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StarStruckStrumpets

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Ok, simple rules.

1) 1 Paragraph each, you can repost, but only after somebody else has added another paragraph.
2) Make sure you follow the story.
3) Keep character introduction to a minimum, background characters (i.e. somebody that isn't a main character doesn't count) Main characters should be kept to at least 5 max.


I will start.

The helicopter descended and hovered gracefully like a dragonfly above a lake. The crew disembarked and suited up. The captain of the team, John Taylor, was a stout man, short...stocky, and very aggressive. No doubt he was put in charge because of his character and skill with firearms. His badge of authority intimidated the other squad-members. He was the boss, he gave the orders, he was responsible for their lives.
"Ok everybody, get ready, we're moving in!"
The helicopter veered off into the sun and was nowhere to be seen. This was it, there was no turning back, today was the day that victory would be in hand.

Ok, now it's your turn, remember, somebody might beat you to the first post, if this happens, just edit your post to flow.
 

Tattaglia

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Shouldn't this be in Forum Games? Silly! Ask the mods to move it for you.
 

Tattaglia

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StarStruckStrumpets said:
Tattaglia said:
Shouldn't this be in Forum Games? Silly! Ask the mods to move it for you.
Haha, oops, forgot, how would I go about asking mods to move it?
PM them methinks. And give me a cookie. That works well too.
 

StarStruckStrumpets

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Tattaglia said:
StarStruckStrumpets said:
Tattaglia said:
Shouldn't this be in Forum Games? Silly! Ask the mods to move it for you.
Haha, oops, forgot, how would I go about asking mods to move it?
PM them methinks. And give me a cookie. That works well too.
Lols, I sending you deh cookie ^_^.

Which Mod? I'm not familiar with any of them.
 

Tattaglia

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StarStruckStrumpets said:
Tattaglia said:
StarStruckStrumpets said:
Tattaglia said:
Shouldn't this be in Forum Games? Silly! Ask the mods to move it for you.
Haha, oops, forgot, how would I go about asking mods to move it?
PM them methinks. And give me a cookie. That works well too.
Lols, I sending you deh cookie ^_^.

Which Mod? I'm not familiar with any of them.
Try for nilcypher or wilsonscrazybed - treat them as Gods.
 

Warrior Irme

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StarStruckStrumpets said:
The helicopter descended and hovered gracefully like a dragonfly above a lake. The crew disembarked and suited up. The captain of the team, John Taylor, was a stout man, short...stocky, and very aggressive. No doubt he was put in charge because of his character and skill with firearms. His badge of authority intimidated the other squad-members. He was the boss, he gave the orders, he was responsible for their lives.
"Ok everybody, get ready, we're moving in!"
The helicopter veered off into the sun and was nowhere to be seen. This was it, there was no turning back, today was the day that victory would be in hand.
As the men gazed across the marsh that surrounded them a hush fell over the group. The sounds of the wildlife around them seemed to become more distant. It was as if all life were leaving in anticipation of something more. The various species of fish in the lake began to jump out of the water onto the lakeside. This erratic behavior of the region's natives troubled the men. Something was happening, and the men knew that they would be the ones to discover the truth.
 

Zersy

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StarStruckStrumpets said:
Ok, simple rules.

1) 1 Paragraph each, you can repost, but only after somebody else has added another paragraph.
2) Make sure you follow the story.
3) Keep character introduction to a minimum, background characters (i.e. somebody that isn't a main character doesn't count) Main characters should be kept to at least 5 max.


I will start.

The helicopter descended and hovered gracefully like a dragonfly above a lake. The crew disembarked and suited up. The captain of the team, John Taylor, was a stout man, short...stocky, and very aggressive. No doubt he was put in charge because of his character and skill with firearms. His badge of authority intimidated the other squad-members. He was the boss, he gave the orders, he was responsible for their lives.
"Ok everybody, get ready, we're moving in!"
The helicopter veered off into the sun and was nowhere to be seen. This was it, there was no turning back, today was the day that victory would be in hand.

Ok, now it's your turn, remember, somebody might beat you to the first post, if this happens, just edit your post to flow.
They arrived at the desolate,barren location the medic shouted to the captain "Can you belive this was once a place full of green grasses and trees that would compete against the towers of new foyum itself ?"

the captain relplied in a deep commanding voice "I don't know i wasn't made then"

from this one reply it was clear to the whole team that he was determaned to get the mission done.

(Your turn)
 

jigilojoe

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Warrior Irme said:
StarStruckStrumpets said:
The helicopter descended and hovered gracefully like a dragonfly above a lake. The crew disembarked and suited up. The captain of the team, John Taylor, was a stout man, short...stocky, and very aggressive. No doubt he was put in charge because of his character and skill with firearms. His badge of authority intimidated the other squad-members. He was the boss, he gave the orders, he was responsible for their lives.
"Ok everybody, get ready, we're moving in!"
The helicopter veered off into the sun and was nowhere to be seen. This was it, there was no turning back, today was the day that victory would be in hand.
As the men gazed across the marsh that surrounded them a hush fell over the group. The sounds of the wildlife around them seemed to become more distant. It was as if all life were leaving in anticipation of something more. The various species of fish in the lake began to jump out of the water onto the lakeside. This erratic behavior of the region's natives troubled the men. Something was happening, and the men knew that they would be the ones to discover the truth.
But what would the truth be? John got up and started screaming orders, the men where trying to pay attention, but the fact that they knew death was at hand made them aloof to his ramblings. The Helicopter began to land and they were signaled to get moving, the squad saw something indescribable, it was presented before them with it's claws and as they stared at it in awe, it stared back, they weren't sure what to do. It's humungous eye blinked letting out slime and blood, it looked in pain.