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wolfy098

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Thanks to avykins for finding the word Alexia

Struggles

Dyslexia, Anorexia, Dyspraxia Alexia
All these problems
They don?t give in
We on the other hand don?t even begin

They struggle with weaknesses
Managing to thrive.
If I had any one of these,
I would barely survive.

Their life can?t be easy
Yet we look down
Even when we lose
With an upper hand

Who cares if your black or white,
Who cares if your fat or thin,
These are just excuses
To treat someone differently

They are really better than you
So you hide that fact
Stab them in the back
Running from the truth!!!

Just accept it now
Just be true
Watch their back
They may watch yours to

Live and let live
Let them be
They?ve learnt things
You?ll never see

Keep on fighting
For what you believe
But don?t insult others
Unless needs be.
 

TwistedEllipses

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Interesting topic for a poem, you don't see many on this subject. I like it, but you're got to be careful not to make some of these groups seem helpless. I think you've got the balance about right.

...I am a little disappointed there are no rhetorical questions to answer though...
 

Torque669

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Not too bad. Is it going to have some sort of Instrumental accompiniant (Or however you spell it) Or is just going to be a poem?
 

Sir Ollie

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Chorus

Put the lime in the coconut and drink it all up!

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