Feedback on Video Project "Safety First Ep1 - Teabagging"

[McGodot]

Hi there, we just created a pilot for an online series, and we're looking for feedback.
Constructive criticism is welcome!

We're not advertising here, so don't watch if you don't want but we're REALLY just looking for constructive criticism! The escapist is something we aspire to, so this our exact target audience!

We're already aware of various audio volume issues (Under re-working already) but consider this the pilot. A vision of the direction of the series.
Once the audio is fixed, we'll no doubt have a much cleaner project, but any other feedback would be HIGHLY apriciated.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AWrZHhmkXzE

More importantly...

Did you like it?

Thanks again chums.

 

[Chechosaurus]

I have a funny feeling that you're not allowed to advertise yourself like this. That being said, I've watched half of it so far and I think it's brilliant. Good British humour. Thought I'd post and let you know before the thread gets locked or something.

 

[McGodot]

It not advertising, more that we want feedback, and this is about as good a place as any to find the opinion of our target audience. We genuinely want feedback!

 

[Da Joz]

That was pretty funny. Did you guys try submitting this to the escapist film festival?

 

[McGodot]

Thanks for the kind words everyone.
This is something we want to continue.
Also, No, we didn't enter it into any competitions, but it's something we'd certainly look towards. We're certainly fans of the Escapist.

 

[McAdder85]

looks like you managed to accidently repost my co-hosting chum

Sorry for the re-post everyone, cross communication error. thank you all for the kind comments.