Flow

[MrBrightside919]

How do I make it so my writing/reviews FLOW? I've been told my reviews can be STIIF and I wanna fix that problem. Any suggestions?

 

[Lukeje]

Read your reviews out loud. You'll soon realise whether the writing 'flows' or not.

 

[NekoAnastasia]

Re-read what you've written aloud. When I write, any jarring sentences, clunkyiness or pauses that ruin the flow jump out at me because they stop the nice narrative you have going. Don't be afraid to use more longer sentences than simple ones (although those can also be succinct and effective) and make friends with commas and semi-colons.

 

[Grenbyron]

Read it to someone or record yourself reading it.

 

[Dastardos]

Trial and Error. Just read over it and see if you enjoy it and if it is boring