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EBHughsThe1st

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"Rewind"
Okay, so imagine Mirrors Edge but more of a First Person Shooter.

One of the key points I though of when I came up with this game is the level of immersion. Your character, Bartholomew Arlington, accountant, wears glasses. So maybe, when you run through steam, your vision fogs up. When you get hit or knocked back, your glasses shift out of place or fly off. Maybe when you're falling, they could float off but are then pulled back. While you're running, your arms are pumping and, the more you run, your breathing becomes more constant.
So for shooting, I want to keep it solid and put a bloody health meter in there. So, your phone keeps it all in track.
Your Battery shows your life and an app shows the weapon's current condition.
So, mid battle or whatever, you can press a button and check your stats.
Weapons include a pistol, machine gun, shotgun, lead pipe, shock-launcher (Sort of a long-range stun-gun), an RPG and other weapons I haven't though of yet.

Story wise, you play Bartholomew Arlington, who lives in the year 20XX. I don't know. So anyway, a few years prior, humans came in contact with an alien race that we joined up with. We were low on resources, so we needed help, and they helped us on our feet. So now they are a sort of benevolent combine and everybody has these special cybernetic implants that improve life, stimulate thought, and run computers. The game begins on a black screen, and then Bartholomew's eyes open on the day that 75% of Earth has these implants. They are now free to install. SO, he does not have an implant. Never will. Too stubborn. While he's at work, he gets a mysterious e-mail telling him to meet at the docks. The "Combine" catch on and chase him through the city. Act one is a chase where the, let's call them Sargats, hell, I don't know, use all resources to stop him. Act 2, he meets with the resistance, who seems equally mysterious. Act 3, he is betrayed by the resistance. I haven't worked it out past that.
Bartholomew talks, by the way. You can hear him. He's not silent.
He's smart, cynical, sarcastic, and flawed.

Now, for the mechanic that somewhat separates the game from others.
WHen you die, you can rewind the game all the way to the beginning of the chapter in order to avoid death, kill the guy, dodge the rocket, or restart the crumbling bridge.

So what do you think?
 

DarkDain

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Rewind to the beginning of the chapter? So you mean like, you can reload the game and start over? I am actually at this moment playing Dark Messiah of might and magic and it has alot of this stuff, the breathing/arm pumping/physics awesomeness, body/vision leaning etc, and the protagonist voices himself very clearly. I'm loving it so far.
 

EBHughsThe1st

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DarkDain said:
Rewind to the beginning of the chapter? So you mean like, you can reload the game and start over?
Think the Half-Life 2 Chapters. Like an area. You're limited to the end of the loading screen.
 

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EBHughsThe1st said:
DarkDain said:
Rewind to the beginning of the chapter? So you mean like, you can reload the game and start over?
Think the Half-Life 2 Chapters. Like an area. You're limited to the end of the loading screen.
Quick Save, Quick Load :3
 

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DarkDain said:
EBHughsThe1st said:
DarkDain said:
Rewind to the beginning of the chapter? So you mean like, you can reload the game and start over?
Think the Half-Life 2 Chapters. Like an area. You're limited to the end of the loading screen.
Quick Save, Quick Load :3
Maybe I can use an art style. Like a white gleaming distopia.
 

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Um...how exactly is this more interesting than 99% of FPSes on the market right now? What possible reason would I buy this over one of a dozen other shooters in a given release year? Why should I care?

What I'm saying is, you can probably sell this game to Activision or EA no trouble at all.

Just make sure there's a sassy dark haired girl somewhere in the story that he will not actually have sex with, but they will gripe at each other the entire time so we'll know they'll want to. Make her hot but not too hot, so we can pretend she's our girlfriend and post pornographic fanart of her on deviantART.

And when you get it made, get Yahtzee to review it. I'm sure he'll love it. Especially if you send him the $120 Collector's Edition that comes in a cookie tin and has an 8 page, 6x6 prequel comic book with it.
 

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Seriously not too bad, but make it edgeier. Level 1 get out of your office building. The "combine" has not showed up yet, but friends and co-workers implants "make" them attack you. You have to kill them with a variety of office supplies, until you kill your boss (bestseller right there) and find all of the guns he had been squirreling away in his office. Goodbye stapler to the head of Linda in Accounting, hello .50. (smash a guy in the face with a keyboard) "Press any key to continue Phil!" Then the "combine" can find you and chase you until you inevetably try to "save" your wife and children. Yeah, you have to kill them too. And how about this for the best part... have it link with facebook. Yup, it will use your "friends" list to name all of the characters in the game with the names of your real friends and family (and children.) There could be all kinds of functionality. Posting to your friends on how exactly you killed them, perhaps sending them a screencap of the deed. This could get you GTA SA levels of media coverage. And for the inevetable "betrayal" by the resistance late in the game... you were wrong. All of your friends and family died by your hand for nothing. Really drive it in and twist it... camera replays of butchering your best friend with a 3 hole punch before driving his head into the copier. Throwing the match that lights up the family home you just paid off to cover up the murders of your wife and kids, all up in smoke for nothing.
 

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WHen you die, you can rewind the game all the way to the beginning of the chapter in order to avoid death, kill the guy, dodge the rocket, or restart the crumbling bridge.
So the feature is that you restart the level every time you die? Nice feature.
I think what he's getting at is there would be a Prince of Persia like rewind feature that will go as far back as the beginning of each level, not just a few seconds. But I'm glad you jumped on him without thinking about it for a nannosecond like everyone else who decided to snark instead of comment.
 

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TheBluesader said:
Um...how exactly is this more interesting than 99% of FPSes on the market right now? What possible reason would I buy this over one of a dozen other shooters in a given release year? Why should I care?

What I'm saying is, you can probably sell this game to Activision or EA no trouble at all.

Just make sure there's a sassy dark haired girl somewhere in the story that he will not actually have sex with, but they will gripe at each other the entire time so we'll know they'll want to. Make her hot but not too hot, so we can pretend she's our girlfriend and post pornographic fanart of her on deviantART.

And when you get it made, get Yahtzee to review it. I'm sure he'll love it. Especially if you send him the $120 Collector's Edition that comes in a cookie tin and has an 8 page, 6x6 prequel comic book with it.
I already have mine pre-ordered. I get the action figure.

But OT: Sure, sounds like the Matrix meets Half-Life meets Prince of Persia. I'd probably play it, but it'd be a rental... I needs me some replay value for purchase. ^_^