I'm just making this post so that in the future, it will be a lot easier to help you with movies, books, short stories, etc that you're having trouble with:
Post the full story.
I'm not asking for every detail, but just post maybe a paragraph long (depending on the story depth) summary.
It actually makes it a lot easier to figure out what's best for the story when you actually know what it is.
Post the full story.
I'm not asking for every detail, but just post maybe a paragraph long (depending on the story depth) summary.
It actually makes it a lot easier to figure out what's best for the story when you actually know what it is.