Need some feedback here...

[Brad Shepard]

Im just trying to see how people view these drawlings i made, so please give me some feedback and tell me what you think.

EDIT: Im looking for all feedback here, which one you like, dislike, any way to improve, anything at all.

Spoiler

Brad

Amanda

Aaron

Corie

Matt

Nick

Phill

Will

Ryan

 

[Lady Nilstria]

Put those images in spoilers, so I can view them, and I'll give you all the feedback you could ever possibly need, and then some.

(I can't access DevArt, sorry.)

 

[Dragon_of_red]

I like yours and Nicks, there the best ones outa them, there all pretty good though.

Although i dont really like COries too much, its the one without symmetry, and i like symmetry.

 

[Et3rnalLegend64]

What kind of feedback are you looking for, exactly? Do you want approving nods or suggestions for improvement or ???

 

[Brad Shepard]

Put those images in spoilers, so I can view them, and I'll give you all the feedback you could ever possibly need, and then some.

(I can't access DevArt, sorry.)

there ya go, sorry about earler

What kind of feedback are you looking for, exactly? Do you want approving nods or suggestions for improvement or ???

Just anything, likes, dislikes, anything, all feedback is cool in my book.

 

[Brad Shepard]

I like yours and Nicks, there the best ones outa them, there all pretty good though.

Although i dont really like COries too much, its the one without symmetry, and i like symmetry.

I made these acording to what my friends said, and i did have a bit of trouble with his, i think it might have looked better with a sky blue myself.

 

[Angry Caterpillar]

I like Nick. Because I'm Nick and I'm awesome.

My favorite is probably Aaron though.

May I ask what they are?

 

[Brad Shepard]

I like Nick. Because I'm Nick and I'm awesome.

My favorite is probably Aaron though.

May I ask what they are?

there Aarancar mask from the Anime Bleach, well, not from the anime, i made them based off of the anime.

 

[Pegghead]

Yeah they're pretty good.

 

[Newkenyanguy]

Had a feeling they came from an anime =P
I quite like em in the way that you buy halloween masks.

 

[busterkeatonrules]

I think they're great. You have considerable talent. I would say that "Brad" and "Corie" are the highlights - I like those asymmetrical designs!

"Will", however, strikes me as a bit boring. I would suggest removing most (or all) of the green areas, making more of the skull visible. Also, some rivets along the edges of the grey part would probably look great!

 

[Brad Shepard]

I think they're great. You have considerable talent. I would say that "Brad" and "Corie" are the highlights - I like those asymmetrical designs!

"Will", however, strikes me as a bit boring. I would suggest removing most (or all) of the green areas, making more of the skull visible. Also, some rivets along the edges of the grey part would probably look great!

to tell the truth, i made this one kinda shity because i was pissed off at the guy, but im thinking about trying to make the mask more gray and white, and the horns red.

 

[Brad Shepard]

I don't like Phill, seems dark in color (may be my TV's fault). All of the others would be good insignias tho I think. Simple drawings serve simple things, I don't think you'll win any art contests with these, or any points for originality, but don't stop making more! Art is something you need to stick with and constantly make more of if you are to get better.

Do these have personal meanings behind them? People judge art a lot on idea before actual talent, so it would help if you maybe explain them more. I only ask because of how you named them.

first off, thanks for the honest feedback

And yes, i made each of these for a person in my life, like Amanda is my girlfriend, which is why i used pink and purple, her favorite colors, mine is Teal, and so on and so forth, and i tried to make each of them with somthing they like, like Matt's looks kinda like a Wolf, and Corie's has a hand on it sence hes in a medical field and so forth. (Like Ryan's colors too, sence hes a Cowboys fan.)

 

[BlindMessiah94]

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Generally speaking I'd say they are all a similar style which is your style.
They are not bad.
What program are you using? Photoshop?
It may just be the low quality of the jpegs but a lot of the colours are grainy when you look closely at them. I'd say the colouring could be done a little better.
Also if you do have photoshop try doing some shading and making them have some more dimension to them (maybe lighting or something).
They are a good start but I think if touched up they could appear a lot more crisp, clean, and stand out more.
Right now they look like something drawn and then filled with paint bucket in ms paint. The drawings have potential though.

 

[S.R.S.]

Corey needs to be red and Aaron looks really familiar.

 

[Brad Shepard]

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Generally speaking I'd say they are all a similar style which is your style.
They are not bad.
What program are you using? Photoshop?
It may just be the low quality of the jpegs but a lot of the colours are grainy when you look closely at them. I'd say the colouring could be done a little better.
Also if you do have photoshop try doing some shading and making them have some more dimension to them (maybe lighting or something).
They are a good start but I think if touched up they could appear a lot more crisp, clean, and stand out more.
Right now they look like something drawn and then filled with paint bucket in ms paint. The drawings have potential though.

No photoshop, i used my hands and MS paint, cant aford photoshop right now, so you hit it on the dot.

 

[Brad Shepard]

Corey needs to be red and Aaron looks really familiar.

What do you mean by farmiliar?

 

[BlindMessiah94]

snip

Generally speaking I'd say they are all a similar style which is your style.
They are not bad.
What program are you using? Photoshop?
It may just be the low quality of the jpegs but a lot of the colours are grainy when you look closely at them. I'd say the colouring could be done a little better.
Also if you do have photoshop try doing some shading and making them have some more dimension to them (maybe lighting or something).
They are a good start but I think if touched up they could appear a lot more crisp, clean, and stand out more.
Right now they look like something drawn and then filled with paint bucket in ms paint. The drawings have potential though.

No photoshop, i used my hands and MS paint, cant aford photoshop right now, so you hit it on the dot.

Haha, okay then I won't give you too much flack for the colouring.
Like I said though, generally speaking you've got a clear style and its got potential.
Can I ask, do you plan on doing something with your art (comics, webcomics, tatoo artist?)
If you do, I would suggest erm... "acquiring" photoshop, as it is a fantastic program.

 

[S.R.S.]

Corey needs to be red and Aaron looks really familiar.

What do you mean by farmiliar?

*cough cough* Predator

But I'd rather see Ironman masks.

 

[Brad Shepard]

snip

Generally speaking I'd say they are all a similar style which is your style.
They are not bad.
What program are you using? Photoshop?
It may just be the low quality of the jpegs but a lot of the colours are grainy when you look closely at them. I'd say the colouring could be done a little better.
Also if you do have photoshop try doing some shading and making them have some more dimension to them (maybe lighting or something).
They are a good start but I think if touched up they could appear a lot more crisp, clean, and stand out more.
Right now they look like something drawn and then filled with paint bucket in ms paint. The drawings have potential though.

No photoshop, i used my hands and MS paint, cant aford photoshop right now, so you hit it on the dot.

Haha, okay then I won't give you too much flack for the colouring.
Like I said though, generally speaking you've got a clear style and its got potential.
Can I ask, do you plan on doing something with your art (comics, webcomics, tatoo artist?)
If you do, I would suggest erm... "acquiring" photoshop, as it is a fantastic program.

to tell the truth, nothing, i plan on doing more writing, Ive been told by teachers, fellow students, and friends i have a nack (Hope thats the right word) for it, i got a 200+ hand writen story i need to edit and publish, the art is just a little thing to help me deal with stress and what not.

Corey needs to be red and Aaron looks really familiar.

What do you mean by farmiliar?

*cough cough* Predator

But I'd rather see Ironman masks.

...come to think of it, i did watch AvP right before i did that...