Getting started on a novel. Any tips, tricks, or rants?

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Legendairy314

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Well, I've decided to shut up about it and actually write out a book I've been procrastinating with for a while now. Main problem, don't really know where to start. It's supposed to be one book out of a fairly long saga and I need to make sure to interconnect the plot with unexpected/foreshadowed twists later on. Another one is creating characters and making them both likeable, interesting, and complex and not grating or annoying. Also, there's a significant amount of backstory (sci-fi setting) and I'm not really sure how to present it other than through small bits and pieces that make sense as the story progresses.

Any experience or tips writing novels would be appreciated and could really keep me going through this long process.
 

Antagonist86

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Start anywhere you feel like you want to start.

Assign a character for to-do's, like ? so when you get to a part you don't feel like writing go (?protagonist monologue about ww3)

Then later on search back in your document to ? and fill in the gaps.

Don't edit yourself after each chapter, you'll only start doubting your own work. Instead edit twice when your done with your novel.

Don't be afraid to rewrite sections or retcon yourself when needed, but not after each chapter.

Let someone proof read it regularly along the way. Not for spelling/grammar checks but more along the lines of 'does this make sense?' when writing something complex especially in a sci-fi world it's easy to take certain things for granted and under explain them. When your proofreader finds things they don't quite understand, explain it to them in the novel.

If you have allot of high-tech gadgets, remind your readers what they do. If you explained how a warpgateprismthingy works in the first chapter, and during chapter 5 your story involves a warpgateprismthingy let the character have a brief 'flashback' to the first time you explained it, not for the character but so your readers can still follow along.

Make character bio's, no set form, just anything you're comfortable with (personally I make little Dungeon and Dragon sheets) and when in doubt you can check back to their bio's, as in "Is this really something Fred would do?" On those bio's you can also update their personal growth. Make a little memo on each card whenever they experienced something that changes them in some way, even minor.

Be aware of the God-character. Don't let your protagonist become too powerful, or present them with challenges you know they could overcome easily.

But most of all, just start. Start writing if you haven't already. It doesn't matter where, but start. Start at the final endgame battle if you must but just start.

Edit: Need coffee before I start typing in other languages.
 

KarlMonster

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Not all characters need to be likeable. Some of the most memorable characters are cranky jerks, and some of those are the protagonists. But you're right, its hard to assign names and traits.

A little organization can go a long way here. Character bios is definitely a good idea, particularly if there is back-story and prehistory. A general outline will help. And I hate outlines, so I mean a really vague outline. Something more like a timeline to set your plot points to. This can also help you think about the overarching story at times when you run out of ideas.

Foreshadowing: less is more. Always.

I agree about avoiding the strong urge to edit, that's what traps me. Then by the time I'm done editing, I hate my whole story idea.

Speaking of which, I'm holding out for November is National Novel Writing Month, because I'm still ambivalent about my story idea.
 

FinalDream

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1) In regards to organisation getting some writing software really helps, it certainty did for me (unpublished before you ask). There's plenty to choose from so take a look and see what paid for/freebies you can find that suit you. To get you started I use Scrivener, it has a free demo but I would encourage you to try other free demo's too as what works for me might not work for you.

2) Also, visit the Forum Games and RP section of the Escapist and sign yourself up to one, preferably a story driven one, as it is a great help to keep you writing day in and day out.

EDIT: When you are confident, host or GM one.

3) Less is more. Actually this should be number one. If you take anything away from this post please, please be this. There is no need to write a 1000 page epic simply because.

4) Edit. Edit. Then Edit some more. Counter to what some people think, editing is good for you (although maybe not excessive!) and take the time to really read what you have written. Can you shorten descriptions? Can you use words you don't normally?

5) Read, watch movies or play video games. There area lot of snobs who think a writer must read a lot, they are quite frankly up there own rear. Any form of story telling media is just as good.

6) Take critical advice. You are not the greatest writer in the world and you need to take into account what a critic says, whether they are a friend or someone you don't know. Remember every negative is a step towards making you a better writer.

7) Take your time. Don't rush your work simply because you want to finish.

Feel free to ask me some questions, about the above or anything else.
 

DannyJBeckett

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1) Don't worry about a plot from the start-off.

2) Don't feel obliged to start from the beginning and work to the end. Start writing wherever you want.

3) Be careful not to base your work and writing style too much around those whom inspire you. (this may seem like a no-brainer, but trust me, it's surprisingly difficult)
 

Rule Britannia

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I'm sure it has been said by people above but heres goes.

I'm still in school (gr 9 going into 10) but when I'm told to write short story I seem to do well. Write/type out whatever comes to you then fix it up make back story make sense. Back story is incredibly important (I'm assuming it's in a prologue form) If you can make your back story prologue thingy interesting then you can easily get a reader hooked and continue to read on.

Don't try to write from things you've already read, be original

If it's sci fi don't make it klingon porn, don't make it about sparkly vampires or werewolves... Actually screw that sentence, if that's your target audience then be my guest to write about crazy stuff....just don't make it weird to read...
 

Legendairy314

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Thanks for the advice guys. I'll be sure to come back to this thread as I continue on. Also, I'm doing this thing where I'm visually and orally (in my head) acting out a chapter before writing it. Kind of odd but I think it helps. Anyone have a similar process?