Introducing my 'Source Engine' comic:

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Nivag the Owl

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Oct 29, 2008
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So today I was allowed to leave college early and I don't have anything to do until later on, so I got bored and starting messing around on Garry's Mod. Long story short, I made a comic!

I know it's a pretty poor standard idea but maybe with practice I'll come up with something funnier :) That is of course, if you would be willing to give me constructive criticism. Let's have it! And don't hold back on the criticism, I can take it. Unless you're genuinly trying to be offensive. Then you can hold back a lot.

 

Baby Tea

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Sep 18, 2008
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Aww, the picture broke?
I was looking forward to this!
C'MON! Fix it!
 

Lord Kofun

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Mar 18, 2009
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It would be funny.. with some work, I guess..

Here comes the 'constructive' criticism:
1 - Spell check.
2 - The word '*****' does not make a panel funny.. every time.
3 - Try a different kind of speech bubble. This one seems out of place.

With a little more work, it would be funnier.