Instinct Blues said:
TehCookie said:
The song was so terrible I couldn't stand to listen to it so I just looked up the lyrics, and I go nothing. Why am I suppose to feel sad? Because he had a tough life and killed his mother and felt bad about it afterwards? Gee why not think about that beforehand. Almost all of it was his choice. He could of chose differently but didn't. I might feel bad if it was a tough decision, but the stuff he did was just plain stupid and he got to deal with the consequences.
He's the kind of song that makes me cry:
I've heard it over 100 times and I still tear up every time.
You know you basically just said that a kid's first pet dying is more tragic than the situation of black people living in ghettos struggling to survive. I can't really explain in words how fucked up that is.
Actually, it sounds more like he's saying that the death of a life-long companion, who's moments can never be recovered or recreated in any way, is more tragic from an empathetic stand-point than the story of a single youth who made bad decisions that pushed him too far over the edge and only stopped to think about what he's done after it started to affect him.
The story in the song you presented is that of a generally unlikable character who, at any time, could have turned back before he went to far and simply decide to, y'know,
not be a criminal. Hell, he could have even turned around right at the point he had his little epiphany and started some mission of redemption or, lacking any creativity or drive, Sepukku'd in an act of Redemption equals Death.
And don't use some argument that argues he had no choice in the matter, he was dragged in by a form of peer pressure, but that doesn't mean he had no choice but to succumb to their urgings.
The kid who lost his dog is presented in a simpler format, he's a one dimensional character who's only interest and friend is his dog. The loss of that dog is the loss of himself. He did not cause that dog to die, he only experienced it. He did not choose for that dog to die, and in no way influenced it, it just happened. The dog could have been replaced with anyone or anything, the message would have still hit home and been emotionally relevant.
Tell me you wouldn't cry if the dog were replaced with a little sister, and the sister was a cancer patient who died at a young age. Tell me you wouldn't cry if the dog were replaced with a grandfather who died of old age. Tell me you wouldn't cry if the dog were replaced with the child's first human friend who died due to some heart complications or other disease.
Maybe those examples push a little farther than the dog, but the Grandfather one is basically the same thing. Yeah it sort of equates People to an animal, but the point isn't
what the companion is, the mere fact that the companion has always been there is what makes it so sad when it is ripped from the mortal coil.
Plus, the music involved is presented differently. The nostalgia in the "My first friend" video incited by the Dr. Mario theme causes us to think back to our lifetime companions, and to project ourselves onto this one-dimensional character. The child-like singing voice causes us to think with the same mind we had as a child, and to feel the same emotions we would have felt then.
The music in your video...made me lose interest in the story emotionally halfway through. I listened intently regardless, but were the story presented with more emotional depth, and a more engaging song, and words that held more meaning (by which I mean, less unnecessary expletives, they are what made me feel his story was insincere. Replace those with
real words and we'll talk about tearjerkers. The piano in the background would have made nice backing if your song were...a song, but as it is a RAP (Rhythm Accompanied Poetry) it felt out of place, especially with the previously mentioned diction of disinterest.
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Well hi, essay I should have written on things that actually mattered, why don't you get written when I have assignments that need to be done? Huh, why is that?