You want opinions? For one thing your thread title is bullshit. Your playing your 'gritty reboot' for laughs. Thats not gritty thats a parody, there is a difference.
Now my initial gripe is out of the way, on to the actual show. Its slow, its dull, it lacks any kind of immediacy. The characters are bland and rather uninspired. The psycho, the rookie, the hippy, the incompetent leader. Its like a check list of empty characterization tropes. We see way to much of the Psycho, yes we get it, he's bored and going out of his mind with nothing to do. Put down the knife and go and do something, as far as I can tell there's no reason that he has to stay in the flat (and don't try and tell me its a secret military base, its pretty clear its just a house) For supposed "elite" military specialist they sure don't have any of the hall marks of military training or access to the, you know, psycho-analyst and psychiatrist the military provide.
As for the guy in space, why? What's so important about needing to be in space to scan the planet, we can kind of do that from the ground right now, I don't see that changing any time soon. Also He's been up there "28" days, in a single cockpit with no kind of space suit or other safety features, no don't send him up in a shuttle where he's got room to do other things like, eat and sleep. No! Lets send him up in a single seater jet with space capabilities and leave him there for no adequately explained reason! Also of 15 million requites... why only 5? You've got a god damn army in training give them all morphers and let them waste the entire invading force!!! THIS IS NOT ROCKET SCIENCE.
Your opening text crawl has no engaging quality to it, it just blabs at the audience in the same insipid green text. Look at any other web series or TV show, they explain the universe with the characters, they set up the timeline through dialogue, through interaction. Not with a text crawl to stock footage.
The dialogue, quite frankly, sucks. It sounds stilted and lacks any human... subtly to it. You give way to much time to the Psycho character and not enough to the others in the conversation, all this tells us is that this guys angry and these two are cardboard cut outs with nothing to add to the scene.
In terms of your cinematography you lack angles, you lack a variety of shots, you lack the very language of the camera. One static camera shot for each side of the conversation does not make a scene exiting or engaging, Its dull. It gives off a very amateurish vibe. Long uncut scenes can work but only when the camera is in motion. The lighting is also terrible, what were you filming on? A mini-DV? The black effect of the holographic cockpit needs work too, your pixilising your actor and for what? A poorly animated 'holographic' computer display?
Your scoring (music and sound effects) need work, they jump and cut from one track to another. Breaking any involvement the audience might have had with the scene. Its distracting and off putting.
For a wannabe web series with supposed "very good production values" you're putting on a poor show. You've got little grasp of any of the basics of good film making. My advice? Find someone who knows how to write and story board an engaging script, do multiple good takes for a number of angles, include close ups mid shots, establishing shots. Cut and edit it together well, don't include unnecessary effects like the characters names popping up. Make the scenes flow and the dialogue less stilted and more natural. Find better music or make it yourselves. Let the world come out through the characters and not a text crawl. Find people who are capable actors rather then passable actors. Make up your minds about what this wants to be. Is it a character driven examination of combat veterans set in the power rangers universe? Or is it a parody of the concept of the power rangers? Because all I'm getting at the moment is a confused mass of misjudgment and attempted comedy in a supposedly 'gritty reboot'
Christ the Mighty Morphing Power Rangers had more emotional impact that this.
I guess what I'm trying to say is. It sucked, go back and try again, find people who know what they're doing and try and get them to help you or else all your going to be producing is garbage on the same level as a bunch of high schoolers writing fan fiction.
Sorry but thats just the way it is.
