help me

[leady129]

This is probably bordering on advertising, but I am after honest feedback on my latest film "Chosen - A Choose your own adventure" so that I can improve future projects. The film can be watched at http://www.youtube.com/user/Leady129#p/u/0/MlKfa7aa1NY

Thanks.


Edit: Link is fixed.

 

[TheSeventhLoneWolf]

Malformed video ID. I'm Sorry.

 

[j0z]

Fix your link and I might check it out

 

[Hurr Durr Derp]

Malformed video ID. I'm Sorry.

Remove the period at the end.

 

[Communist partisan]

rong video format cant watch it sorry

 

[teisjm]

first tip, learn to link.

About the advertising, i'm no rules guru when it comes to forum rules, but since you're not trying to sell things, but trying to get feedback, i guess it's kinda the same, as the art thread, which is pretty cool.

If this get's locked ask a mod if you can make an official movie thread, wher epeopel can post their movies and get em rated.

 

[leady129]

Malformed video ID. I'm Sorry.

Remove the period at the end.

Done. Thanks for your help.

 

[TheSeventhLoneWolf]

Malformed video ID. I'm Sorry.

Remove the period at the end.

My eyesight must be getting worse. Didn't see that there.

I'll look into it now.

 

[Hurr Durr Derp]

Surprisingly good quality stuff.

There's only two things I don't like:

- Too short. I know that if the biggest problem is that there's not enough of it, there's no real problem, but still.

- The choices you make don't always seem to relate to what happens in the end. The knife vs gun thing was cool, but the intel vs field choice leads to something that's completely out of the blue as far as I can tell.

 

[Jory]

I thought it was awesome. Definitely something I'd enjoy more of. The bit where the guy took off his jacket and pretended to want a fist fight I thought was a bit silly. But apart from that I enjoyed it!

 

[Distorted Stu]

i like the multichoice options! I found it good, the camera can be a bit shaky at times though, like the tripod is shaky or the operators hand moves to fast on the camera.

 

[leady129]

i like the multichoice options! I found it good, the camera can be a bit shaky at times though, like the tripod is shaky or the operators hand moves to fast on the camera.

Thanks for the advice. Shaky cam was deliberate, but perhaps overdid it. Will bear in mind for next time.

 

[x0ny]

Clips were a bit long imo. 45 seconds max per clip. This means you get more option choosing moments in the same amount of time. My attention span is low though.

 

[Aunel]

very good, I liked it,

keep 'em coming!

 

[SnowCub]

That was a lot better than I was expecting. Its not really my kind of thing but I still thought it was good. You've obviously put a lot of effort into thinking it out and the actual production.

Keep up the good work amigo.