I need some critique

[Trull]

This is completely optional, you don't have to watch this if you don't want to, but if you have a spare ten minutes, then please watch? 8D

What I need is critique, advice on what to do, but I can't do that because, well, I'm not popular, so I can't exactly get people to tell me, so all you need to do is watch it and then critique as much as you want. Ranging from "You're cool/geyfag" to "If you do this with your microphone (blablabla) and then in settings (blablabla)"

I'm not asking for views, asking for critique.
The vidjos:
http://youtu.be/tbkYiiu4nMY
and
http://youtu.be/0XHxUR1v_Jg

and the reason I came here before the L4D2 forums is because I think you guys are a nice bunch. Don't prove me wrong.

 

[Cheesus333]

That was pretty good, reminded me of Yogscast but younger
Given the intro thing, I assume that was the style you were going for.

If I were you, I'd make them a little longer, say 10-15 minutes per part. Other than that, I like it!

 

[Trull]

Thanks for the feedback! I was becoming skeptic that there would be any at all >.>

I was actually told to make them shorter to hold people's attention.

And, what are you talking about? Yogscast? What is tha- ahaha oh Yowie, you're so funny! xD

I was trying to stray away from them, actually, but their start did in fact inspire me.

 

[Cheesus333]

As far as I can tell, the problem you have isn't in the video, it's publicity. You need to make people more aware of your videos, by advertising yourself - such as this very thread.

I think I shall subscribe, as I'm eager to see how you fare.