This song consists of the following:
8 measures of piano melody, played in loop
Generic drum beat, also loop
Generic impoverished-kid-wants-to-be-a-"gangsta'"-and-commits-suicide-when-(s)he (but usually he)-realizes-what-(s)he (but usually he)-has-done story told in rhyme that is periodically kinda sorta in rhythm with everything else
The only part where it seems like any effort has gone is the story, which actually tries
too hard.
Instinct Blues said:
TehCookie said:
He's the kind of song that makes me cry:
I've heard it over 100 times and I still tear up every time.
You know you basically just said that a kid's first pet dying is more tragic than the situation of black people living in ghettos struggling to survive. I can't really explain in words how fucked up that is.
You know you basically just said that you don't understand that there's more to emotion inducing songwriting that coming up with a tired cliché and setting it to "music." I can't really explain in words how moronic that is.
To be serious, though, writing a genuinely moving song takes careful attention to melody and the contrast in emotion. You'll notice the pet song brings you up to a sort of "bawwwww" state before kicking you down into a "waaahhhhh" state, and while the song didn't make me cry, it
did elicit a stronger emotional response in me than someone choosing to commit crime to look cool. Really,
Instinct Blues said:
Did you even bother listening to the whole song?
because if you had you might have noticed that
that's what the song's about. It specifically says things like "He wanted to be major like the cut throats and the thugs," not that "he desperately needed money so he went and ... shot and raped people?" Yeah, this doesn't make sense any way you construe it. Crime is a choice, not a necessity.
Huh, I seem to have used a solid square foot of screen space. I am genuinely saddened by that. I guess I just got on a rant. I apologize if I've seemed rude, Instinct, I don't think you're a moron. I just think you really like this song and are upset that others don't. Sure, you've overreacted more than a little, but we as humans are hardwired to react that way when people disagree with us (as evidenced by my post).
Also, whoever mentioned Hotel California, that song sends shivers down my spine every time I listen to it.