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ZippyDSMlee

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I have a new synopsis for you all, been refining it a bit more. I suck at words so ti takes me awhile to translate what the muses give me and then translate that from zippy speak to engrish. LOL
Yes I do realize my skillz rival that of a hax but as far as I care we are all only do gifted so I am working with what I got while I learn/re learn about words, meanings and grammar as I bang together words with rocks and TNT.

This is the 4th synopsis I have tried to write out and probably the most compact as I have learned I like to ramble in TMI mode.
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What is Chronicles of the Lord of Power?
What is COTLOP well let?s start at the start of the universe light creation itself was born from nothingness born from the nightmares of darkness itself. Darkness is not chaos but utter despair from the sorrow hope brings it is the end where as light is the beginning. Within this new universe Lightness was fruitful and scattered life and wisdom out. When Darkness arose from its slumber it wonder why it had such terrifying dreams of creation, it sought out Lightness and they fought destroying everything around them sending everything back to basic forms of matter and energy. After a few more fistdecuffs they realized they cannot win in a direct battle as they are complete equals so decided to raise vast armies and evolve warriors to battle for them.

From afar in the misty vistage of the endless void Lightness and Darkness sit at a table upon it sits a chess board, a game is in play one of many throughout existence. This is but one of many table and chair sets strewn thought the void. Each table and chair are made of simple wire frame, the chess boards minutely different, on each side of the board is a bowel to hold pieces in on the light side the bowel has a black on white theme of orderly straight lines, on the dark side the bowel is white on black with chaotic like vertical lines. It is here they vaguely, indirectly toy with existence in between naps and bickering like 2 old men who don?t get along but put up with each other rather than deal with loneliness and the madness it brings.

When the balance shatters and one side gains so much power as so the other can never win that?s when everything will return to darkness, or so it?s said that balance has never been broken even when the first age of war of creation ended. Called the birth war, first breath wart or still borns war in darker parts of existence, even as the new age matures into the war of creation a new age is about to begin one of lawlessness one of strife?one of hope and despair.

The factions within this universe are of light and darkness, Light?s forces are bureaucratic and stern focusing more on ?gardening? creation in its entirety while defending what they can against darkness. Dark Forces are casts of mostly honor bound warriors, those who have lost hope and seek the peace that despair brings for those of darkness only see suffering in hope and wish to bring an end to creation and return all to the peace and harmony of the void.

The story revolves around a human chosen to be another pawn in the war of creation but unlike the others before him he is path is less certain as his power his mere existence disturbs the placation of the light and the veracity of the dark. Sent to a trail word he manages to save it from complete destruction only after undoing the harm darkness done and it?s this altering of reality this near absolute and corruptive power that will haunt him throughout his adventures. He overcomes his curse but too late to be cursed by it.

Feared and hated he leaves the cold comfort of the light to wander existence heeding the call for help no matter who calls out in the endless night of space, time and dimension??.

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Now with this I have enough plot points for 3-6 books I am still adding adjusting and figuring out what goes where, this is pretty much a project I am doing because I am damned to create and I have had these stories with this character in my head for 20 odd years.
This book project is a hobby that with general self taught creative writing is getting me to understand how I compeered words and how they come out of me, learning disabilities can be fun but the muses of creativity are more potent and harsh.
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I also muse on other things but not to deeply as I tend to be filled with creativty for a few hours or a day as I try and figure out this dream or story that wont let me go.

I call them lite drafts some can involve game setups.
http://zippydsmlee.wordpress.com/writing-and-wutbits/writing-projects/
 

Arntor

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Wait, if Light wins but everything returns to Darkness, why would Light be fighting in the first place?
 

ZippyDSMlee

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Arntor said:
Wait, if Light wins but everything returns to Darkness, why would Light be fighting in the first place?
Now there is a question I have only half tackled.
Basically if light wins everyone becomes enlightened to the point they don't care about the coming end, if darkness wins well.... doom and destruction swallow all.


Scenario 1.Newest concept.
Darkness brings contrast in existence without it there is not enough balance to maintain existence as those who lived in the dark are gone and those that live even partially in the light start to become enlighten and move on from the normal mortal plane. As universes become empty they start falling apart due to increased energy/molecular activity.

On a dimensional scale as things collapse those places with some form of life will fail.

Optional concept.
Life energy is one of the fundamental forces of nature, the more life spreads out in a universe the more stable it becomes. It acts like a net radiating positive forces maintaining natural balances. This is a process of creation and one of the reasons why LF has to take on a managerial/gardener role.

Remove them all and things start to decay, even on a dimensional scale.



Scenario 2.
The original concept, Pure light purges and without darkness the light engulfs all.


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Light/Dark can not fight each other there is no winning just endless struggle, with the light only wishing to create and dark wishing for destruction a pact was made to use pawns, the forces they gather battle it out the winner gains the right to slay the other, they both agreed begrudgingly to it as there needs to be a end to match the beginning.

But just as light seeps out from the dark the light by itself will gravitate back to dark.


All endings bring new beginnings just because ones wins dose not mean time stops eternally it merely means all that matter/energy and conscious reforms into new embodiment of light and dark.
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Get out your cliches and near obvious plot points, there aint nothing too new here :p

Edit: I just forgot to add the symbolism/imaginary of Lightness and Darkness playing chess over the events that unfold. Now I wonder where I stuck it...

Ok found it now I got to rewrite it as so it fits in the above.

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ZippyDSMlee

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DraconianKing said:
The difference between high concept fiction and low concept fiction is...utter confusion :p

And it dose not help I drink from my own tits sometimes.... oh wait utter..not udder.... :X

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ZippyDSMlee

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am learning disabled not retarded despite popular belief moronic perhaps idiotic maybe? but not retarded :p

My 2 prominent LDs are
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dyslexia
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dysgraphia

I use Word 07 to shave off some incoherence that comes with zippy speak but it dose not always cut the mental ?accent? mew bwains have.


I know its clichéd and high flatulent/concept that?s a bit on the druged side but I am kinda damned to work on it because its becoming a driving force for me.

One the reasons I bring it now and then is to polish the gaps I don't see or answer questions which always seem to open up new lines of thought for me, so take it as you will.


Anymore questions if not I'll let sink back into the void of the forum, then bring out a new one in a year or so..that is if I can handle figuring out how to organize this mess, have 60 docx files and growing 0-o.