I've been writing a book since I was 16 and, in September, looked it in the eye and said, "Boy, you're shit. Time to rewrite this *****." I'll admit, the manuscript was horribly written but now that I've learned more about writing and actually have a plot in mind, I think I've got it ready to roll.
So, fellow escapists, you all seem to be fans of literature (this is a magazine, right?), tear my story down. I want this story ripped to shreds. It'll never get better unless someone grows the balls to criticize it.
So do your worst and make my day.
Interlogue 1 + Chapter 1 [http://cid-4da7d7d155cf676e.office.live.com/view.aspx/.Public/Interlogue1%20%5EM%20Chapter1.docx]
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EDIT: Fixed Page 12 mistake
EDIT2: Fixed Jimmeh1337's stuff.
So, fellow escapists, you all seem to be fans of literature (this is a magazine, right?), tear my story down. I want this story ripped to shreds. It'll never get better unless someone grows the balls to criticize it.
So do your worst and make my day.
Interlogue 1 + Chapter 1 [http://cid-4da7d7d155cf676e.office.live.com/view.aspx/.Public/Interlogue1%20%5EM%20Chapter1.docx]
Tell me if the link doesn't work.
EDIT: Fixed Page 12 mistake
EDIT2: Fixed Jimmeh1337's stuff.