MrPanafonic Deviantart

[Arizona Kyle]

http://mrpanafonic.deviantart.com/

Hey i'm starting to upload to deviantart and i wanted to know if i could get some feedback from anyone in the escapist community as well as maybe something else to do if anyone wanted anything

I'm sorry if this looks like advertising but like i said i would like to get some feed back on what people think

Thank you if you took the time to look at my deviantart

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[godfist88]

Holy shit you're a natural!

 

[Arizona Kyle]

Holy shit you're a natural!

thank you lol

 

[PayneTrayne]

Really good although I see two problems, one isn't a big problem, the other is easily fixable.

One, you're drawing anime style portraits. This is going to get me a lot of flak but I don't believe it takes as much skill to draw that as it is to draw this http://silenthero1.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=24#/dgkmt6 that being said, you're pretty damned good at drawing anime though.

Second, you're proportions are a bit off. It's most obvious in your featured Deviation and your piece Cheater. Make sure that your arms are of equal size. In cheater the guy's left noticeably bigger than his right. And in your featured Deviation the woman's left hand is much blockier and bigger than her right. Other than that, keep it up, you're now being watched by a shitty writer by the name of SupressedAuthority.

 

[Arizona Kyle]

Really good although I see two problems, one isn't a big problem, the other is easily fixable.

One, you're drawing anime style portraits. This is going to get me a lot of flak but I don't believe it takes as much skill to draw that as it is to draw this http://silenthero1.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=24#/dgkmt6 that being said, you're pretty damned good at drawing anime though.

Second, you're proportions are a bit off. It's most obvious in your featured Deviation and your piece Cheater. Make sure that your arms are of equal size. In cheater the guy's left noticeably bigger than his right. And in your featured Deviation the woman's left hand is much blockier and bigger than her right. Other than that, keep it up, you're now being watched by a shitty writer by the name of SupressedAuthority.

thanks man and ya idk if i will ever draw like that link i mean thats just way too dang good for me lol and thanks for the comments

also go die!! -.- because you beating me in march mayhem XD

 

[Monkfish Acc.]

If you want some actually useful feedback I'd suggest posting in the art thread [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/18.72805-The-artist-in-thee], where, you know, artists are going to see it.

All most people will see when they look at this stuff is a cool picture, so all you'll get is useless ego-boosting praise. Another artist will be able to properly critique you. Tell you about any anatomical whoopsies or whatever.

It'd be an idea to post images rather than a link, though. People often pretty much just ignore links.

 

[PayneTrayne]

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Yeah, I'm convinced the guy who drew that link is broken, that is simply too good.I wasn't trying to put you down, I was simply trying to iterate my point of anime<realism when it comes to skill.

Also, yeah, I got lucky with MM. I got that ***** a proper bracket, bitches love proper brackets.Although I put too much trollfaith in Zynga, I wonder what my score would have been if I put the teams I wanted to win in rather than who I thought would troll to the top.

 

[MercurySteam]

Great works, keep it up!

 

[Arizona Kyle]

If you want some actually useful feedback I'd suggest posting in the art thread [http://www.escapistmagazine.com/forums/read/18.72805-The-artist-in-thee], where, you know, artists are going to see it.

All most people will see when they look at this stuff is a cool picture, so all you'll get is useless ego-boosting praise. Another artist will be able to properly critique you. Tell you about any anatomical whoopsies or whatever.

It'd be an idea to post images rather than a link, though. People often pretty much just ignore links.

alright i will have to do that

 

[Arizona Kyle]

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Yeah, I'm convinced the guy who drew that link is broken, that is simply too good.I wasn't trying to put you down, I was simply trying to iterate my point of anime<realism when it comes to skill.

Also, yeah, I got lucky with MM. I got that ***** a proper bracket, bitches love proper brackets.

true but to be fair that was my first attempts and to be honest T_T i cant really draw realistic half the time

i think that i have gotten worse lol but i will have to put more up when i can