Left 4 Dead

[Ashbax]

this review is very short, clumsy and you really need to learn when to use full stops and the enter button. Yet its really quite informative...

 

[Screens]

Oh God, the spelling and grammar mistakes. Reviews should be something to take pride in, but what you made was something worthy of wiping my ass with it. Although, I guess the review was informative... maybe it's because Left 4 Dead has so little content in it anyway.

If you get killed by that zombie in the church, all I can say is: STICK WITH YOUR TEAM!
And repeating "fuck" does not do much to endear your review to me; all it does is say that you don't have a wide enough vocabulary to project that tone with a different word.

 

[Steelfists]

left 4 dead is a co-op first person shooter about killing zombies and, well thats it if you like story based games you shouldnt be playing this game you will be beyond dissapointed in between killing zombies and killing zombies.

[snip]

overall it is a fun game with only one major flaw, what did you think of this review

all i can say is l2p

the zombie in the church was not in my control, and how am i supposed to do anything when im pinned down by a zombie with nobody around to help?

I don't think you can call the incapacitating effects a flaw. It forces you to play as a team. If there was no one there to help you you and your friends were doing it wrong.

 

[Maidenite]

this review is very short, clumsy and you really need to learn when to use full stops and the enter button. Yet its really quite informative...

*cough cough*

How about?
"This review is very short, clumsy and you really need to use full stops and the enter button. Yet it's really quite informative. . ."

Just a point, but if you're going to complain about other peoples use of grammar and punctuation, then you should get your grammar right first.

 

[Zydrate]

People need to think about what they're posting before they submit a "review".

For me, the game was fun with one playthrough. But that's all I did, and had to return it. I don't know what the replayability value is, It seems to me like the type of game that gets very bland very quick.

 

[Music Mole]

I think it was adorable.

Indeed it was.

 

[Vanguard_Ex]

-snippity snip-

Why can't you FUCKING capitalize the beginning of your FUCKING sentences and your FUCKING I's when you can clearly capitalize this word I used three times for emphasis (and comic effect)?

Also, a question mark at the end of a question is mandatory.

I'm sorry, but this isn't just a comment you're making on another thread when you're pressed for time (which is still a pathetic excuse to write poorly); You're actually writing a review! It warrants more effort.

P.S: I'm not even a pissy English major or anything. In fact, English is my second language.

Absolutely this. To me, it just says that an impressionable youngster has fallen in love with ZP and wants to take a hurried, badly aimed shot at it.

 

[Ashbax]

this review is very short, clumsy and you really need to learn when to use full stops and the enter button. Yet its really quite informative...

*cough cough*

How about?
"This review is very short, clumsy and you really need to use full stops and the enter button. Yet it's really quite informative. . ."

Just a point, but if you're going to complain about other peoples use of grammar and punctuation, then you should get your grammar right first.

Interesting.
Your correcting one misuse of the shift button.
I wonder how many friends that gets you.

 

[Internet Kraken]

this review is very short, clumsy and you really need to learn when to use full stops and the enter button. Yet its really quite informative...

*cough cough*

How about?
"This review is very short, clumsy and you really need to use full stops and the enter button. Yet it's really quite informative. . ."

Just a point, but if you're going to complain about other peoples use of grammar and punctuation, then you should get your grammar right first.

Interesting.
Your correcting one misuse of the shift button.
I wonder how many friends that gets you.

I know, it wasn't nearly as bad as this post:

well i think it is good but could be alot better
and you could read through the review to sopt things like "ans" spelling is something someone does not know things like "ans" are mistakes and could be corrected by a samll read through

 

[S.H.A.R.P.]

this review is very short, clumsy and you really need to learn when to use full stops and the enter button. Yet its really quite informative...

*cough cough*

How about?
"This review is very short, clumsy and you really need to use full stops and the enter button. Yet it's really quite informative. . ."

Just a point, but if you're going to complain about other peoples use of grammar and punctuation, then you should get your grammar right first.

Interesting.
Your correcting one misuse of the shift button.
I wonder how many friends that gets you.

Look again my friend, he added some words too. But I agree that it wasn't at all necessary.

To comment on the OP... You mentioned some parts of the game, but you left out the vast majority. You could have elaborated more on many aspects of the game like the different weapons, and the kinds of special infected and their gameplay mechanics in the versus mode. Not to mention the lack of capitalization, and the spelling and grammatical errors you made as others have mentioned. If you plan to make a review on a site where lots of quality reviews are to be found, make a bit more effort and try and match their quality.

Good luck on your further work!

 

[Ashbax]

Well, Sharp, He didnt add words, he just took out words. For no reason, as I meant what I said. Not what he changed it into.

 

[Shoto Koto]

well i think it is good but could be alot better
and you could read through the review to sopt things like "ans" spelling is something someone does not know things like "ans" are mistakes and could be corrected by a samll read through

I like your grammar-nazi-ing. "Tiggers don't like mistooks." Seriously, don't give advice you can't follow yourself.

EDIT: Almost forgot, I thought the review was good.