Need some 'twisted' background ideas for a character

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WhiteFangofWhoa

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Is this fantasy or reality-based? There's a lot more potential for twisted psyches in fantasy (CRUCIO!) but aberrance in a reality-based setting generally gets more gravitas, particularly if it's not a common thing that happened to them. Involve the character's background in the main story as best you can.

How's this: The character was stranded on an island for several years in an accident. Though he/she survived they were forced to do things no human should ever have to do. When it was finally over they had developed an imaginary 'friend' who seems completely real to them no matter what everyone else says, and this imaginary companion is constantly around while the character tries to return to a normal life, making dark, Lecter-esque inner commentary on every action or word he/she hears from someone else.
 

ninja555

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Since childhood he has had a series of psychotic breakdowns(Hallucinations, Delusions, Thought disorder) that has made his life a living hell. In and out of mental hospitals till the age of 30. He is now trying to pick up what remains of his life.
 

spacecowboy86

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as a child he put up for adoption and adopted by a couple of cannibals. they cared for him (you can guess what he ate) till the age of 8, when they were arrested and he was forced to flee an 4th story apartment. later he was kidnapped by a deranged chemisist whom tested toxic, but non-lethal, chemicals on him and kept him in a cage and fed him scraps of raw meat he could find, usually rat. Because no one was looking for him, he lived here till the age of 16 when he escaped. He then went looking for his bioligical parents and after 2 years of searching, discovered they where wealthy investors and had 4 other children, none of whom else were given up. He was then taken by their body gaurds where they tortured him for 3 months, suspecting him an assassin or spy. Upon release, his (insert random appendage such as pinky or tongue here) was cut out. Finally, he met a companion, who was the only friend he's ever had. They stayed together till he was 25, then his friend and him were poisoned mysteriously, his friend died while he simply passed into a coma for 5 years. Upon awaking, he had no money to pay the hospital bill which passerbys brought him to and was jailed for another 5 years. Now he has escaped and wants to avenge his friends death.

twisted enough or do i need to amp it up?
 

faceless chick

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he is possessed by what he thinks is a dead relative who died because of him, and he randomly changes personality.

the twist is that he wasn't possessed at all and he's doing it on purpose to make people stay away from him since he's afraid of human contact.
 

II2

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Was a kidnap victim, who resisted rescue, showing textbook "Stockholm Syndrome". They were supposedly cured...
 

Mr. Omega

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Simple questions: is it the hero or the villian? How far are you willing to go into bizzare realms?

I got a big catalogue of characters. The heroes are ok, but most of the villians fall into classic villian archtypes. Here's one I think would be interesting, taking out most of the long detailed parts of the thing to sum it up, leaving out any over-the-top comicbook-like aspects.

It sums up part of a tale I had about the origin of one of the three masterminds of a big group I had created. The other backstories are taken care of. I shall refer to them as the man, the madman and the murderess.

A man is part of a group of powerful people. He firmly believes that everything he is doing is for good, and helping man. Then he sees that for the most part, these are just men and women playing god. He is a very spiritual man, and feels the urge to repent, and must right the wrongs he has commited. He finds the one man who can do so: a madman going by the allias (you come up with that, I'm not giving away ALL my ideas). He believes it is fate that has lead them together. He starts by leading the other man to his own home, and it results in the madman killing the one member in the group closest to him biologicaly: his own sister. Thus begins this man's path to insanity from hs obsession to kill the "false gods", as he calls them. There are men there who are to powerful for even him and the madman to deal with, but with each member defeated, their power grows. A cold, cunning murderess going by (once again, you come up with the name) sees their journey as something she can beleive in. These three form a group called (you come up with the name), acting as puppet masters taking well-known criminals and gang leaders to perform actions against the powerful organization.

The madman and murderess seem content, but there is just one thing preventing the man from complete devotion to his mission: there is one member, one of the lowest ranking of the organization, who he has had feelings for. But he knows that this path will lead to her demise. What's more, she is the lover of the protagonist. Deciding to remove this doubt from his mind, he has his men abduct the woman, and gives her an ultimatum: join (group name) or, because she knows the location of their base, she will die. Knowing the insanity that the group will cause, she refuses. The man goes on to say that what they are doing is for the best of mankind, but he knows the madman, murderess and his other followers aren't really in it for that. He knows that the madman is more powerful than he is now at this point as well, and that the madman plans to kill him once it is done. But he knows that this is for the greater good. The false gods must die, no matter who else must perish. With this, he murders the woman he loves. He has no doubt. He has no distraction. He will complete his sacred mision, and accept his judgement once it is done. In combination with other stuff in the story, the death of his lover is to much for the protagonist. This sends the protagonist down his own path of madness, on his own descent into darkness.

the details make this sound alot better, but a thousand times more absurd as well. at least in my head.
 

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Soldier. Took part in a mission where he bore witness to the greatest horrors human eyes have ever saw. He was the only survivor in that mission. After an evac, he starts fighting again, but goes insane and kills his comrades slowly, and 1 by 1. From there, up to you.
 

Nouw

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Abanic said:
Anyone can come up with twisted stuff if they don't have to tie it in with the rest of the story. What did you want this character to do that requires a traumatic past?
A trail for revenge. Along the way he does weird, psychotic things.
 

Keela

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His dad has always told him that the only decisions that matter are the hard ones. Due to several variables, including a deeper thinking than most on life and death, specifically, what would be a good reason for someone to be killed; this leads to him deciding that those who cause more harm than benifit to society as a whole could probably be done without. He goes on to be one of the most skilled vigilantes the world has ever seen, always keeping his identity secret, and always remaining emotionally detached from his actions, knowing that everything he does is justified by the very apparent positive effects on every area he has an anti-criminal killing spree in, and ignoring people with actual morals. Law enforcement is unsure of whether he needs to be brought in, because every place he visits sees crime rates dropping through the center of the planet, straight out the other side and deep into neverending space.

I think I just got something off my chest in a weird way. I also think I just created a really dark super hero origins story by accident. His name is Scavenger. He picks apart the rotten bits of society that harm the ecosystem otherwise. I love using imagination!
 

Nouw

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Thanks guys, especially Snowfox for telling me about the 'why' they would do it.
The motive. If he/she is scared or something, why?
 

Xerridock

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Sorry, but I'm not gonna read all the huge backgrounds >.<
So if this type has been said before, I apologize.

Quick ideas: (For the basic starters that can be worked out any way you like really)

Genetic experiment.
Rape/murder/hostage situation. (by the way, you can easily use hostage situations to create a livelong phobia, for example, they tormented their hostages with spiders; 'Arachnophobia')
Honor story. (Lived as a monk, group of guys came by burned temple down. Lived as normal guy, family was dishonored, gets revenge.)

Worked out Idea:

Living as a orphaned bastard kid taken into a religious family, the kid was never really liked by his brother, sister and father. The mother was the only one who really liked him/her. But when one day, on her way back home from picking up the boy/girl she gets murdered, the kid lives. His adoptive family blames it on him. His adoptive father saying it's his fault that his wife died, just as it was his fault his original parents got murdered. Being kept inside his room and home-schooled by a teacher who comes in every day. He never gets social contact, except for the tormenting of his 'brother' and 'sister' and the beatings of his drunk 'father'. The only things he learns are from the books he reads and the lessons he gets, with that accusation still in mind (that it was his fault his original parents got murdered). Eventually he gets kicked out of the house. Looking for the identity of his real parents and their murderer(s) and the murderer(s) of his adoptive mother he finds out the murderer was/were the same person(s) (or part of the same group, makes it easier to stretch the story by making him go after the entire group, maybe even make him do the psychotic things because he is trying to infiltrate the group).


I hope I've given you something to work with here, and not something that's been done before.
Good luck, and do let us know how it went in the end.