Noby Noby Boy

[Zersy]

The PSN has being spewing great titles for the past couple Months and will continue within the Following

I myself have bought a few PSN Games

and each one i bought was worth the money and yes even PAIN no matter how much of a scam it is

Now onto the Game

Noby Noby Boy is a Hard Game to review since it's in it's own Genre but if i had to make a name for this Genre i would call it "Silly But Strange Fun"

but i won't bother saying much about the facts of the game since many of you clicked here
to hear a verdict

so when i bought Noby Noby Boy it was after someone convinced me,, after downloading i played it
the first thing i noticed that this game a cheery feel to it full of color
and little things that make you say "WTF" in the good way

the first thing that caught my critisim was the controls they were baffiling but controlling the character anyone can do after a good 5 min but

BUT

the camera took me ages to master !!
this game has a very uniqe way to do the camera but it also happens to be some ways frustrating but i eventaully got the hang of it and after that it didn't bother me that much

now onto the gameplay

in simple this is no real goal other then to "Report" your length to the giant version of you so it can absorb that length and grow
but the intresting is that everyone who bought the game contributes to this
so the more people around the world play the more they make the main goal of the game bigger
and i found this a great community thing knowing that everyone else was doing the same thing you are.

but mainly you make the goal

this may sound dum or dissapointing but it actually works
i found myself doing all sorts of things only for the reward that i get a smile on my face

i decided i wanted to eat a few people then wanted to hook myself throught the donut cloads and i did it felt so satifying that i decided to let all the people who i had eaten go by pooping them out which gave me a GOD kinda feel

Graphically this game is just colorful nothing like "OMG!!" but just a little something that makes you say "Hehehe"

but now onto the MAIN question

is this game worth buying ?

well i played it and had fun and i'm definately going to play it some more

but if your debating on whether you should get another PSN game instead like

Flower or Crash Commando then i would tell you anyday that they are more your moneys worth although they are also more expensive

so Noby Noby boy is cheap compared to the other great titles.

i would say yes it is worth the 4 Bucks because i know i'm going to keep coming back for it

oh did i forget to mention that you unlock easy trophies and you get new planets to mess around on when you make "GIRL" the right length ?

EDIT : Really sorry about the terrible grammer used

 

[Galletea]

Firstly, your structure needs cleaning up, it's disjointed and that makes it difficult to read. You don't need caps to emphasise, bold or italics are much more effective.
You shouldn't assume that your audience knows about the game you're reviewing.
You need to expand on many of your points. I don't know the game, and after reading this, I'm not much wiser.

 

[dcheppy]

Firstly, your structure needs cleaning up, it's disjointed and that makes it difficult to read. You don't need caps to emphasise, bold or italics are much more effective.
You shouldn't assume that your audience knows about the game you're reviewing.
You need to expand on many of your points. I don't know the game, and after reading this, I'm not much wiser.

LOL, after playing it, you might not be that much wiser. It's that weird. Worth your 5 bucks though, but not any more than that.

 

[NewClassic_v1legacy]

The PSN has being spewing great titles for the past couple months and will continue within the following, as well. I myself have bought a few PSN games myself.

and Each of them that I bought was worth the money. (And yes, even PAIN. No matter how much of a scam it is.) (You're making the mistake of assuming your reader knows what any of these games are. It's a slippery slope of assumption. I'd suggest assuming your reader knows nothing of the PSN Market. I personally don't.)

Now, onto the game.

Noby Noby Boy is a hard game to review since it's in it's own genre. but If I had to make a name for this genre, I would call it: "Silly, but strange, fun."

but I won't bother saying much about the facts of the game since many of you clicked here to hear a verdict. So when I bought Noby Noby Boy, it was after someone convinced me to do so. After downloading, I played it. (This is a pointless addition. Give us something to go on here. I played it, and...?) The first thing I noticed was that this game has a cheery feel to it, and that it is full of color. and It also has little things that make you say "WTF" (In a good way.)

The first thing that caught my critisim I noticed was the controls. They were baffling, but controlling the character is something anyone can do after a good 5 minuntes. but BUT

Although, the camera took me ages to master!!

This game has a very unique way to do the camera, but it also happens to be some ways frustrating in some ways. (How? Why? This needs to be explained.) but I eventually got the hang of it and after that, it didn't bother me that much.

Now, onto the gameplay.

Put simply, there is no real goal other then to "Report" your length to the giant version of you so it can absorb that length and grow. (This makes no sense. It'd be like explaining Katamari by "gathering stuff to throw into the sky." Logically correct, but completely nonsensical for anyone who knows nothing of the game.) but The interesting thing is that everyone who bought the game contributes to this.

So the more people around the world that play, the more they make the main goal of the game bigger. (So, what exactly is the point here? Is this game even fun? You've kinda failed to mention that little important tidbit.) and I found this a great community thing feeling knowing that everyone else was doing the same thing you are I was.

but Mainly, you make the goal. (You make the goal what? You achieve the goal, or you make the goal worthwhile? It's all so unclear.)

This may sound dumb or disappointing, but it actually works. (As a reviewer, it is your job to convince the reader of this.) I found myself doing all sorts of things, only for the reward that I get a smile on my face. (Why? Explain!)

I decided I wanted to eat a few people, (Huh? Eating people?) then wanted to hook myself through the donut clouds. and I did it, and it felt so satisfying that I decided to let all the people who I had eaten go by pooping them out. Which gave me a God kinda feel.

Graphically, this game is just a colorful nothing like "OMG!" but Just with a little something that makes you say "He he he."

but Now, onto the main question:
Is this game worth buying?

Well, I played it and had fun, and I'm definitely going to play it some more. but If you're debating on whether or not you should get another PSN game instead like Flower or Crash Commando, then I would tell you any day that they are more your money's worth. (Although they are also more expensive.)

So Noby Noby Boy is a cheap game compared to the other great titles, but still worth your consideration. (I think, this review isn't really very clear.) I would say, yes, it is worth the 4 bucks. Because I know I'm going to keep coming back for to it.

(Oh, did I forget to mention that you unlock easy trophies and you get new planets to mess around on when you make "GIRL" (What is "GIRL"?) the right length?)

EDIT : I'm really sorry about the terrible grammar that I used.

Okay, here's the deal. First thing's first, you grammar needs work. To the point where I would assume that English isn't your native language. That's not to say that you're a bad writer, just that your grammar needs a lot of practice. You omit parts of speech rampantly, you fail to explain your sentences coherently from a subject and verbal standpoint, and you are absolutely rampant about starting sentences with "and" or "but." Though, I'll be honest in saying that this isn't your biggest problem.

Reviews are something to inform the reader. You're not telling the reader anything about that game with this entire piece except that you enjoyed it. You mention nothing about the facts of the game (which you should never, ever do, much less purposefully). There's an art to reviewing that takes more than a game and a piece of paper. It's a practiced art that really takes practice and focus.

That's not to say you can't do it, but you certainly can't take it as a light undertaking. Reviewing is really a difficult thing to do, and takes a lot more effort and practice than you seem to have put into it. Really take these critiques to heart, and see why I did what I do for your review. The footnotes are especially important, as those are questions your readers will have and not have the answers to.

So, explain your points more. As well as that, format your review in such a way that it is conducive for the reader. With your many line-breaks, even those in the middle of sentences, you're making it a challenge for your reader to keep up.

Also, despite your apology for grammar, you really should make an effort to clean it up (even slightly) so the readers won't have as hard a time reading.

Good luck, and I'm here if you need to ask any questions.

Warmest Regards,
Nuke.

 

[Soigieoto]

Slightly off topic: why is PAIN a "scam"? I've never played it so I don't really know anything about it.

Its a scam, because there is so many DLCs.
or at least its some thing like that.

 

[Zersy]

I found myself doing all sorts of things only for the reward that i get a smile on my face.

I think this is why the game works so well. There are no missions or goals to speak of so it's up to you to make your own amusement. You only do the things you want to do and you stop playing as soon as you begin to lose interest. It's impossible for the game to ever become repetitive or boring because the player is in complete control. Whether or not this was an intentional choice or a necessity due to budget constraints is hard to say, but at the end of the day it doesn't matter.

Slightly off topic: why is PAIN a "scam"? I've never played it so I don't really know anything about it.

Thanks for your comment

and PAIN is a scam becuase alot of the things in the game need to be bought
even though you spent 5 bulk on the game you have to pay a extra total of about 10 to get what the game is really supposed to offer

e.g.

pay per character

pay per event

pay per map

basically it is more of a money robber then a game

 

[Zersy]

The PSN has being spewing great titles for the past couple months and will continue within the following, as well. I myself have bought a few PSN games myself.

and Each of them that I bought was worth the money. (And yes, even PAIN. No matter how much of a scam it is.) (You're making the mistake of assuming your reader knows what any of these games are. It's a slippery slope of assumption. I'd suggest assuming your reader knows nothing of the PSN Market. I personally don't.)

Now, onto the game.

Noby Noby Boy is a hard game to review since it's in it's own genre. but If I had to make a name for this genre, I would call it: "Silly, but strange, fun."

but I won't bother saying much about the facts of the game since many of you clicked here to hear a verdict. So when I bought Noby Noby Boy, it was after someone convinced me to do so. After downloading, I played it. (This is a pointless addition. Give us something to go on here. I played it, and...?) The first thing I noticed was that this game has a cheery feel to it, and that it is full of color. and It also has little things that make you say "WTF" (In a good way.)

The first thing that caught my critisim I noticed was the controls. They were baffling, but controlling the character is something anyone can do after a good 5 minuntes. but BUT

Although, the camera took me ages to master!!

This game has a very unique way to do the camera, but it also happens to be some ways frustrating in some ways. (How? Why? This needs to be explained.) but I eventually got the hang of it and after that, it didn't bother me that much.

Now, onto the gameplay.

Put simply, there is no real goal other then to "Report" your length to the giant version of you so it can absorb that length and grow. (This makes no sense. It'd be like explaining Katamari by "gathering stuff to throw into the sky." Logically correct, but completely nonsensical for anyone who knows nothing of the game.) but The interesting thing is that everyone who bought the game contributes to this.

So the more people around the world that play, the more they make the main goal of the game bigger. (So, what exactly is the point here? Is this game even fun? You've kinda failed to mention that little important tidbit.) and I found this a great community thing feeling knowing that everyone else was doing the same thing you are I was.

but Mainly, you make the goal. (You make the goal what? You achieve the goal, or you make the goal worthwhile? It's all so unclear.)

This may sound dumb or disappointing, but it actually works. (As a reviewer, it is your job to convince the reader of this.) I found myself doing all sorts of things, only for the reward that I get a smile on my face. (Why? Explain!)

I decided I wanted to eat a few people, (Huh? Eating people?) then wanted to hook myself through the donut clouds. and I did it, and it felt so satisfying that I decided to let all the people who I had eaten go by pooping them out. Which gave me a God kinda feel.

Graphically, this game is just a colorful nothing like "OMG!" but Just with a little something that makes you say "He he he."

but Now, onto the main question:
Is this game worth buying?

Well, I played it and had fun, and I'm definitely going to play it some more. but If you're debating on whether or not you should get another PSN game instead like Flower or Crash Commando, then I would tell you any day that they are more your money's worth. (Although they are also more expensive.)

So Noby Noby Boy is a cheap game compared to the other great titles, but still worth your consideration. (I think, this review isn't really very clear.) I would say, yes, it is worth the 4 bucks. Because I know I'm going to keep coming back for to it.

(Oh, did I forget to mention that you unlock easy trophies and you get new planets to mess around on when you make "GIRL" (What is "GIRL"?) the right length?)

EDIT : I'm really sorry about the terrible grammar that I used.

Okay, here's the deal. First thing's first, you grammar needs work. To the point where I would assume that English isn't your native language. That's not to say that you're a bad writer, just that your grammar needs a lot of practice. You omit parts of speech rampantly, you fail to explain your sentences coherently from a subject and verbal standpoint, and you are absolutely rampant about starting sentences with "and" or "but." Though, I'll be honest in saying that this isn't your biggest problem.

Reviews are something to inform the reader. You're not telling the reader anything about that game with this entire piece except that you enjoyed it. You mention nothing about the facts of the game (which you should never, ever do, much less purposefully). There's an art to reviewing that takes more than a game and a piece of paper. It's a practiced art that really takes practice and focus.

That's not to say you can't do it, but you certainly can't take it as a light undertaking. Reviewing is really a difficult thing to do, and takes a lot more effort and practice than you seem to have put into it. Really take these critiques to heart, and see why I did what I do for your review. The footnotes are especially important, as those are questions your readers will have and not have the answers to.

So, explain your points more. As well as that, format your review in such a way that it is conducive for the reader. With your many line-breaks, even those in the middle of sentences, you're making it a challenge for your reader to keep up.

Also, despite your apology for grammar, you really should make an effort to clean it up (even slightly) so the readers won't have as hard a time reading.

Good luck, and I'm here if you need to ask any questions.

Warmest Regards,
Nuke.

I really appricate your comment

you have taught more me more on reviewing and overall

you showed me all the things that i always do wrong in my post

My way of saying thanks is to befriend you

(I'm really impressed on your skill in observing Reviews)