How does this intro look?

[Extra-Ordinary]

Just want a quick opinion of this intro.
A few friends and I are going to start some online projects and we want this to be our intro.
If the embed doesn't work:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eMLBwbO9Srk&feature=plcp
I know that it lags a tiny bit in the beginning but we'll kink that out.
I know I'm only giving you a six-second video here but I know some of you Escapists can be harsh critics on the tiniest things.
SO! What do you think?

 

[DevilWithaHalo]

I know I'm only giving you a six-second video here but I know some of you Escapists can be harsh critics on the tiniest things.
SO! What do you think?

Only open if you are open to harsh criticisms...

Spoiler

Your ease in and ease out aren't consistent. (Things come up too quickly and take forever to fade away)

Your background is preloaded. (Strike contrast from an immediate beginning to a fade out in the end)

You end with a fade to white. (Traditional media will load from a black screen; creating a contrast issue)

Your text continues to move. (It needs to come to a complete stop. Against the moving background it creates tracking issues and disorientation)

...and the good...

Spoiler

The background color choices accentuate the title color. The red seems dark enough.

Good spread on the wings icon when it comes up; the theme fits the logo.

Logo is well designed; easily recognized, unique and simple. (Gaming oriented I presume?)

Simple and clear font choice.

Quick and clean.

Decent music choice.

...these are all my personal opinion. Thoughts will vary.

 

[aba1]

DevilWithaHalo above me there covered just about everything I was going to say. The only major issues being that the easing needs to be adjusted to be more consistent.