to be substantial appearance changes. A pair of sunglasses, a Hat or two, or even taking on person who is quite distinguishable in the first place - ie the ginger long haired bloke, who i assume is the creator giving himself plenty of screen time, no offence - and confining him to one role.
I know of course people have complained about the humor itself, however these things stood out to me as simple issues you could fix. The humor, though not exactly brilliant, yet still showing potential is something you can develop. Though, just watch letting things run on too long, use clever edits to keep it short and sweet.
First of all, Tad Maul? - if i heard correctly- I hope this was simply done as a tribute to Brass Eye's Ted Maul. However even if it was a simple tribute, or possibly you heard the name watching Brass Eye back in the day and it stuck in your head, or maybe you ripped it off completly. People will generally focus on the latter of the 3 and use it to bash you.
Next, you're using only a handful of actors for multiple roles, similar to a sketch show. I Implore you to - guessing by your accents and what you may be familiar to - like Harry Enfield, Big Train and Man-Woman that you make more of attempt to disguise an actor if he has just appeared on screen. In this case using the Actor for the Newscaster as some of the people whitin the stories themselves. Just seemed lazy to me.
And it doesn't have to be substantial appearance changes. A pair of sunglasses, a Hat or two, or even taking on person who is quite distinguishable in the first place - ie the ginger long haired bloke, who i assume is the creator giving himself plenty of screen time, no offence - and confining him to one role.
I know of course people have complained about the humor itself, however these things stood out to me as simple issues you could fix. The humor, though not exactly brilliant, yet still showing potential is something you can develop. Though, just watch letting things run on too long, use clever edits to keep it short and sweet.
