Ooooookay. Why is the term "Mary Sue" being thrown around like paint?

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If I'm not mistaken Mary/Gary Sue characters were characters that were perfect at everything, loved by everyone (except the antagonist), and had no character flaws what-so-ever. You know, like pretty much everyone's self-insert fan fiction characters. Nowadays I suspect it's become another synonym for " I don't like."
 

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Sexual Harassment Panda said:
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It is just a stupid term sucked in by the internet and regurgitated over and over till it has lost its meaning like most popular terms. It is kind of insulting that it is always used on female characters most of the time unfairly. So many people use that term on Rey that you would thing that all the people who use it come from some weird hive mind. It is just the same tired argument over and over again
Hive-minder checking in. Honestly, she left me feeling pretty cold. She genuinely was perfect to the point of being a bit annoying/boring. Those were my feelings. You get to share internal conflict as well as the films better comedy moments with Finn(the other new hero character which I would still say was underdeveloped, though not to the point of stopping me from enjoying the film), which help give his character... Character.

Maybe you can tell me what I missed. If you were to sell me on the character, how would you explain her? What is her personality like? What are her affectations?




Really? I didn't feel that way about her at all I found her incredibly likable as a character and I thought that there was a lot of depth to her
Okay here is how I would explain her character
She has severe abandonment issues. She has had a hard life on Jakku where she has had to scrounge up a meager existence by hunting for scrap for many years. She has also done this on her own as it looks like she doesn't live with anybody else so consequently it has hardened her outlook on life. Her outlook changes through the course of the movie as she finally leaves Jakku in the wide world. Her manner brightens around Finn and especially around Han Solo because I think she seems him as a sort of father figure. Still even though she is enjoying herself on her journey she still feels obligated to return to Jakku in the vain hope that her family will eventually return for her. Through the course of the movie she has to come to terms with the fact that her destiny will be settled elsewhere. She is a dynamic character whose desires and motivations change throughout the movie. She is not some perfect character that has no growth at all. She is a protagonist who is gifted with many of the same traits that protagonists normally have such as Harry Potter or Odysseus. Oh and of course she is attractive this is a movie after all Hollywood actors are usually considered to be beautiful people. You can say that every main character in Star Wars Awakens are attractive people.
You fucked up the quote there. Not criticising exactly... Done so more times than I can count. Just to be clear that I'm misquoted.

I noticed what you're talking about enough to know what you're talking about, but I found it all to be underdeveloped. I hope they flesh out the details that you mentioned in the films that follow, because they felt like vague nods to character motivations and history than they did anything substantial, IMHO. That's where my heads at. Not that she can't be a good character, she just isn't yet.

Yeah I did fuck that up I kind of noticed it as soon as it happened but I didn't know how to fix it
Anyway I think the problem a lot of us are making is that we are treating Rey as the main character of a standalone film. That is like judging Harry Potter as a character by only what he did in the first movie/book. There is certainly a lot about her character that needs to be expanded upon which is a good thing because it would suck if her character had nothing else but what we saw in the first movie. My main issue was the whole Mary Sue thing which is not a reliable or even worthwhile term. It is like Manic Pixie Dream girl in that sense. She is a good starting protagonist to a much longer series. Something that the Phantom Menace completely failed to have on any level.
 

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Also, wasn't Daala Tarkin's secret apprentice/lover who went on to lead Imperial remnants o humiliating defeat after humiliating defeat only to somehow end up leading the Republic, or am I thinking of someone else?
Yup that's her! The Tarkin fangirl who got left behind with the secret weapons facility for years before stumbling onto a galaxy where the Imperials were overthrown and vowing to do her sugar daddy proud, she embarks on a series of debilitating raids against the new republic which go well until she gets beated by jedi hax and her fleet gets wiped.

After that she limps back to imperial remnant space on her last star destroyer where she becomes an ambassador for one of the many moffs, travels around to get an idea of how fucked the empire is and after a series of awesome events unites the Imperial remnants into a cohesive force in quite a badass way (probably my favorite part of the entire Daala arc) involving a lot of (wo)manly tears as she genuinely tries to convince people to work together before finally accepting she is going to have to be the one to reshape the Empire:

It's worth noting she didn't even want to lead the Imperials at this point and was quite happy to be a subordinate but none of the major Imperial leaders were able enough and they spend their time bickering when she gathered them together to a big meeting..So deciding enough is enough, if they ain't gonna man up, then she will woman it up, kills most of them and grudgingly accept she is the boss now.
Under her rule Imperial remnants shape up and become an effective fighting force once again, she also amends regulations so aliens can join Imperials and women are considered more capable (this is an aspect of OT that never made sense to me btw..I'm glad this bit has been somewhat retconned and female imperials are now an established thing rather then being an anomaly), leading to a surge in Imperial patriotism across all their systems.

And then she proceeds to kick major Republic tail, seriously, she does awesome. But then once again, she gets screwed over by Jedi hax which totally wreck her plan as well as her super star destroyer. Then understanding she can no longer lead the Imperials after such a failure she hands over command to the long suffering Pelleon.

Then I kinda stopped following the EU shortly before the vuu zhong or w/e they were called, so I don't know what she was up to after that. If she ended up leading the republic then that is truly lulz worthy considering she is a die hard Imperial through and through.

Anyways TLDR, yeah she lead the Imperials to humiliating defeats..But it really wasn't her fault :'(
Friggin jedi cheated so hard.

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There wasn't much of a fleet left period, due to the disarmament treaty. And yeah, a lack of world building/state of the galaxy context was more of the film's most egregious sins. I get feeling allergic to "Space Politics" after Phantom Menace, but it resulted in a lot of (IMO) unnecessary confusion.
Only just caught this. So New Republic fleet had been shriveled and what's left was concentrated on 5-6 planets?
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Palpatine was right!

Also I'd love some Space politics. It just wasn't well done in the prequels ><
Game of Thrones Star Wars plz J.J.
...That honestly sound like it would've made for a far better series of movies. Would've left us with better villains at least. Instead we got Darth Linkin Park, a shiny Boba Fett, a less subtle Space Hitler, and Darth Monster From Lost.
 

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Mary Sue gets overused because it sounds better and more "objective" than "I don't like this character".
Considering she outdoes both previous main characters with the force by a significant margin, there's merit to the argument.

Luke: Good pilot, pulls off a shot anyone could've made.

Anakin: Phenomenal Pilot and prodigy with machines, blows up an enemy Space Station from inside. Also, is made of Force.

Rey: Phenomenal pilot, skilled martial artist, above average marksman (with no real training. Seriously, she missed twice and then nailed every Stormtrooper sent after her), Able to resist force mind jerkery and turns the tables on the uy who did it and then pull off the Mind Trick (Again, with no training) all with no real personality issues beyond not wanting to leave home. (Seriously, Luke was a hothead who tended to look before leaping and it eventually cost him his hand, while Anakin's issues with loss pretty much marched him down the dark side.)

Gotta admit, she's coming off as kinda sueish here.
 

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Metalix Knightmare said:
DementedSheep said:
Mary Sue gets overused because it sounds better and more "objective" than "I don't like this character".
Considering she outdoes both previous main characters with the force by a significant margin, there's merit to the argument.

Luke: Good pilot, pulls off a shot anyone could've made.

Anakin: Phenomenal Pilot and prodigy with machines, blows up an enemy Space Station from inside. Also, is made of Force.

Rey: Phenomenal pilot, skilled martial artist, above average marksman (with no real training. Seriously, she missed twice and then nailed every Stormtrooper sent after her), Able to resist force mind jerkery and turns the tables on the uy who did it and then pull off the Mind Trick (Again, with no training) all with no real personality issues beyond not wanting to leave home. (Seriously, Luke was a hothead who tended to look before leaping and it eventually cost him his hand, while Anakin's issues with loss pretty much marched him down the dark side.)

Gotta admit, she's coming off as kinda sueish here.
I didn't mention Rey? I've not even seen the movie. I was talking generally about the overuse of the term.
 

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DementedSheep said:
Metalix Knightmare said:
DementedSheep said:
Mary Sue gets overused because it sounds better and more "objective" than "I don't like this character".
Considering she outdoes both previous main characters with the force by a significant margin, there's merit to the argument.

Luke: Good pilot, pulls off a shot anyone could've made.

Anakin: Phenomenal Pilot and prodigy with machines, blows up an enemy Space Station from inside. Also, is made of Force.

Rey: Phenomenal pilot, skilled martial artist, above average marksman (with no real training. Seriously, she missed twice and then nailed every Stormtrooper sent after her), Able to resist force mind jerkery and turns the tables on the uy who did it and then pull off the Mind Trick (Again, with no training) all with no real personality issues beyond not wanting to leave home. (Seriously, Luke was a hothead who tended to look before leaping and it eventually cost him his hand, while Anakin's issues with loss pretty much marched him down the dark side.)

Gotta admit, she's coming off as kinda sueish here.
I didn't mention Rey? I've not even seen the movie. I was talking generally about the overuse of the term.
Ah. I apologize for jumping you like then. Sorry.
 

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Corey Schaff said:
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though nothing really justifies her ability to use the Force to the extent that she does with zero training.
Well, here are my thoughts on that matter.

I have some suspicions as to why she has such a great potential that she is able to overcome Kylo Ren even though he has a bit more experience (but not even training, since he hasn't been trained yet). It must have something to do with who her parents are I bet. I hope Luke isn't her father though, but that's one of the possibilities.
My thoughts on your thoughts on that matter.

So my idea rejects the bloodline concept that everyone seems to have latched onto as to how Rey becomes so good so fast.

My theory is that the force as a whole is trying to balance itself. It latches both light and dark attributes onto a few items that were used by heavy force users and then "Awakens" a bunch of force sensitives around the galaxy. Two items that we see in this movie would be Darth Vaders helmet and Luke's/Anakin's lightsaber. A force sensitive that touches these items gets hit with a massive power boost and essentially a mental crash course in the basics to give them a fighting chance at becoming Jedi or Sith.

Kylo is exposed to Vader's helmet, either through Snoke or by himself and gains a massive amount of power, enough to rival Luke and his followers. Kylo's line "Show me again, the power of the dark side" seems to insinuate that he received a vision or other boost from the helmet.

Rey is the first or only force sensitive to touch the Saber as far as we know. It is only after Rey gets the vision that she exhibits any force related abilities, or at least any notable ones as her enhanced piloting skills could be force related.

If Finn ends up also being force sensitive then it could simply be that each empowerment works as a one time only deal and Rey drained the Saber before Finn touched it.
 

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DementedSheep said:
Mary Sue gets overused because it sounds better and more "objective" than "I don't like this character".
What???

No. Mary Sue is used (perhaps in error) in an attempt to call-out a character for being out-of-place powerful, with little-to-no drawbacks, within the universe of that character.

Saying a character seems like a "Mary Sue" might well be a reason a person doesn't like that character, but it is not a direct substitute for saying that specifically, which is what you suggest.
 

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If I'm not mistaken Mary/Gary Sue characters were characters that were perfect at everything, loved by everyone (except the antagonist), and had no character flaws what-so-ever. You know, like pretty much everyone's self-insert fan fiction characters. Nowadays I suspect it's become another synonym for " I don't like."
It can be that.

The idea of a Mary Sue character is "Wish fulfillment". It's just a symbolism for "shitty" writing in most cases, because a poorly created character is one that you feel nothing for when they win or lose, or more commonly, they break your suspension of disbelief by doing something that's unnatural to the story.

It's not a question of "like/dislike", it is the essential part of writing characters; that becomes a problem when people become genre savvy and have seen everything before, that they have a sense of belief and disbelief.

And it's the difference between an average writer, and a great writer in that they can create and use characters to do things that don't just fit in like puzzle pieces to fulfill the limitations of the plot and scope of the plot. i.e. there has to be a reason that the bad guy shows up and travels to the various locations in each chapter/arc/volume/episode, and for all of the other characters to be there too. If somehow the characters just show up, it's not co-incidence, it's deus ex machina by the author(s). If they then win this contrived situation, and get better as a result, that's where it becomes Mary Sue.

Heroes often break into bullshit territory if they are poorly written, or the author does not know how to write characters or make them believable or flawed. So instead, they will insert a perfect version of themselves into the scene to get past the plot or the universe, because they only need the character to be there.

From TFA, there's the example of R2D2 suddenly powering up with the final puzzle piece, for no explicable reason other than "it's time to get luke". There's nothing in the story that explains why R2D2 is prevented from doing so before or after. Deus Ex Machina.

For reasons that have to be ignored, Rey survives and thrives when confronted, using abilities she's never known or seen before. i.e. If rey had started floating down to the ground in TFA during her opening salvage scene, that would have been enough to explain "oh, she's a magical girl then", etc. Everything she does from that point onwards, is shaped by her abilities and as a character, second. And, if you know she's capable early on, then her motives change accordingly.

If she uses the force earlier on, the audience doesn't know, but the character suspects/is ignorant of the force/jedi, then things work differently too. in some sense, TFA breaks because she's appropriately "normal", and then she becomes powerful enough to get out of a bad situation without help, or any kind of extrapolation or explanation.

I don't really care that Kylo Ren is mortally wounded as a descriptive element to that fight, he has enough dexterity to fight Finn, and Rey together, and that's not a defensive bluff, that's his motive as a character. In a realistic setting, he has had combat experience with a lightsaber, and has defeated other jedi, even trainees with a lightsaber. It's to be expected that he's defeated Luke or another jedi teacher (are there any others ?), before Luke walked away from his job as a teacher, but regardless, in a regular universe, Finn and Rey are going to die unless they have some magical plot armor to defend them.

As a jedi character, Rey fails in the same way that a lot of hero characters do, they don't Exist in the same world as anyone else, because they can evade or survive against fantastic opposition and thrive on it.

The more infamous examples are characters that "don't" fail, because they're just apparently that good. Han, for example, is Sue-Riffic, but it's likeable because he ends up doing stupid things. That's his job. Rey and Finn, survive the attack in the Falcon, and get picked up by Han's ship because the plot required it to happen, and warped around to suit that outcome. Rey survives a lightsaber fight, because she has to. She won't be injured or calloused, because she's the new disney princess of the story. Neither, does Phasma.

Jedi are Sue Territory, in the Republic of Sue, led by President Sue and her harem of Sue's. And every week, some villains show up.

The former EU is littered with so many examples, its laughable, but so are the prequels and animated adaptations (Clone wars, Rebels, etc.). It's only when a Mary Sue Villain shows up that the jedi even face losses, ie a superweapon that devours solar plasma, and can fire coherent plasma beams across a solar system, let alone several solar systems, is a contrivance of epic proportion that not even the first movie gets away with. The rebels know about the death star at the beginning, and it's the central plot device.

Even the Sith, like Snoke, Ren, are the buttmokeys of this superweapon in a sense, because they're not defeating anyone who's a central character yet. Not even Finn. Jedi, are Mary Sue characters when written poorly because they have no impact on other characters when they lose, and also no impact when they win.

Very, very rarely, does the Mary Sue let anyone die if they don't have to, very rarely does the Mary Sue face an even battle, very rarely does the Mary Sue not fight. They win, because that's their job in the story. Odds, challenges, opposition, travel time, equipment, logistics, etc. are placed in between to pad out the eventual victory and make it more compelling. Or, they're not, and there's no sense of victory, only inevitability.

It's all part of the motivation and change of the character through the events of the story, and what they change about themselves to get there. In a Mary Sue, they don't change. They just need to be in Chapter 5 to fight the bad guy, so now they need something to dramatically get them there.

If the hulk has to ride the elevator to get to Loki at the end of the Avengers, that doesn't make it less hokey, it makes an unreal character that reeks of Mary Sue, hilariously parodied and inverted. It also doesn't change the impact of him just arriving for the monologue, at all. Does the hero need to board a train ? just have the hero/villain jump on top of the moving train/car. That's believable, right ? it can be, but that's a Mary Sue Universe.

To some degree, a Sue character has to do something that is unexplainable, or has no explanation in the universe. Sometimes, this is just parody, i.e. Austin Powers, Deadpool, etc. Other times, it's Author License, where there's no flaws in the character that affects the story going forward. Suspension of Disbelief is useful, but it's usually a character that faces all problems and wins, because the story needs them to win.

Jedi are in this "wiggle room" area of Mary Sue-dom because they don't have inherent weaknesses, they're not allowed to lose as a type of character unless they turn into a villain. And because of movie censorship, the villain has to pay a price, always.

Essentially, all heroes end up being Mary Sue characters because there's "not enough time" to show them as being regular people, but that's why good hero movies are hard to pull off if you don't build up characters that people can be willing to suspend disbelief for. it becomes a parody of a person instead of a strength to overcome the villain.

And by extension, Mary Sue can also extend to creating a wimpy villain when exposed to the Mary Sue hero. Aka holding the Idiot Ball, and other tropes, where smart people do infinitely dumb things because the hero is the only character that can move the plot formwards, right ?

Jedi OTOH, are walking plot armor. They survive until they're needed to undo the bad guys plot, pull out a Deus Ex Machina or checkov's toolkit, and win the day, keeping their friends and family alive, getting the girl/boy/tentacled alien, etc. It takes a universe destroying threat for Jedi to have a bad day where they don't immediately win. Most of this is due to the extended universe writers accommodating the YA audience / universe.

The Star Wars EU villians are worse in comparison, but the ability for even trainee jedi to survive unwinnable situations is what makes it tentative to use them in situations where you want dramatic tension.

Because, and this becomes evident/telling in the prequels, Jedi aren't supposed to lose, and when they do, they don't know how to handle defeat or subterfuge / betrayal, because everyone that they've ever fought with, has been on their side before.

Japanese Anime/ Manga characters regularly try to talk and walk that fine line between "god mode" and human being, and sometimes they pull it off. Examples like, One-Punch Man, who just wins every fight, to the point where he's using the moon as a springpad to jump back to earth to get back into the fight, because. He. has. to.

And, there's no ramp there. In every other facet of his life, he's depressingly unspectacular. And, that's part of a compelling story in some degree, because when he doesn't fight, he's wholly tragic.

There's also a few types of Sue's. One is the perfect character, easily seen as the hero. more often, they're really the villain for every other character, because they cannot be defeated. Author fantasy contrives these perfect characters (Bella Swan, Princesses, etc.)

Another is the reality warping character that changes other people to do what they want. Even the villains. (this is the jedi in a nutshell, and emperor palpatine in the prequels, etc.)

There's the character that exists solely to prevent the hero/villain from becoming too strong or unlikeable that conveniently shows up and then is never seen again, usually the foil or the romantic interest of the villain, or the seductress. Mary Sue's don't have to be the central protagonist either.

Another is the "detective" / analytical Sue, that can read other people's motives or action before they know what they're doing and formulate the required gambit, i.e. Ozymandias, Sherlock and some versions of Batman, etc, and Thrawn fit into this Gambit Mary Sue.

Having a Good Mary Sue rather than a Poorly written Mary Sue is important to character development. As Max Landis puts it in his reviews (and ultimately the Rey = Mary Sue) thing, Heroes can be Mary Sue characters. It just takes more effort to make characters "Good" and not two-dimensional. Superman is the exceptional Gary Sue/Stu, because when he's given extraordinary ability as an infant, he's still just a farmboy that helps people out, with the ability to destroy human civilization if he so chooses on a whim. And this is (apparently) the crux of the Superman reboot(s), trying to show this moral character in an immoral / disconnected reality, because we could never trust Clark's parents to be altruistic anymore in a modern storytelling.

Which is arguably why Rey is orphaned on a planet rather than be brought up by a single parent or Alien parent, cousins, uncle's, etc. Family is no longer a sacred or pure element in cinematic story because it takes too long to show development as a character.
 

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s0denone said:
DementedSheep said:
Mary Sue gets overused because it sounds better and more "objective" than "I don't like this character".
What???

No. Mary Sue is used (perhaps in error) in an attempt to call-out a character for being out-of-place powerful, with little-to-no drawbacks, within the universe of that character.

Saying a character seems like a "Mary Sue" might well be a reason a person doesn't like that character, but it is not a direct substitute for saying that specifically, which is what you suggest.
Except I see it sued on characters who aren't particularly OP and certainly aren't unusual for protagonists all the time often while being very selective of which parts of the story they remember. If you really tried you could fit the majority of protagonist for fiction into the mary sue category. It's utterly meaningless with how it's used.
 

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DementedSheep said:
Except I see it sued on characters who aren't particularly OP and certainly aren't unusual for protagonists all the time often while being very selective of which parts of the story they remember. If you really tried you could fit the majority of protagonist for fiction into the mary sue category. It's utterly meaningless with how it's used.
Aye, the term is likely misused a lot. I wouldn't really be able to say, but I would take your word for it.

I disagree that you could fit the "majority" of protagonists as Mary(/Gary?) Sues, however. I think it is actually a quite small fraction that would actually outright qualify for the moniker.
 
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Anyway I think the problem a lot of us are making is that we are treating Rey as the main character of a standalone film. That is like judging Harry Potter as a character by only what he did in the first movie/book. There is certainly a lot about her character that needs to be expanded upon which is a good thing because it would suck if her character had nothing else but what we saw in the first movie. My main issue was the whole Mary Sue thing which is not a reliable or even worthwhile term. It is like Manic Pixie Dream girl in that sense. She is a good starting protagonist to a much longer series. Something that the Phantom Menace completely failed to have on any level.
Until there are more in the series you can only treat it as a single film, and I don't think it's wrong to do so. If they flesh her out more in the future, it won't change the first film... It might make the first film feel less stunted (I know it's just my opinion) when re-watched with the extra knowledge provided in the coming films, but that's besides the point, IMHO. You can judge films from a series as individual films.

I'm not particularly invested in the terms being used, to be clear. I thought she was "perfect to the point of being boring", and she seems to fit many of the other criteria for the term "Mary Sue". So... Why not? Convincing me that the label is wrong won't make me like her more. Only the next film giving me good reason to do so is going to achieve that.
 

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Luke: Good pilot, pulls off a shot anyone could've made.
Blind. He pulls off a shot everyone else missed blind, with little, if any, training in that particular spaceship. This shot, of course, happens to be made at the end of a long trench filled with enemy fire and Darth "Best pilot in the Galaxy" Vader. Also, his shot manages to just curve in midair at the exact moment it needs to while the computer that would tell it to do this is turned off while a Force Ghost speaks to him. And that's just in the first movie, before he is able to lift his crashed ship out of the swamp and defeat Darth Vader in a sword fight.

Rey: Phenomenal pilot, skilled martial artist, above average marksman (with no real training. Seriously, she missed twice and then nailed every Stormtrooper sent after her), Able to resist force mind jerkery and turns the tables on the uy who did it and then pull off the Mind Trick (Again, with no training) all with no real personality issues beyond not wanting to leave home. (Seriously, Luke was a hothead who tended to look before leaping and it eventually cost him his hand, while Anakin's issues with loss pretty much marched him down the dark side.)
See, the thing about Rey is she has a reason to be trained as a pilot and an experienced fighter in that she's implied to have worked on the Falcon and she lives on a world of asshole scavengers, not to mention that heavy implications that she's a former Padawan which kind of comes with a bit of training. Comparing her to Anakin in piloting skills is incredibly misrepresentative because Anakin was able to podrace despite humans supposedly not being able to, blows up a command ship at the age of like 8, and is hailed as the best pilot of the Republic whereas Rey manages to outmaneuver two TIE Fighter mooks and pull off a cool move at the end. Considering that those that are Force sensitive are naturally superior pilots, maneuvering through a ship and doing a flip at the end isn't that out there.

Beyond that, she's able to resist Kylo Ren's mental attack that we've only seen fail on Poe prior to this and she's strong with the Force. After this, she fails to use a mind trick twice before pulling it off on a brainwashed, weak-willed, Stormtrooper, which is probably the easiest target for the mind trick that's not a toddler. And again, due to the heavy, how-can-people-continually-ignore-this-part-of-the-film implications that she was trained in the Force as a child you should probably wait until we actually know anything outright conclusive about her past before you start declaring that she has no training in anything.

As for her personality, we're still talking about the woman who, when she witnesses a series of visions and, when told by tiny pirate lady that this is an important thing, she just runs the fuck away into the forest to be captured by Kylo Ren right? And, considering you're pulling character flaws for Luke and Anakin from later films in their trilogies, maybe you should give Rey more than a single film before you start in on that particular bit of criticism.

Gotta admit, she's coming off as kinda sueish here.
When you misrepresent things, you can pretty much make anyone appear sueish or not sueish.
But I'm not misrepresenting things. Luke made that shot blind yes, at Obi Wan's insistence. Making a good shot is still leagues below resisting mind ripping (Which I'm willing to buy, other series showed it's possible for non-force sensitives to do so) and then turning it around on their interrogator (Which is where the line is crossed for me). And while she did fail the mind trick the first two times, she STILL got it to work without any training, while Luke couldn't use it until three movies in.

Also, Luke and Anakin's flaws were readily apparent from their first movies. Luke and Han were told to stay in the control room, but Luke wants to go rescue Leia which leads to the entire group getting in so many tight spots it's rediculous, while Anakin was willing to give up freedom because he couldn't leave his mother behind. Though granted, expecting a 9 year old to be willing to do so is a massive stretch, It still shows signs of issues to come.

Rey though? All we see as far as flaws go is that she wants to stay on that planet of sand and junk for reasons that aren't even given any DETAIL until nearly the third act, and running away when the lightsaber starts acting up which isn't so much a flaw as it is something anyone genre savvy with Star Wars would do. (Seriously, I'm not up on my old EU, but I have NEVER heard of lightsabers pulling crap like that.)
 

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DementedSheep said:
Mary Sue gets overused because it sounds better and more "objective" than "I don't like this character".
Any amount of descriptive criticism sounds better than "I don't like this"

Mary Sue gets used if the person thinks they are a Mary Sue
 

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Metalix Knightmare said:
Luke: Good pilot, pulls off a shot anyone could've made.
Blind. He pulls off a shot everyone else missed blind, with little, if any, training in that particular spaceship. This shot, of course, happens to be made at the end of a long trench filled with enemy fire and Darth "Best pilot in the Galaxy" Vader. Also, his shot manages to just curve in midair at the exact moment it needs to while the computer that would tell it to do this is turned off while a Force Ghost speaks to him. And that's just in the first movie, before he is able to lift his crashed ship out of the swamp and defeat Darth Vader in a sword fight.

Rey: Phenomenal pilot, skilled martial artist, above average marksman (with no real training. Seriously, she missed twice and then nailed every Stormtrooper sent after her), Able to resist force mind jerkery and turns the tables on the uy who did it and then pull off the Mind Trick (Again, with no training) all with no real personality issues beyond not wanting to leave home. (Seriously, Luke was a hothead who tended to look before leaping and it eventually cost him his hand, while Anakin's issues with loss pretty much marched him down the dark side.)
See, the thing about Rey is she has a reason to be trained as a pilot and an experienced fighter in that she's implied to have worked on the Falcon and she lives on a world of asshole scavengers, not to mention that heavy implications that she's a former Padawan which kind of comes with a bit of training. Comparing her to Anakin in piloting skills is incredibly misrepresentative because Anakin was able to podrace despite humans supposedly not being able to, blows up a command ship at the age of like 8, and is hailed as the best pilot of the Republic whereas Rey manages to outmaneuver two TIE Fighter mooks and pull off a cool move at the end. Considering that those that are Force sensitive are naturally superior pilots, maneuvering through a ship and doing a flip at the end isn't that out there.

Beyond that, she's able to resist Kylo Ren's mental attack that we've only seen fail on Poe prior to this and she's strong with the Force. After this, she fails to use a mind trick twice before pulling it off on a brainwashed, weak-willed, Stormtrooper, which is probably the easiest target for the mind trick that's not a toddler. And again, due to the heavy, how-can-people-continually-ignore-this-part-of-the-film implications that she was trained in the Force as a child you should probably wait until we actually know anything outright conclusive about her past before you start declaring that she has no training in anything.

As for her personality, we're still talking about the woman who, when she witnesses a series of visions and, when told by tiny pirate lady that this is an important thing, she just runs the fuck away into the forest to be captured by Kylo Ren right? And, considering you're pulling character flaws for Luke and Anakin from later films in their trilogies, maybe you should give Rey more than a single film before you start in on that particular bit of criticism.

Gotta admit, she's coming off as kinda sueish here.
When you misrepresent things, you can pretty much make anyone appear sueish or not sueish.
Concerning Proton Torpedoes, originally in the script he was supposed to hit the thing dead on rather than going over, but the director realized that wouldn't really work for the trench run scene, and so changed it so the Proton torpedoes worked more like conventional bombs, indeed, if you slow the frames in question down you see that the animation is a very rough parabolic arc. The targeting computer animation from the missed torpedoes also bears this theory out.
I always figured it was some kind of magnetic thing that drew the torpedo in, or that it has it's own internal propulsion, and just, you know made a turn based on targeting data. Hell we can do that with missles today, and could do that back in the 70s too I believe.
 

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Gengisgame said:
DementedSheep said:
Mary Sue gets overused because it sounds better and more "objective" than "I don't like this character".
Any amount of descriptive criticism sounds better than "I don't like this"

Mary Sue gets used if the person thinks they are a Mary Sue
No shit, any criticism sounds better than "I don't like the character". That's why people pretend it's about something else.
 

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DementedSheep said:
Gengisgame said:
DementedSheep said:
Mary Sue gets overused because it sounds better and more "objective" than "I don't like this character".
Any amount of descriptive criticism sounds better than "I don't like this"

Mary Sue gets used if the person thinks they are a Mary Sue
No shit, any criticism sounds better than "I don't like the character". That's why people pretend it's about something else.
I would disagree, when the criticisms are lame and not very well thought out, and also, frequently just incorrect, just saying "Eh, I just didn't like her character" would be far more palatable to most people.

For example: I like Rey's character, but I don't have to provide a breakdown of why. Someone else can equally say "I didn't like Rey" and that's perfectly fine. They don't have to justify that statement if they don't want to. But once they do provide a reason, that's open to debate/analysis. It's not an attempt to say "No, see you should like the character because your reasons are wrong." It's simply a "The reasons you state for her being a bad character aren't accurate, based on what was shown/etc, so your reasoning is flawed."
 

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No shit, any criticism sounds better than "I don't like the character". That's why people pretend it's about something else.
Why is it inherently wrong or dumb to say "I don't like the character"? There are many, many characters that I don't like from all kinds of literature, movies and the like. I certainly have my reasons for disliking every single one and sometimes, though not particularly frequently I think, that reason could be because they are a "Mary/Gary Sue". Me saying "That character is a Mary Sue and therefore quite fucking boring" isn't pretending anything else.

What character are you so invested in that you cannot for the life of you understand why people wouldn't like it?
 

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s0denone said:
DementedSheep said:
No shit, any criticism sounds better than "I don't like the character". That's why people pretend it's about something else.
Why is it inherently wrong or dumb to say "I don't like the character"? There are many, many characters that I don't like from all kinds of literature, movies and the like. I certainly have my reasons for disliking every single one and sometimes, though not particularly frequently I think, that reason could be because they are a "Mary/Gary Sue". Me saying "That character is a Mary Sue and therefore quite fucking boring" isn't pretending anything else.
This is the part you seem to be completely missing. It regularly gets applied to characters who are not Mary Sues and is so broad as to meaningless.
s0denone said:
What character are you so invested in that you cannot for the life of you understand why people wouldn't like it?
Not liking a character is fine, there are plenty of reasons to not like a character. It could simply be you dislike their personality and there is nothing wrong with that. Pulling the sue card to pretend the character is objectively bad and talking like the author has committed a cardinal sin of writing is not fine.