ProfessorLayton said:
Alright well I've been contemplating whether or not to post it but screw it I want to hear what you have to say.
http://www.myspace.com/rivalshardcore is our page. We only have one song down and it sounds like a demo mainly because it is. We started this band last month and our bass guitarist has only shown up for 2 practices and one of them was to record the only song on the page. I think that it could be much better, due to not only Audacity screwing up the timing but I messed up with the guitars a lot... So yeah personally I think it could be way better than it is but we're just a bunch of kids messing around. I want to hear your professional opinion on this.
Combining screamo and death metal may seem logical but in fact most death metal guys despise screamo/hardcore with a passion, so it's a fairly new thing. Stylistically it's worth pursuing although be aware that screamo, like death metal, will eventually be superceded. If you're going to work in this style get moving fast, bands like Brokencyde spell the start of screamo's appropriation into pop music and the beginning of the end as far as screamed vocals as a viable option for heavy bands is concerned.
The weakness with both styles is obviously a lack of melody in the vocals - so you need really melodic content
somewhere (i.e the guitars) to compensate and make this song interesting. Right now you don't really have that. Maybe overdub some lead guitar lines - not solos, just melodic harmony parts or something,
anything so it's not just riffs, beats and "rrarararrgggh". This would have been okay in 1998 when screamo was new to most ears but not now.
As for production issues, obviously it's a home recording and that's cool, but Audacity is an
amazing program and if you're willing to put in some serious time getting good sounds and tweaking everything your result can sound as good as anything from a multitrack ProTools-equipped studio. However, as you've probably discovered, playback and recording de-sync just a little with Audacity, more on fixing that below.
Timing must be 100% on the button for this sort of music. Even accounting for Audacity de-sync, the drums are a bit sloppy. If need be, simplify the drum parts - better to do it simple and perfect than complex and sloppy. Whatever it takes to get them in time. Those bits where the bass lags behind, that's not acceptable even for a demo. Two practices - I'd believe it. Either re-record that track, or just cut and paste the silence around the bassnotes to "manually quantise" it and get that bass to land where it should. Also, that bass sounds like it's peaking out the inputs - don't allow that to happen. Use Audacity's envelope tool to bring stray peaks below digital zero if you must, but better to just not record at peak levels anyway. That bass is just too damn loud, it needs to be not just quieter, but compressed. It's easy enough to boost up a low signal as long as it's not so low that white noise intrudes, but taming a too-hot signal won't get rid of the digital distortion if there's a sustained area where it goes into square-wave mode. Guitars sound fine though, technically speaking. A bit of sloppiness with the guitars is acceptable, you're not a rhythm instrument.
(non-technical readers may wish to skip over this next few paragraphs)
I'd re-record the bass completely, personally. You don't even need an amp, just DI it straight into the desk and make sure you don't go over digital zero, try and record with peaks between -6 and -3 dB, then compress the hell out of it at -12 dB with at least a 10:1 ratio and 0.1 second clampdown time using Audacity's compression utility (found in the Effect drop-down menu), then squash any stray peaks with the envelope tool. Easy.
As for Audacity remember that 1.2.6 is the most stable version of Audacity, don't use the beta 1.3.x ones they are wonky as shit as the website rightly warns. If you've been recording with the new version you'll have to stick with it just for this song as new files won't convert to the old format but record all future songs with 1.2.6, you'll thank me later when you don't lose the perfect take due to a bug.
Desync on Audacity happens for two reasons:
1. The program has changed the sample rate from 44.1kHz to 48kHz without telling you (check the box in the bottom left corner). You'll know if it's wrong, things will desync wildly, up to a second worth of desync will gradually appear over the course of a few minutes. If this happens just change the sample rate and record the track again.
2. Because of the delay between recording and playback isn't sufficiently corrected, the program misaligns new tracks after recording. It will do this every time, I guess the people who wrote it were on drugs. Mind you it's free so you get what you pay for. Get into this habit to fix the problem: after you record a new track, always press ctrl+2 (to go to the default zoom level) and then ctrl+1 once (to go in one level of zoom) and highlight the
smallest possible piece of silence that the program will let you grab at the start of the track with the selection tool and delete it.
Another thing to watch for: there's some feedback that creeps into the recording at about 400Hz and then later at 440Hz at around the 1:35-1:50 mark. Sounds like it's from a microphone, but might want to edit that out, whatever it is.
Anyway good luck with it. Get that drummer and bass player in time is your first step, then try and spice up your songs somehow so it's more than what it is currently. Then record more music and try and get gigs with it.