Ok, simple rules.
1) 1 Paragraph each, you can repost, but only after somebody else has added another paragraph.
2) Make sure you follow the story.
3) Keep character introduction to a minimum, background characters (i.e. somebody that isn't a main character doesn't count) Main characters should be kept to at least 5 max.
I will start.
The helicopter descended and hovered gracefully like a dragonfly above a lake. The crew disembarked and suited up. The captain of the team, John Taylor, was a stout man, short...stocky, and very aggressive. No doubt he was put in charge because of his character and skill with firearms. His badge of authority intimidated the other squad-members. He was the boss, he gave the orders, he was responsible for their lives.
"Ok everybody, get ready, we're moving in!"
The helicopter veered off into the sun and was nowhere to be seen. This was it, there was no turning back, today was the day that victory would be in hand.
1) 1 Paragraph each, you can repost, but only after somebody else has added another paragraph.
2) Make sure you follow the story.
3) Keep character introduction to a minimum, background characters (i.e. somebody that isn't a main character doesn't count) Main characters should be kept to at least 5 max.
I will start.
The helicopter descended and hovered gracefully like a dragonfly above a lake. The crew disembarked and suited up. The captain of the team, John Taylor, was a stout man, short...stocky, and very aggressive. No doubt he was put in charge because of his character and skill with firearms. His badge of authority intimidated the other squad-members. He was the boss, he gave the orders, he was responsible for their lives.
"Ok everybody, get ready, we're moving in!"
The helicopter veered off into the sun and was nowhere to be seen. This was it, there was no turning back, today was the day that victory would be in hand.
Ok, now it's your turn, remember, somebody might beat you to the first post, if this happens, just edit your post to flow.