OK, disagreement time.
Ieyke said:
On a fundamental level, McNeill doesn't understand the Codex Astartes....AT ALL.
So what is the codex according to you? Different authors seem to interpret it as wildly different things, from a blueprint playbook that must be followed to the letter at all times (which is stupid), to a massive future combination of On War and The Art Of War, with attendums on 'how to be a good Space Marine'. McNeill seems to view it as the latter.
And the notion of a character as undisciplined and incompetent as Uriel Ventris being the main character of what is called the "Ultramarines series", and ostensibly about the Ultramarines...that's like using South Park's version of Satan as primary example in what is theoretically a serious historical documentary about Satan.
How is Ventris incompetent? If anything he's too competent, succeeding in his Death Oath and all that. The 'undisciplined' I'll address a little further down.
Also, McNeill can't even maintain consistency in his own stupid plot. Ventris was, deservingly, sentenced to death by Marneus Calgar.
No, he wasn't, he was sent on a Death Oath, to destroy the Daemonculaba that Tigurius had seen in a vision.
Also, deservingly? Are you serious? He was essentially put on trial for saving Tarsis Ultra from the Tyranids. He and Pasanius went to where they could do the most good to win the war. By that point having two more Marines in the trenches would have made no impact on the course of the war, Learchus being fully able to command the company in that situation. Whereas bring the Deathwatch team back to strength allowed the mission to succeed, and Tarsis Ultra to be saved. If Bannon had been alive and the Salamander uninjured, then Ventris and Pasanius would have stayed with their company. But that went against the teachings of the codex, and so shit hit the fan when they got home.
Why is breaking with the tenets of the codex in order to save an Imperial World from the Tyranids deserving of execution?
And here's the thing, Ventris didn't defend himself at the trial, and the whole "breaking with the codex is the only way Learchus survived to report me" is a pretty good defence. He'd been the protege on the unorthodox Ideaus, and had taken his mentor's approach that the codex isn't the be all and end all to heart, but hadn't fully realised that is does matter. However he is made to realise by Agemman that the importance of the codex is really in the 'how to be a good Space Marine' bit, it's the rules that help separate true, loyal marines from filthy traitors. So he accepts his punishment. What you seem to be calling 'undisciplined', is more like character development.
He was, in no uncertain terms, told to go into the Eye Of Terror and battle the enemies of mankind until he died.
No, he was told to fulfil his Death Oath, which was believed to be suicide (not unreasonably).
What did McNeill do then? He gave Ventris "a note from his mommy" saying that the Grey Knights decided he didn't seem evil, so he was allowed back into the Chapter willy nilly as if not being demonically possessed somehow had ANYTHING to do with him hand-waving away the fact that he was disregarding his well deserved execution orders.
I find myself doubting that you read Dead Sky Black Sun and The Killing Ground in any detail. He was not under execution orders, he returned victorious form his Death Oath, which left the only obstacle to his rejoining the Chapter the question of whether or not he was corrupted. Getting the seal of approval from a Grey Knight Captain/Grand Master (can't remember his rank) was deemed sufficient to not have him executed out of hand, and then the Grey Knight's findings were confirmed by the Ultramarines in-house corruption testing .
And even MORE mind-bogglingly, they let him be Captain again, replacing the acting Captain, Veteran Sergeant Learchus - AKA the ONLY one of the main characters who knows how to be an actual Ultramarine.
Of course they 'let' him be Captain again, they didn't demote him. If there hadn't been the provision for him to return they would have promoted Learchus after the trial. Also, being an 'actual' Ultramarine means being snotty that unorthodox thinking won a war? Learchus did massively improve across the series, but in the Tarsis Ultra aftermath, he was the very worst portrayal of the Ultramarines, unable to see past their sacred book and unwilling to acknowledge that it doesn't always have the answers. Learning this lesson was meant to be one of the morals of the battle against Hive Fleet Behemoth.
Nick Kyme, on the other hand, actually writes Ultramarines as Ultramarines, and he understands the Codex Astartes.
Now I've only read Fall of Damnos when it comes to Kyme and Ultramarines. Quite frankly, I didn't think the book was that strong, not terrible, but far from the best BL I've read. It was a rather plodding affair, following the exact events layed out in the Damnos fluff from the 5th ed. SM codex (this is a problem with others in the Space Marine Battles series too). As far as the marines themselves, I mostly remember Sicarius being arrogant and gung ho, while being reigned in by the Dreadnought. Then one sergeant was resenting the Dreadnought being their to keep a restraining hand on his captain, while another was rather more chill about the whole thing and trained some local militia on the slide. There was no real character to the Ulramarines as a whole, something Kyme delivered on really well with his Salamanders stores (at least the first few, haven't read the latter ones).
Here's the thing, if the point of the Ultramarines is to be generic Marines, Fall of Damnos delivers that. But McNeill's books did a better job of showing the Ultramarines as paladins, the definition of what it means to be Adeptus Astartes, which I think is closer to what their image is meant to be.
Aaron Dembski-Bowden managed a better portrayal of Roboute Guilliman and the Ultramarines in ONE PAGE of "The First Heretic" than McNeill managed to do across 6+ books of the so-called "Ultramarines series".
Haven't read, can't comment
Dan Abnett's "Know No Fear" is a masterpiece of an Ultramarines story compared to anything McNeill scribbled together.
Likewise, haven't read, although what works in a portrayal of a heresy era Legion isn't necessarily what works with an M41 Chapter.
Luckily, McNeill's Ultramarines series isn't canon, while Kyme's books are. So there's that at least.
And you base that on? While the most recent SM codex (the closest the company tends to get to 'official canon') has Cassius commanding at Tarsis Ultra,major events from McNeill's books are included, like M'kar's invasion of Ultramar.